Part 1
Examinador
Do you like reading?
Candidato
Yes, of course, 'cause just from my perspective it's the only thing. Can I waste my time and rather than that makes me feel so guilty.
Examinador
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Candidato
Well, I always prefer to read on a screen, not just because it's so convenient, but also I can search for article into ChatGPT to let it construct the whole article and then I can read it soon.
Examinador
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Candidato
Uh, just all depends on the situation. Why won't you learn some writing techniques or some skills? I'll write, I'll read. It's more slow if I just want to know the whole thing, so I will read more soon. OK.
Examinador
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Candidato
Well it's all depends on the search on the emotions like whilst the horizon. I will scroll the the whole article, but if I have spare time then I'll create more detail.
Do you like reading?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: 回答缺乏条理与清晰表达。用简洁明确的主题句直接回答问题,避免模糊或矛盾的表述,并补充1–2个具体理由或例子。注意语法与用词(例如不要用口语缩写且注意时态、代词搭配)。建议练习将答案控制在3–4句内:第一句直接回答,接着用连接词给出具体理由,再做简短总结。
Ejemplo: Yes, I do like reading. I enjoy it because it helps me relax and learn new things. For example, I often read short articles about technology to keep up with trends. Overall, reading is both enjoyable and useful for me.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答方向明确,但表达有些混乱与不自然。应更准确地说明理由并用恰当连接词(for example, because, so)组织句子。避免不准确的说法(如讓ChatGPT“构建整篇文章”不太合适)。建议给出一到两个具体原因并举简单例子。
Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it is very convenient and portable. For example, I can quickly search for articles online and highlight or save important parts. This makes studying and revising much easier for me.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Puntuación: 42.0Sugerencia: 回答不够直接且缺乏具体细节。应先用一句话明确区分需要细读和可以略读的情况,再用连接词给出原因与例子。避免无关或模糊的句子。练习将答案控制在3–4句内,提升逻辑性。
Ejemplo: It depends on the purpose. If I need to understand or remember something important, like a study article or instructions, I read carefully and take notes. But if I just want a general idea, I skim the text to save time.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 表达含糊且不自然,逻辑不清。应直接表明偏好并用连接词说明原因,提供明确例子(什么时候会快速浏览,什么时候会细读)。注意语法、词序和词汇选择(例如 use 'scan' or 'skim' and 'read in detail')。
Ejemplo: Generally I prefer scanning when I'm short on time because it helps me find the main points quickly. However, if an article is important or interesting, I will read it in detail and take notes to fully understand it.
× Yes, of course, 'cause just from my perspective it's the only thing. Can I waste my time and rather than that makes me feel so guilty.
✓ Yes, of course. From my perspective it's the only thing I would rather do than waste my time, because wasting time makes me feel so guilty.
原句句子结构混乱,存在口语缩略('cause)、并列关系不清和多余短语。建议把句子拆成两部分:第一句给出肯定,第二句表达比较和原因。把“rather than that makes me feel so guilty”改为“I would rather do than waste my time, because wasting time makes me feel so guilty”使逻辑和语法清晰。用完整句代替口语缩略,便于正式表达。
× Well, I always prefer to read on a screen, not just because it's so convenient, but also I can search for article into ChatGPT to let it construct the whole article and then I can read it soon.
✓ Well, I always prefer to read on a screen, not just because it's so convenient, but also because I can search for articles with ChatGPT and ask it to generate a full article, which I can then read immediately.
原句中“search for article into ChatGPT”中介词使用错误,应使用“search for ... with/using”或“search ... in”。且“article”应为可数复数“articles”,并且短语“let it construct the whole article”不自然,改为“ask it to generate a full article”。同时将“soon”改为“immediately/then”更合适。
× Uh, just all depends on the situation. Why won't you learn some writing techniques or some skills? I'll write, I'll read. It's more slow if I just want to know the whole thing, so I will read more soon. OK.
✓ Uh, it all depends on the situation. If I need to learn writing techniques or skills, I'll study and read carefully. If I just want to get the gist, I'll read more quickly. If I have more time, I'll read in more detail.
原句含义混乱、时态和句子结构错误。“just all depends”应为“it all depends”;“Why won't you learn...”与语境不符,应改为条件句或说明意图。用明确的条件(需要学习技能/只想了解大意/有时间)分别说明对应的阅读方式,保持时态一致并使用自然表达。
× Well it's all depends on the search on the emotions like whilst the horizon. I will scroll the the whole article, but if I have spare time then I'll create more detail.
✓ Well, it all depends on what I'm looking for and my mood. I will scroll through the whole article, but if I have spare time I will read it in more detail.
原句“all depends on the search on the emotions like whilst the horizon”是错误和不自然的介词与短语搭配,应改为“depends on what I'm looking for and my mood”。“scroll the the whole article”中有重复the且介词错误,应为“scroll through the whole article”。“create more detail”用词不当,应为“read in more detail”或“go into more detail”。注意去掉多余的重复词并使用正确介词短语。