Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct, start with a clear topic sentence, and avoid redundancy. Use one or two supporting details with correct verb forms and narrowed vocabulary (e.g., 'detective novels').

Ejemplo: I usually enjoy reading, although it depends on my mood. For example, when I want to relax I often read novels, especially detective novels, because I like solving puzzles in the plot.

Sugerencia: Give a concise direct answer, correct common errors (word order, comparative forms), and provide one clear reason using linking words. Avoid colloquial phrasing like 'way much more easier.'

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper, although I sometimes use a screen. I find paper easier on my eyes and I also enjoy the smell and feel of a new book, which makes reading more pleasant for me.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and briefly then give a specific example. Fix repetition and phrasing; avoid absolute statements conflicting with question's contrast. Use linking words such as 'especially' or 'however'.

Ejemplo: I usually read carefully when accuracy matters. For instance, I read very carefully when preparing for exams because I need to understand every word and avoid mistakes, but I read more casually when browsing news or social media.

Sugerencia: Give a clear present-tense preference, correct phrases ('detailed reading' not 'tale trading'), and include a reason with a linking word. Remove hesitation and be specific about what details you enjoy.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I enjoy discovering interesting facts and subtle details. For example, when I read a newspaper article I like to analyze the arguments and background information rather than just scanning for headlines.

× I think it depends on my mood but usually I do like reading and sometimes I love read novels or any detectives book.

✓ I think it depends on my mood, but usually I do like reading and sometimes I love reading novels or any detective books.

The verb 'love' must be followed by the -ing form when referring to activities: 'love reading' not 'love read' (Grammar Problem Type 8). Also 'detectives book' is incorrect: use the adjective 'detective' and plural 'books' to match 'any' (Grammar Problem Type 1). Suggestion: use 'love reading novels or any detective books.'

× Actually I enjoy both variants but usually I read on paper. I find it way much more easier for my eyes and I love the smelling of new book.

✓ Actually I enjoy both options but usually I read on paper. I find it much easier on my eyes and I love the smell of a new book.

'Variants' is awkward; 'options' is better. 'Way much more easier' is incorrect redundancy: use 'much easier' (Grammar Problem Type 14 and 13). 'For my eyes' should be 'on my eyes' or better 'easier on my eyes' (Grammar Problem Type 11). 'The smelling of new book' is incorrect: use noun 'smell' and include an article 'a new book' (Grammar Problem Type 13 and 22). Suggestion: simplify to 'I find it much easier on my eyes and I love the smell of a new book.'

× It is important to read carefully every time, but especially when you are preparing for examination, I think it's important to keep every word.

✓ It is important to read carefully every time, but especially when you are preparing for an examination; I think it's important to remember every word.

'Preparing for examination' needs an article: 'an examination' (Grammar Problem Type 17/22). 'Keep every word' is awkward phrasing; use 'remember every word' for clarity (Grammar Problem Type 26). Suggestion: use articles and choose verbs that convey intended meaning: 'remember' not 'keep.'

× I enjoyed tale trading more because finding out interesting things and details, uh, in the books or any newspapers is really fascinating.

✓ I enjoy tale-telling more because finding interesting things and details in books or newspapers is really fascinating.

The student used past tense 'enjoyed' while speaking about a general preference; present simple 'enjoy' is correct (Grammar Problem Type 6). 'Tale trading' is incorrect phrase; likely 'tale-telling' or 'storytelling' (Grammar Problem Type 26). 'Finding out interesting things' is wordy—'finding interesting things' is preferred. Also 'any newspapers' should be 'newspapers' without 'any' here (Grammar Problem Type 14). Suggestion: use present tense for habits and choose standard collocations: 'I enjoy storytelling more because finding interesting details in books or newspapers is fascinating.'