Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid incorrect or awkward phrases, reduce repetition, and limit to about 2–4 sentences. Use correct collocations (e.g., "I didn't use to enjoy reading," "reading helps me improve my vocabulary"). Add one specific example to support your point.

Ejemplo: I didn't use to enjoy reading because I found it boring, but now I really like it. Reading helps me improve my vocabulary and gain new ideas; for example, I recently read a book about psychology that taught me useful ways to manage stress.

Sugerencia: Be concise and use linking words correctly. Start with a clear preference sentence, give two brief reasons with linking words (firstly/secondly or because/also), and include a short example. Avoid redundant intensifiers like "really very."

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it's easier to concentrate and less tiring for my eyes. For example, after reading printed books I don't get headaches as I do after long sessions on my phone.

Sugerencia: Provide a focused answer that distinguishes situations needing careful reading from those that don’t. Begin with a topic sentence, then give 2 specific examples using linking words (for instance/however). Avoid vague phrases like "and so on" and correct word choice ("knowledgeable" → "knowledge").

Ejemplo: You should read carefully when the information affects important decisions, for instance contracts or medical advice. However, for light material like news headlines or social media posts, scanning is usually enough.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid repetition. State your preference in one sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words (because/so) and a short example. Use correct adjectives ("detailed reading" or "reading in detail") and avoid incorrect phrases like "useful and health" (useful and healthy).

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I want to fully understand the ideas and remember them for later. For example, when I study for exams I read chapters carefully, take notes, and review difficult sections to ensure I grasp the concepts.

× Honestly, in the past I wasn't like greed because I think that it's really boring, but now I really like it because I think that's reading a books is a really good instrument for improve yourself, do a greater vocabulary and be a smartest person.

✓ Honestly, in the past I didn't like reading because I thought it was really boring, but now I really like it because I think that reading books is a really good way to improve yourself, build a larger vocabulary and become a smarter person.

Multiple adjective/adverb and word-choice errors: 'wasn't like greed' is incorrect word choice and form — use 'didn't like reading'. 'I think that's reading a books' mixes words and articles incorrectly — use 'I think that reading books'. 'a really good instrument for improve yourself' uses wrong adjective and verb forms — use 'a really good way to improve yourself'. 'do a greater vocabulary' uses wrong verb and adjective — use 'build a larger vocabulary'. 'be a smartest person' misuses article with superlative and verb form — use 'become a smarter person'. Suggestions: choose correct verbs (didn't like), use 'reading' as a gerund after like, use plural 'books' without extra article, use 'way' instead of 'instrument' for this context, use 'improve' with 'to' or base form after 'way to', and use 'become' with 'a smarter person'.

× Of course, I prefer reading on the paper because I think that it's really very easy firstly, and secondly I think that is really very healthy and useful because when we read on the screen, it's harmful for our eyes, for example.

✓ Of course, I prefer reading on paper because I think that it is easier, and secondly I think that it is healthier and more useful because reading on a screen can be harmful to our eyes.

Article and adjective errors: 'on the paper' is incorrect — use 'on paper' (no article). Redundant modifiers 'really very' should be simplified to 'easier' and 'healthier'. 'I think that is' lacks a subject — include 'it'. 'when we read on the screen, it's harmful for our eyes' is better as 'reading on a screen can be harmful to our eyes' for clarity and correct preposition ('to' eyes). Suggestions: omit unnecessary articles with uncountable nouns like 'paper', avoid duplicated modifiers, include subjects, and use 'harmful to' not 'harmful for'.

× I think that we always should read carefully, because when we read carefully, we improve our knowledgeable and improve ourselves, our mind and so on.

✓ I think that we should always read carefully, because when we read carefully, we improve our knowledge and develop our minds and ourselves.

Modal placement and word choice errors: 'we always should' has awkward word order — place adverb after modal: 'should always'. 'improve our knowledgeable' is incorrect noun form — use 'knowledge'. 'improve ourselves, our mind' is repetitive and uses singular 'mind' awkwardly — use 'develop our minds and ourselves'. Suggestions: put adverbs in standard position with modals, use correct noun forms, and avoid repetition by grouping related ideas concisely.

× If I say it about myself, I really like reading detailed when I really understand all of this text, and I really like read a book when I understand absolutely all information in this text because I think that it's really useful and health.

✓ If I speak about myself, I really like reading in detail when I fully understand a text, and I really like to read a book when I understand absolutely all the information in it because I think that it is really useful and healthy.

Incorrect gerund/infinitive and adjective/adverb forms: 'reading detailed' should be 'reading in detail' or 'detailed reading'; 'If I say it about myself' is unnatural — use 'If I speak about myself'. 'I really like read a book' needs infinitive 'to read'. 'all information in this text' needs article 'the' and 'in it' for clarity. 'really useful and health' uses adjective 'health' incorrectly — should be 'healthy'. Suggestions: use correct verb patterns (like + gerund or like to + infinitive), use idiomatic phrases ('in detail'), include articles, and use correct adjective forms.