Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and avoid hesitations and repetitions. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Use smoother phrasing and reduce filler words (e.g., "yeah", "I don't think").

Ejemplo: I enjoy reading, especially medical books, because they are essential for my studies. However, when I want to relax I rarely read and usually watch Netflix instead.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference for each context using linking words and correct small errors. Avoid repeating words and include a concise reason for each preference.

Ejemplo: For studying, I prefer screens because I can take notes digitally and search terms quickly. For novels, I prefer paper since it feels more immersive and easier on my eyes.

Sugerencia: Remove fillers and correct repetition. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then briefly explain reasons with linking words (e.g., "because", "whereas"). Be specific about what "read carefully" means (e.g., taking notes, analyzing).

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when studying because I must understand complex concepts and often take notes. In contrast, I skim novels for enjoyment and do not analyze every detail.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and structure the answer: state your overall preference by context, then give concise reasons using linking words. Use correct collocations ("read in detail", "skim a book").

Ejemplo: For study materials I read in detail because I must understand and remember facts. For novels I usually skim or read quickly since I read them mainly for pleasure.

× it's a mandatory for US medical schools.

✓ it's mandatory for US medical schools.

Use of indefinite article 'a' before the adjective 'mandatory' is incorrect because 'mandatory' here functions as an adjective not a countable noun. Remove 'a' to form the correct adjective phrase 'it's mandatory'. Suggestion: Say 'it's mandatory' or 'it is a requirement'. Replace 'a mandatory' with 'mandatory' or 'a requirement'.

× But when I'm bored I don't think I read a lot.

✓ But when I'm bored I don't read much.

The phrase 'don't think I read a lot' is awkward and mixes reporting thought with habitual action. Use present simple negative 'don't read much' to express habitual tendency. Also 'a lot' is colloquial; 'much' fits negative sentences better. Suggestion: Use 'I don't read much' for habitual negative statements.

× I prefer using screens because I could write note beside beside them.

✓ I prefer using screens because I can write notes beside them.

Modal/past form 'could' is inconsistent with general preference; use 'can' for ability. 'Note' should be plural 'notes' and 'beside beside' is a repetition; use a single 'beside' or better 'next to'. Suggestion: 'I prefer using screens because I can write notes next to them.'

× But in terms of reading like novels, I prefer to read it to read it on paper.

✓ But for reading novels, I prefer to read them on paper.

Pronoun 'it' is incorrect for plural 'novels'; use 'them'. Also remove redundancy 'to read it to read it'. Suggestion: Use 'for reading novels' and 'read them on paper'.

× Of course, when I'm studying, I need to read it carefully.

✓ Of course, when I'm studying, I need to read carefully.

The object pronoun 'it' is unnecessary because 'read carefully' already applies to the activity of studying. Removing 'it' makes the sentence natural. Suggestion: Omit redundant pronouns when the object is understood.

× Umm, because yeah, it it the the goal is for me to understand the topic.

✓ Umm, because the goal is for me to understand the topic.

This sentence contains repeated words 'it it the the' and an unnecessary 'because' at the start of a clause. Remove duplicates and the extraneous 'because' to form a clear clause 'the goal is for me to understand the topic'. Suggestion: Avoid fillers and repetitions; say 'the goal is to understand the topic' for conciseness.

× But for novels, I don't think I need to read it carefully because it is just for pleasure.

✓ But for novels, I don't need to read them carefully because they are just for pleasure.

Use plural pronouns 'them' and 'they' to match 'novels'. Also 'I don't think I need to' is wordy; 'I don't need to' is sufficient for preference statements. Suggestion: Match pronoun number with the noun and simplify phrasing.

× In terms of studying medical, studying in medical schools, I need to read detailed, I need to read it, I need to read it in detail.

✓ When studying medicine in medical school, I need to read in detail.

Redundant phrases and incorrect noun forms ('studying medical' should be 'studying medicine' or 'studying in medical school'). 'Read detailed' is incorrect; use adverbial form 'read in detail' or 'read in a detailed way'. Remove repetitive clauses. Suggestion: Use concise structure: 'When studying medicine in medical school, I need to read in detail.'

× But for reading novels, I just skim it because I do it for a pleasure.

✓ But when reading novels, I just skim them because I do it for pleasure.

Pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to match 'novels'. 'For a pleasure' is incorrect article use; use 'for pleasure' without an article. The phrase 'do it for pleasure' is acceptable but ensure pronoun agreement. Suggestion: 'When reading novels, I just skim them because I do it for pleasure.'