Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer communicates the main idea but has grammatical errors, redundancy and awkward phrasing. Keep responses concise (max 5 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "all that stuff" and incorrect words such as "every treater."

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. I like a wide range of books, from fiction and religion to history, but I mostly read historical books because I am fascinated by the past. For example, I recently read a biography about a 19th-century leader, which helped me understand how events shaped my country.

Sugerencia: Your preference is clear but the answer repeats ideas and contains grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Use a direct topic sentence, then provide one clear reason with a specific example. Avoid repeating words and unclear references (e.g., "run Jindakar").

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen. I find printed pages easier on my eyes and more comfortable for long reading sessions; for instance, I recently finished a historical novel in print and appreciated being able to annotate the margins.

Sugerencia: Good content idea but the answer is repetitive and has grammatical errors and hesitations. Structure your response: state when careful reading is necessary, give a specific example, then state when casual reading is acceptable with a short example. Use linking words like "because" and "however."

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when I'm studying or researching, because accuracy is important for assignments and citations. For example, I review journal articles slowly to note key arguments. However, in the evenings I often read light fiction to relax and skim rather than analyse closely.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains awkward phrasing and redundancy. Begin with a clear statement of preference (or a balanced answer), then use linking words to explain situations for detailed reading versus scanning, with specific examples. Avoid filler words like "just" and unclear phrasing such as "give more stress."

Ejemplo: It depends on the purpose: I use detailed reading for university research and assignments because I need to understand arguments and take notes. Conversely, when I read for pleasure, I often scan or skim to get the main idea quickly, such as when browsing short stories or articles online.

× Being a every treater I love to explore different kind of books ranging from fiction to non fiction, religious, historical but most of the times I prefer to read the historical books because I love history and because it gives me a knowledge about the past and all that stuff.

✓ Being a frequent reader, I love to explore different kinds of books ranging from fiction to non-fiction, religious, and historical, but most of the time I prefer to read historical books because I love history and because they give me knowledge about the past and related topics.

Errors: 'a every treater' uses incorrect article and words; should be 'a frequent reader' (article + correct noun). 'different kind of books' should be 'different kinds of books' (plural form). 'non fiction' should be hyphenated 'non-fiction'. 'most of the times' should be 'most of the time' (article and singular time expression). 'the historical books' unnecessary definite article; use 'historical books'. 'it gives me a knowledge' wrong pronoun and article; use 'they give me knowledge'. Suggestions: use correct articles ('a' before singular countable), pluralize where needed, avoid unnecessary 'the', and match pronouns to plural nouns.

× I still stick to the papers over the screen.

✓ I still stick to paper rather than the screen.

Error: 'stick to the papers over the screen' uses wrong preposition and article. Use 'stick to' with a noun without plural when speaking generally: 'stick to paper'. To compare choices, use 'rather than' or 'instead of'. Also 'the screen' is appropriate when contrasting a general screen. Suggestion: use 'paper' for the medium in general and 'rather than' for contrast.

× I know modernization changes everything, but my values don't give me the permission to switch to the screen most of the times.

✓ I know modernization changes everything, but my values don't give me permission to switch to the screen most of the time.

Errors: 'give me the permission' uses an unnecessary definite article; use 'give me permission'. 'most of the times' is incorrect; use 'most of the time'. Suggestion: drop 'the' before 'permission' and use the correct time expression.

× I love to read read on the on a paper.

✓ I love to read on paper.

Errors: duplicate word 'read read', extra words 'the on a' create ungrammatical sequence. Simplify to 'I love to read on paper.' Suggestion: remove duplicates and unnecessary articles when speaking about a medium generally.

× Last time I read a book run Jindakar.

✓ Last time I read a book called Jindakar.

Errors: 'run' is incorrect word choice, likely intended 'run' -> 'called' or 'named'. Also missing article may be fine with 'a book called'. Suggestion: use 'called' or 'titled' when naming a book.

× OK, there are many reasons where I need to be careful while reading, such as I am exploring my academic stuff and some I'm searching about something important to me.

✓ OK, there are many situations when I need to be careful while reading, such as when I am studying academic material or when I am searching for something important to me.

Errors: 'reasons where' should be 'situations when' or 'reasons why'. 'my academic stuff' is informal and vague; 'academic material' is better. 'and some I'm searching about something' is ungrammatical; use parallel structure: 'or when I am searching for something important to me.' Suggestion: use 'when' for time/situations, maintain parallel clauses, and use 'searching for' (preposition use).

× But on the other hand, I sometimes I just read in the evenings to just relax my mind at that time.

✓ But on the other hand, sometimes I just read in the evenings to relax my mind.

Errors: duplicate 'I' and duplicated 'just' are redundant; 'at that time' is unnecessary. Adverb placement should be concise: 'sometimes I just read in the evenings to relax my mind.' Suggestion: remove redundancy and unnecessary time phrase.

× I think it's fine if I am not, uh, careful while searching while.

✓ I think it's fine if I am not careful when I am just browsing.

Errors: trailing 'while' and filler 'uh' break sentence; 'searching while' is ungrammatical. Use 'when I am just browsing' or 'when I am just reading for pleasure.' Suggestion: replace vague 'searching' with 'browsing' and remove filler words.

× As I already mentioned above that I need to give more stress like detailed reading for my universities research and my schoolwork.

✓ As I already mentioned above, I need to give more attention and do detailed reading for my university research and my schoolwork.

Errors: 'give more stress like detailed reading' is unnatural; use 'give more attention and do detailed reading' or 'give more emphasis to detailed reading.' 'universities research' wrong possessive/plural; should be 'university research.' Suggestions: use 'attention' or 'emphasis', correct noun form 'university'.

× But on the other hand I am just if I am reading just for enjoying.

✓ But on the other hand, if I am reading just for enjoyment, I am fine with skimming.

Errors: 'I am just if I am' word order is incorrect. 'for enjoying' is wrong; use 'for enjoyment' or 'to enjoy myself.' Suggestion: use proper clause order 'if I am reading for enjoyment' and use 'enjoyment' as noun.

× I think that would be fine if I am just scanning this stuff.

✓ I think that is fine if I am just scanning this material.

Errors: 'would be' shifts tense unnecessarily; context is general, so 'is fine' is better. 'this stuff' is informal; 'this material' or 'these texts' preferred. Suggestion: keep tense consistent with general statements and choose more formal noun than 'stuff.'