Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (tenses, articles), and avoid repetition. Use linking words to list types of reading and give a brief reason or example. Keep to a maximum of 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. In my free time I usually read novels, non-fiction documentaries, or light, humorous books because they help me relax and learn new things.

Sugerencia: Give a concise, well-structured answer: state preference clearly, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct small grammar errors (e.g. 'sometimes').

Ejemplo: I like both, but if I had to choose I'd prefer paper for novels because it's easier on my eyes; however, I often use a screen for articles and research since it's more convenient.

Sugerencia: Use a clear topic sentence and then contrast the two situations with linking words (e.g. 'when' / 'but'). Correct grammar (articles, verb forms) and keep sentences concise. Add one specific detail about study methods or types of leisure reading to enrich the answer.

Ejemplo: I read carefully when exams are approaching because I need to understand and remember key concepts, so I make summaries and review notes. By contrast, in my free time I read novels and humorous stories to relax and unwind.

Sugerencia: Be clear and use the correct term ('detailed reading'). Start with a topic sentence stating your preference, then give a reason and a brief example. Avoid unclear phrases like 'child reading'. Watch grammar and word choice.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the material; for example, when studying I read slowly and take notes to remember facts and arguments.

× Whenever I got leisure time I used to read new books like novels, also some documentaries or also some funny or fascinated books.

✓ Whenever I have leisure time, I read new books such as novels, documentaries, or amusing books.

The original uses 'got' which is simple past; the context is habitual present so present tense 'have' is correct (Problem Type 9: past participle form flagged because 'got' often confuses past/past participle). Also 'used to' implies a past habit and is incorrect here. Replaced 'like' with 'such as' and 'funny or fascinated' with 'amusing' for natural adjective use. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and choose appropriate adjectives. (Grammar problem type ID:9)

× I prefer both of both of them because sometime I need to read on paper and also sometime I need to read via screen.

✓ I prefer both because sometimes I need to read on paper and other times I need to read on a screen.

The sentence shows incorrect repetition and inconsistent tense/word forms. Use present simple 'prefer' for a general preference. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb). 'Both of both of them' is redundant; use 'both'. Use 'other times' to contrast occasions and 'on a screen' is the usual phrase. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use correct adverb forms and articles. (Grammar problem type ID:6)

× When my exams are near, that time I read carefully to the all the subjects.

✓ When my exams are near, I read all the subjects carefully.

The original mixes tenses and includes unnecessary phrases 'that time' and incorrect preposition 'to' and article 'the'. Use present simple 'are' for exams being near and present simple 'read' for habitual action. Place adverb 'carefully' after the object. Remove 'to' and 'the' before 'all the subjects'. Suggestion: keep sentence order Subject + Verb + Object + Adverb for clarity. (Grammar problem type ID:5)

× I prepare really well that time.

✓ I prepare really well at that time.

The original omits the preposition 'at' to indicate a time period. Use present simple 'prepare' for habitual action when exams are near. Add 'at' to say 'at that time' or better: 'during that time'. Suggestion: include correct time prepositions. (Grammar problem type ID:5)

× And when I got a leisure time, that time I read novels and funny story books.

✓ And when I have leisure time, I read novels and humorous storybooks.

Again 'got' is past tense; context is habitual present so use 'have'. Remove redundant 'that time'. Use 'humorous' or 'amusing' instead of 'funny' and combine 'story books' into 'storybooks' or 'story books'. Suggestion: use present simple for habits and avoid redundancy. (Grammar problem type ID:9)

× So that time I did really, really relax.

✓ So at that time I really relax.

The original uses past auxiliary 'did' plus base verb which is awkward and inconsistent with habitual present. Use present simple 'relax' for habitual action and place adverb 'really' before the verb. Alternatively, say 'I really relax then.' Suggestion: avoid unnecessary 'did' when describing habitual states. (Grammar problem type ID:5)

× I prefer detailing because it's very helpful for me.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it's very helpful for me.

'Detailing' is a verb form and unnatural here. The noun phrase should be 'detailed reading' or 'reading in detail'. Use adjective 'detailed' to modify 'reading'. Suggestion: use 'detailed reading' or 'reading in detail' to express preference. (Grammar problem type ID:13)

× It's contained all the details about the things we are reading, so I prefer the child reading.

✓ It contains all the details about what we are reading, so I prefer detailed reading.

'It's contained' is incorrect verb form; use 'it contains'. 'About the things we are reading' is wordy; use 'about what we are reading'. 'I prefer the child reading' is nonsensical—likely meant 'detailed reading'. Correct pronoun and noun choices. Suggestion: use active verb forms and clear nouns to convey meaning. (Grammar problem type ID:12)