Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (umm, uh), use correct tense and subject-verb agreement, and give one specific supporting detail with a linking phrase. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. For example, I often read news articles and short stories, which helps me learn new words and improve my English fluency. As a result, I feel more confident when reading and speaking.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer, remove repetition and filler sounds, and provide one specific reason with a linking phrase. Use correct vocabulary (phone instead of handphone) and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen. Because digital books and apps are on my phone, I can access them anywhere and at any time, which is very convenient.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and simplify the explanation. Use linking words (because, so) and give one specific example of what you check when reading carefully. Avoid repetition and filler words.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully during exams because I must understand the question requirements and choose the correct answers. For example, I always look for keywords like 'compare' or 'describe' so I can write the appropriate response.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to explain why, and give a concise example of when you use detailed reading. Correct small grammar issues (detailed reading, keywords). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand every word and identify important keywords. For instance, when doing exam questions I read each sentence slowly to find exact instructions and avoid mistakes.

× Yeah, I really loved reading because I think I can gain umm, numerous knowledge from there and I able to uh, improve my vocabulary and umm, be more fluent in reading English especially.

✓ Yeah, I really love reading because I think I can gain a lot of knowledge from it and I am able to improve my vocabulary and become more fluent in reading English.

The student used 'loved' (past) but context is a general preference, so present simple 'love' is correct (present tense issue, ID 6). 'Numerous knowledge' is incorrect; 'knowledge' is an uncountable noun and we use quantifiers like 'a lot of' (article/quantifier issues, IDs 22 and 14). 'from there' is vague; 'from it' or 'from reading' is better (preposition/pronoun, ID 11 and 12). 'I able' lacks the auxiliary verb 'am' (sentence structure/verb form, IDs 26 and 9). 'be more fluent' should be 'become more fluent' to show change (verb form, ID 8). Suggestion: use present simple for habits, use appropriate quantifiers with uncountable nouns, include auxiliary verbs for adjective complements, and choose correct verbs for change of state.

× I prefer to read on the screen because as you know, uh, right now, digital digital, umm, digital, digital digital book already uh, in, in handphone and in apps, so I can read from my handphone, uh, everywhere and anytime.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because right now digital books are already on phones and in apps, so I can read from my phone anywhere and anytime.

Use 'a screen' or 'the screen' rather than 'the screen' repeatedly; here 'a screen' fits general preference (article error, ID 22). 'digital book already in handphone' is incorrect word order and missing plural and auxiliary: 'digital books are already on phones' (singular/plural and 'there be' with auxiliary 'are', IDs 1 and 3). 'handphone' is nonstandard; 'phone' is natural. 'from my handphone, uh, everywhere and anytime' should be 'on my phone anywhere and anytime' (preposition and adverb placement, IDs 11 and 20). Suggestion: simplify and use correct pluralization and 'be' verb for existence, use standard vocabulary.

× I think I'll need to read carefully, especially in my exam because I need to know that what the requirement that they question, uh, need and what, umm, what answer that I should give and I should write in the exam.

✓ I think I need to read carefully, especially in exams, because I need to know the requirements of the questions and what answers I should give and write in the exam.

The student used 'I'll need' which implies future necessity; since this is a habitual or immediate situation, present simple 'I need' is better (future/present tense issue, IDs 7 and 6). 'in my exam' -> 'in exams' or 'in the exam' for generality (article error, ID 22). 'know that what the requirement that they question, uh, need' is ungrammatical; correct structure is 'know the requirements of the questions' (sentence structure/error in relative clause and preposition, IDs 26 and 11). 'what answer that I should give' should be 'what answers I should give' (relative pronoun removal and plural agreement, IDs 12 and 1). Suggestion: use clear noun phrases ('requirements of the questions'), match tense to general truths, and keep pronoun and number agreement.

× And that's why I think it's really important for me to read carefully in examination.

✓ And that's why I think it's really important for me to read carefully in exams.

'in examination' is awkward; 'in examinations' or 'in an examination' is correct (article/number choice, IDs 22 and 1). Use plural 'exams' for general statements. Suggestion: choose singular with article for a specific exam ('in the exam' or 'in an exam') or plural for general practice ('in exams').

× I prefer detailed reading because I can know each, umm, each word that I should umm, for example, umm, the key answer or key keyword that I need to know.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I can understand each word I need to, for example, the key answers or key keywords I need to know.

'I can know' is incorrect; use 'I can understand' or 'I can learn' (verb choice/present participle issue, ID 10). 'each word that I should ... the key answer or key keyword' has awkward structure; simplify to 'each word I need to' (sentence structure, ID 26). 'key answer' should be plural 'key answers' if referring generally; 'keyword' is one word and may be singular or plural depending on meaning (pluralization/article, IDs 1 and 22). Suggestion: use 'understand' for comprehension, simplify relative clauses, and make nouns plural for general statements.

× And I think I love uh, I prefer detail reading.

✓ And I think I love it; I prefer detailed reading.

'I prefer detail reading' is incorrect adjective form; use 'detailed reading' (adjective form/order, IDs 13 and 18). Also include an object for 'love' if needed ('I love it') or rephrase to avoid repetition. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms ('detailed') and avoid redundant phrases.