Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitations and correct basic grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting details. Use simple past or present perfect correctly (e.g., "since childhood" or "I have read"). Replace filler words (umm, uh) with short pauses.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. I have loved books since childhood and I often read both fiction and classic literature. For example, I recently finished a novel that I really enjoyed.

Sugerencia: Be concise and avoid repetition. Give a clear reason and one supporting detail. Use linking words like "because" and "so" correctly and avoid repeating the same idea twice.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I spend most of the day looking at screens, so physical books give my eyes a rest. Also, holding a book helps me feel more connected to the story.

Sugerencia: Organize the answer with a clear contrast and reduce disfluencies. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one coherent reason for each situation. Use linking words like "when" and "but" to show contrast.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when I read articles, especially for work or study, because I must understand facts and details. But when I read novels I usually read for enjoyment, so I read more quickly and focus on the plot.

Sugerencia: Give a clear reason and avoid repetition. Use one or two supporting details connected with linking phrases like "because" or "for example." Keep sentences short and fluent.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I like to focus on characters and themes. For example, when I read a novel slowly I notice small details that make the story more meaningful.

× Yes, I like reading throughout my umm, child childhood, uh, I read a lot of books and I usually umm, read fi fictional and literature. Literature reading.

✓ Yes, I have liked reading throughout my childhood; I read a lot of books and I usually read fiction and literature.

The sentence mixes tenses and has word choice errors. 'Throughout my childhood' requires past reference, so 'have liked' or 'liked' can be used; 'have liked' connects past to present. 'Child childhood' is redundant; correct phrase is 'my childhood'. 'read fi fictional' is incorrect word choice and order — use 'read fiction and literature' and ensure consistent verb tense 'read' for habitual action. Suggestion: keep consistent present perfect or simple past depending on intended meaning (e.g., 'I have liked reading throughout my childhood' or 'I liked reading throughout my childhood').

× I prefer to read on paper because, uh, usually, uh, during the day I use a lot of screen, so I prefer to read, umm, pay on papers and I prefer to touch the books.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because usually during the day I use screens a lot, so I prefer to read on paper and I like to touch the books.

Errors include incorrect article and plural usage: 'use a lot of screen' should be 'use screens a lot' (plural noun without article). 'pay on papers' is incorrect — intended 'read on paper'. 'the books' is acceptable but 'books' without 'the' is natural when speaking generally; kept 'the books' -> 'the books' could be used if specific, but 'books' is more general. Also streamline repetition. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general references ('screens') and correct 'read on paper'.

× It helps, it helps me to connect with the book.

✓ It helps me connect with the book.

This sentence is repetitive. Use a single clause with correct verb pattern: 'helps me connect' or 'helps me to connect'. Removing the duplicate phrase improves clarity. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary repetition and use concise structure.

× When I read the article, when I read an article I want to read more carefully, and when I read a novel, umm, I actually I, I am reading more like more for for more fun.

✓ When I read an article I want to read more carefully, but when I read a novel I read more for fun.

The original has tense inconsistency and disfluencies. Use simple present to describe habitual behavior: 'I want to read' and 'I read more for fun'. Remove filler words and duplicated words. Suggestion: use parallel structure with 'when' clauses and maintain consistent verb tense for habits.

× I prefer detailed reading. When I when I am reading the the elaborately, I umm, focus more on the uh characters and the story and I feel more connected with the story.

✓ I prefer detailed reading. When I am reading elaborately, I focus more on the characters and the story, and I feel more connected to the story.

Problems: duplicated words and awkward phrase 'the the elaborately'. 'Reading elaborately' is unusual; if meaning reading in detail use 'reading in detail' or keep 'detailed reading'. 'Connected with' is acceptable but 'connected to' is more common. Also remove filler words and duplicates. Suggestion: use 'reading in detail' or 'reading elaborately' consistently and correct preposition to 'to' or keep 'with' depending on preference.