Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be careful with grammar, article use, and redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct small errors, and make the supporting detail concise. For example, change "I do love reading" to "Yes, I love reading," remove duplicated words like "a an," and say "to find interesting or new books" to be natural and efficient.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love reading. I usually visit a bookstore at least once a month to look for interesting or new books, because I enjoy discovering different authors and genres.

Sugerencia: Improve pronunciation of key verbs, correct grammar, and organize ideas with linking words. Start with a clear statement (paper or screen), then give 1–2 specific reasons using connectors like "because" or "so." Avoid unintelligible phrases and unclear metaphors (e.g., "on the skin").

Ejemplo: I prefer to read on paper because I enjoy the physical feeling of turning pages, and I can concentrate better with a book than on a screen. For example, when I read a printed novel I rarely get distracted by notifications.

Sugerencia: Use correct verb choices and articles, and separate contrasting ideas clearly with linking words like "when" and "but." Be specific about what requires careful reading (e.g., textbooks, research papers) and what can be skimmed (e.g., news, jokes).

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when I study academic resources such as textbooks or research articles because I must understand complex information and find specific details. But I usually skim light material like fiction short stories or jokes online, since I only need the general idea.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear direct answer and use concise, grammatical sentences. Replace awkward phrases ("a person that the detail reading") with "detailed reading." Explain reasons with linking words like "because" and avoid repetition. Mention a brief example of your habit.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because if I don't understand something I tend to reread the passage several times to grasp the meaning. For instance, when I study difficult chapters I often read the same page two or three times until it makes sense.

× I do love reading. I often visit the bookstore at least once a month to find a an interesting or the new book.

✓ I do love reading. I often visit the bookstore at least once a month to find an interesting or a new book.

The sentence has incorrect use of articles: 'a an' is a typo and must be 'an' before a vowel sound; 'the new book' is wrong in this context because 'new' is indefinite here, so use 'a new book'. Use 'an interesting or a new book' to match parallel structure. Suggestion: Read sentences aloud to hear vowel sounds and choose 'a' or 'an' accordingly; use 'a' for non-specific singular nouns and 'the' for specific ones.

× I prefer to lead on the paper because I love the feeling when I turn the page of the book and I have more concentrate when I read on a book I'm reading on the skin. Make me just calling it up and down sometimes so it's don't make me.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because I love the feeling when I turn the pages of a book and I can concentrate more when I read a book. Sometimes I move my finger up and down the page, which distracts me.

Multiple preposition and verb choice errors: 'lead' should be 'read' (wrong verb), 'on the paper' should be 'on paper' (omit article), 'turn the page of the book' better as 'turn the pages of a book' (plural pages, article), 'have more concentrate' should be 'can concentrate more' (concentrate is a verb), 'read on a book' incorrect preposition, 'I'm reading on the skin' is unclear and likely incorrect preposition/word choice so changed to 'the page' or omitted. The final phrases were ungrammatical: 'Make me just calling it up and down sometimes so it's don't make me' corrected to 'Sometimes I move my finger up and down the page, which distracts me.' Suggestion: Use simple, common verb-preposition collocations (read on paper, turn the pages, concentrate on). Keep clauses short and clear.

× When I reveal academic resource, I have to read carefully because I have to find the detail or to understand the complicated informations and I just scanning reading when I read a fictions or a joke on the Internet.

✓ When I read academic resources, I have to read carefully because I need to find details and understand complicated information, and I just scan when I read fiction or jokes on the Internet.

Errors: 'reveal' is wrong verb; should be 'read'. 'Academic resource' should be plural 'academic resources' to match meaning. 'Find the detail' should be 'find details' (plural) and 'complicated informations' is uncountable 'information' (no plural). 'I just scanning reading' is wrong form; use 'I just scan'. 'a fictions' should be 'fiction' (uncountable) and 'a joke' -> 'jokes' for plural/general. Verb tense: maintain simple present for habitual actions. Suggestion: Use simple present for habits, use 'information' as uncountable, and ensure verb forms match subject and tense (scan, read).

× I kind of like a person that the detail reading because every time I read I have a habit that repeat the passage again over again sometime if I don't understand much. So sometimes I obsess with this one page for like in a couple of time to read it again.

✓ I kind of prefer detailed reading because every time I read I have a habit of repeating the passage over and over if I don't understand it well. So sometimes I become fixated on one page and read it several times.

Problems: 'like a person that the detail reading' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'prefer detailed reading' (adjective form). 'Habit that repeat' should be 'habit of repeating' (use 'of' + gerund). 'Again over again' redundant; use 'over and over'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Obsess with this one page for like in a couple of time' incorrect prepositions and phrasing; corrected to 'become fixated on one page and read it several times.' Suggestion: Use 'habit of' + verb-ing for repeated actions, use 'over and over' for repetition, use 'prefer detailed reading' for the noun/adj form, and choose correct prepositions ('on one page').