Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Clarify and correct grammar, avoid spelling mistakes, and expand slightly with a brief reason or contrast. Use a clear topic sentence then one supporting detail. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Not really. I prefer watching YouTube or Netflix to reading because videos entertain me more quickly. For example, after a long day I find it easier to relax with a short documentary or series episode than to concentrate on a book.

Sugerencia: Fix word choice and grammar (e.g., 'read on a screen'), give a concise topic sentence and one specific supporting reason with a linking word. Mention a concrete example or situation to be more specific.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient. For instance, I can quickly open articles or e‑books on my iPad when commuting, and adjust the font size for better comfort.

Sugerencia: Improve accuracy and phrasing (e.g., 'miss a word' -> 'miss important information'), use linking words to contrast the two situations, and be slightly more specific about what you look for when reading carefully.

Ejemplo: I read carefully when I receive emails from my professor because they often contain important instructions or deadlines. In contrast, I skim friends' messages since they usually just contain casual updates or jokes.

Sugerencia: Directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence (e.g., 'I prefer scanning' or 'I prefer detailed reading'), correct contradictions and improve coherence. Explain why with a specific reason and an example. Keep it concise.

Ejemplo: I generally prefer scanning short texts because I find detailed reading tiring unless the information is important. For example, when checking news headlines or emails I scan for key points, but I will read an academic article in detail if I need the full information.

× Rather than letting, I prefer to watch Youtubes or Netflix because they can amuse me faster than reading a book or newspaper.

✓ Rather than reading, I prefer to watch YouTube or Netflix because they entertain me faster than reading a book or a newspaper.

The original used 'letting' incorrectly; compare structures use 'rather than' + base verb or gerund. 'Reading' is correct. 'Youtubes' is incorrect plural and brand name should be 'YouTube'. 'Can amuse me' is awkward; use 'entertain me' for natural collocation. Add article 'a' before 'newspaper.' Suggestion: use 'rather than reading' and 'YouTube' and 'entertain.'

× I think I prefer to lead an screen because it's convenient.

✓ I think I prefer to read on a screen because it's convenient.

The verb 'lead' is wrong; context requires 'read.' 'An screen' is incorrect article + noun form; 'screen' begins with a consonant sound so use 'a' if needed, but the common preposition is 'on a screen' or 'on screen'. Correct phrase is 'read on a screen.' Use 'read' instead of 'lead.'

× It is easy for me to read something whenever I want on a screen, so I always use an iPad or smartphone to read something.

✓ It is easy for me to read whenever I want on a screen, so I always use an iPad or a smartphone to read.

The placement and repetition are awkward. Remove the second 'something.' Use 'on a screen' and include article 'a' before 'smartphone.' Keep 'read whenever I want' without extra 'something.'

× When I get some e-mail from my professor, I really try hard to read carefully and pay attention not to miss the word.

✓ When I get an email from my professor, I try hard to read carefully and make sure I do not miss any words.

Use 'an email' (article) and 'email' as one word. 'Try hard' is acceptable; avoid 'really try hard' for formality. 'Pay attention not to miss the word' is ungrammatical; use 'make sure I do not miss any words.' Also plural 'words' fits context. Use present simple for habitual actions.

× And when I just read some messages or DMS from my friends, I just read.

✓ When I just read messages or DMs from my friends, I just skim them.

'DMS' should be 'DMs' (capitalization) and no 'some' needed. 'I just read' is repetitive and vague; better verb 'skim' to contrast careful reading. Also include pronoun 'them' to refer to messages. Use 'DMs' as plural abbreviation.

× No, I don't like it. It's really hard for me because scanning or reading some important details requires lots of energy so I prefer to read something casual like friends message.

✓ No, I don't like it. It's really hard for me because scanning or reading important details requires a lot of energy, so I prefer to read something casual like friends' messages.

Sentence had multiple issues: 'requires lots of energy' should be 'requires a lot of energy.' 'Something casual like friends message' needs plural possessive: 'friends' messages.' Also add comma before 'so' and remove 'some' before 'important details.' Maintain parallel structure 'scanning or reading important details.'