Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Keep your positive content but make sentences clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., plural/singular, articles), and avoid redundancy. Use one or two supporting details with linking words (for example, “for example” or “because”).

Ejemplo: I love reading, especially on my days off. For example, I often read novels and history books because they broaden my knowledge and make me feel optimistic.

Sugerencia: Answer directly in present tense and give specific reasons using linking words. Correct vocabulary and phrases (e.g., ‘classical’ → ‘traditional’, ‘healthy benefits’ → ‘health benefits’, avoid unclear phrases like ‘breathing through’). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more traditional and comfortable. Also, it is gentler on my eyes compared with reading on tablets or phones.

Sugerencia: Structure the answer with a clear topic sentence, then give specific conditions and linked actions. Fix grammar (singular/plural, tenses) and avoid repetition. Use linking words like ‘when’ and ‘so’ to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when I encounter unfamiliar vocabulary or complex ideas. When that happens, I pause and look up words on Google or in a dictionary so I can understand the text fully.

Sugerencia: Use present tense and avoid filler words like ‘uh’. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give concise reasons and an example of what you do when you don’t understand. Use linking words such as ‘because’ and ‘so’.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I like to understand every part of a story. If I don’t understand the language, I reread sentences and search for meanings online so I can grasp the full meaning.

× I really love reading books especially during my day offs where I could spend a lot of time reading a beautiful novels or logical and historic books.

✓ I really love reading books, especially during my days off, when I can spend a lot of time reading beautiful novels or books on logic and history.

The phrase 'my day offs' uses incorrect quantifier/number form; use 'days off' (plural). 'a beautiful novels' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' and use plural 'novels'. Also 'logical and historic books' is awkward; use 'books on logic and history' or 'logic and history books'. Use 'when I can' instead of 'where I could' to match time reference and natural English.

× I love reading books because it makes me feel enthusiastic and optimistic.

✓ I love reading books because they make me feel enthusiastic and optimistic.

Subject 'books' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' not 'it'. Using 'it makes' is a tense/pronoun agreement issue. Change to 'they make' to match plurality.

× I preferred reading on paper.

✓ I prefer reading on paper.

Question asks about current preference, so present tense 'prefer' is appropriate. 'Preferred' is past tense and suggests a past habit; use present simple to state a general preference.

× It's a classical method of reading books.

✓ It's a classical method of reading.

'Method of reading books' is redundant; 'reading' suffices. 'Classical' is acceptable but 'traditional' may be more natural. No article error here, but simplifying improves clarity.

× I find it more classy and it will give a healthy benefits to my eye compared to breathing through tablet or cell phones which I could have a.

✓ I find it more classy, and it is healthier for my eyes compared to using tablets or cell phones.

'Give a healthy benefits to my eye' has incorrect article, noun number, and preposition. Use 'healthier for my eyes' to express comparative health benefit. 'Breathing through tablet' is incorrect verb and preposition; use 'using tablets or cell phones'. Also pluralize 'eyes' and remove trailing fragment 'which I could have a.'

× I preferred uh deep reading method.

✓ I prefer the deep reading method.

Again, 'preferred' is past tense; use present 'prefer' to express current habit. Add definite article 'the' before 'deep reading method' for specificity.

× I need to find a word or I find it hard to understand when there is a deep vocabulary words on the book that I read read.

✓ I need to look up a word or I find it hard to understand when there are difficult words in the book I am reading.

Sentence has redundancy ('read read'), incorrect noun phrase 'deep vocabulary words' (awkward), subject-verb agreement ('there is' with plural 'words'), and preposition use ('on the book'). Use 'look up' for checking words, 'difficult words' or 'advanced vocabulary', 'there are' for plural, and 'in the book I am reading' for correct structure.

× So what I do is I just search it on a Google or just use my dictionary book to gather more information.

✓ So what I do is search for it on Google or use my dictionary to find more information.

Use 'search for it on Google' rather than 'search it on a Google'. 'Google' does not need an article. 'Dictionary book' is redundant; 'dictionary' suffices. Use 'find more information' as more natural collocation. Also avoid duplicate 'just'.

× I want to understand every detail of the story and understand all the information.

✓ I want to understand every detail of the story and grasp all the information.

Repetition of 'understand' is stylistically weak. Use a stronger verb 'grasp' for variety and clarity. Sentence structure otherwise fine.

× If I do not know that uh the language that they use, I have to reread the whole sentence and do searching so that I could understand.

✓ If I do not know the language they use, I have to reread the whole sentence and search so that I can understand.

Remove filler 'uh' and extra 'that'. Use 'know the language they use' not 'know that the language'. 'Do searching' is ungrammatical; use 'search' or 'look it up'. Use 'can' instead of 'could' to match present real condition (first conditional form).