Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use 'I really enjoy reading', 'it helps me'), avoid filler words (uh), and give a concise specific example. Keep answers to no more than 3–4 sentences and link ideas with simple connectors (for example, because, so, such as).

Ejemplo: I really enjoy reading because it helps me learn new skills and ideas. For example, when I read IT books, I learn practical problem-solving techniques that help me deal with difficult situations at work.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference with reasons and avoid repetition and hesitations. Use correct vocabulary (technology, convenient, advantages). Use linking words (because, therefore) and limit to 2–3 supporting points. Correct pronouns and verb forms.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because modern technology makes it more convenient. For example, e-readers let me carry many books at once and adjust the font size, so reading is easier and more flexible.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer: say when careful reading is necessary and give a contrasting example when it's not. Use clear grammar (need to, in order to) and specific contexts (contracts, instructions vs. novels). Avoid vague phrases and fillers.

Ejemplo: You need to read carefully when the information is important, for example when reading contracts or technical instructions, because small details can have big consequences. By contrast, you can read less carefully when browsing a novel or casual articles for enjoyment.

Sugerencia: Clearly state your preference (detailed reading) and give 2 concise, specific reasons using linking words (because, therefore). Correct verb forms ('I prefer', 'I improve my knowledge', 'I understand the information'). Remove hesitations and unnecessary repetition.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand complex ideas and improves my knowledge. For example, when I study academic articles in detail, I can remember key concepts and apply them in my work.

× Yes, of course. I very like reading because it help me uh, have an opportunity to learn various skills.

✓ Yes, of course. I really like reading because it helps me have an opportunity to learn various skills.

Problems: adverb choice and subject-verb agreement. 'Very like' is incorrect — use 'really like' (adverb usage). 'It help' is wrong because singular subject 'it' requires third person singular verb 'helps'. Suggestion: replace 'very' with 'really' and change 'help' to 'helps' to match the subject.

× For example, when I read abusing IT books, I can learn how to uh, deal with difficult situation effectively.

✓ For example, when I read IT books, I can learn how to deal with difficult situations effectively.

Problems: incorrect word choice and singular/plural. 'Abusing' is incorrect here — likely intended 'about' or unnecessary; remove it. 'Difficult situation' should be plural 'difficult situations' to be natural. Suggestion: remove 'abusing' and use plural 'situations'.

× I prefer reading on a screen you knows at a a improved technologies, uh, we can shows and read books on a screen and it's a help We have more factors and more convenient.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen because with improved technologies we can view and read books on a screen, and it is helpful because it is more convenient.

Problems: multiple sentence structure and subject-verb agreement. 'You knows' is incorrect personal address and verb form; use a conjunction 'because' to connect reason. 'a improved' should be 'improved' (no 'a'). 'we can shows' incorrect verb form — use 'view' or 'show' without 's' for plural subject ('we'). 'it's a help' unnatural — use 'it is helpful' or 'it helps'. Also 'more factors' unclear; remove. Suggestion: simplify into one or two clear clauses, use correct verbs and remove extra articles.

× Of course we need to read carefully because when you uh, reach you needs to reach a detail and uh, as you need to read carefully in order to done this any detail or information.

✓ Of course we need to read carefully because when you need to reach details, you must read carefully in order to handle any detail or information.

Problems: sentence structure and verb forms. 'Reach you needs to reach a detail' is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Done this any detail' should be 'handle any detail' or 'complete any task involving details'. Suggestion: restructure sentence to 'when you need to reach details' or better 'when you need to understand details' and use 'handle' or 'process' instead of 'done'.

× Uh, for me, I refer detailed reading because when I detail reading, I have an opportunity to improve my, uh, my, umm, uh, knowledge and I can, uh, I can done this information especially is.

✓ For me, I prefer detailed reading because when I do detailed reading, I have an opportunity to improve my knowledge and I can understand this information better.

Problems: present tense/form usage and incorrect verb forms. 'I refer detailed reading' should be 'I prefer detailed reading'. 'When I detail reading' lacks auxiliary — use 'when I do detailed reading'. 'I can done this information' is incorrect past participle; use 'understand' or 'process' in present tense. Suggestion: use 'prefer', 'do detailed reading', and 'understand' to make the sentence grammatical and clear.