Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail. Avoid fillers and tense/person mistakes (e.g., 'I used to be interested in a science project'). Use linking words like 'for example' correctly and limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me gain knowledge and prepare for my future. For example, when I was younger I was interested in a science project, so I read several articles and books about it to learn more.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and one clear, specific reason. Correct grammar and phrasing (e.g., 'it does not hurt my eyes' or 'it does not cause glare'). Avoid repeating the preference unnecessarily.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it does not cause glare and feels easier on my eyes. For example, after long study sessions I find paper books less tiring than reading on a screen.

Sugerencia: Clarify the idea with correct vocabulary and give a contrasting example. Use a topic sentence such as 'I need to read carefully when...' and explain why with specific details. Fix unclear phrases ('real thing of product', 'gain national original')—probably meant 'authenticity' or 'genuine information'.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when I am checking a product because I want to verify its authenticity and features. In contrast, I skim familiar materials like news headlines when I only need the main idea.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly and give a concise reason with a specific example. Avoid hesitation words and vague claims. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' and correct grammar ('I prefer scanning' not 'to scanning').

Ejemplo: I prefer scanning because I often need to find information quickly. For example, when researching a topic I scan articles to locate relevant facts and then read those parts in detail.

× Yes, I like reading because it helps me to use gain more knowledge and expand my future.

✓ Yes, I like reading because it helps me gain more knowledge and broaden my future opportunities.

The phrase 'to use gain' is ungrammatical redundancy; remove 'to use' and use the base verb 'gain' after 'helps me'. 'Expand my future' is unnatural; 'broaden my future opportunities' or 'expand my horizons' fits better. Use present simple 'helps me gain' to match habitual action.

× For example, when I was younger, I am interested in a science projector.

✓ For example, when I was younger, I was interested in a science projector.

The sentence mixes past time marker 'when I was younger' with present tense 'am interested'. Change 'am' to past 'was' for consistent past reference. Also 'projector' seems a typo; 'project' or 'projector' should be chosen. If meaning was a science project, use 'science project'.

× After that I read some topics uh about it.

✓ After that, I read some articles about it.

With past context, use past simple 'read' (pronounced 'red') is correct, but 'topics about it' is vague and slightly awkward. 'Articles about it' or 'materials about it' is clearer. Add comma after 'After that' for clarity.

× I prefer to read on paper because it not reflect on my eyes and so that's why I prefer to read on paper.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because it does not reflect light into my eyes, so that's why I prefer paper.

'It not reflect' is incorrect: use auxiliary 'does' for negative present simple third-person singular (does not reflect). Also specify what 'it' refers to ('screens' reflect light); clarifying 'reflect light into my eyes' makes sentence natural. Remove repetitive 'I prefer to read on paper' or shorten second clause.

× When I don't know about the real thing of product, I read on it carefully because it helps me to gain national original.

✓ When I don't know the real details of a product, I read about it carefully because it helps me gain original information.

'Real thing of product' is ungrammatical; use 'the real details of a product' or 'the actual product'. 'Read on it' is incorrect; use 'read about it'. 'Gain national original' is nonsensical; likely intended 'gain original information' or 'gain reliable information'. Remove 'to' after 'helps me'.

× I prefer to scanning because, uh, suddenly I know about some things on everything. That's why I have.

✓ I prefer scanning because I can quickly learn about many things.

Use either 'prefer to scan' or 'prefer scanning'; the original mixes 'prefer to scanning' which is incorrect. 'Suddenly I know about some things on everything' is unidiomatic; 'quickly learn about many things' conveys intended meaning. 'That's why I have' is incomplete and should be removed or completed ('That's why I do that').