Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct verb forms and word choice (e.g., "on a daily basis" and "mindful" → "a sense of calm"). Avoid repeating phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read books and blogs every day because they help me relax after a stressful day, and I often read during my commute or before bed.

Sugerencia: Use a clear topic sentence and improve grammar and cohesion. Use linking words like "however" or "on the other hand". Make word choices accurate ("depends on the situation", "paper helps me memorize"). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. For studying and exam preparation I prefer paper because it helps me remember information, but for quick news or general browsing I usually use a screen.

Sugerencia: Complete sentences and correct grammar are needed. Provide a clear contrast with linking words such as "whereas" or "but" and finish the second clause. Be specific about what "reading carefully" involves (e.g., taking notes, re-reading).

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when studying for exams or doing academic work, so I take notes and re-read difficult parts to avoid missing details. However, when I'm browsing casual news or social media I usually skim headlines and skip most articles.

Sugerencia: Make the answer more fluent and reduce filler words like "uh". Use a clear structure: topic sentence, reason, and example. Correct phrasing ("read in detail", "I prefer scanning"). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: It depends on the material. For academic or important texts I read in detail and take notes to ensure I understand everything, but for social media or general web browsing I usually scan headlines and key points.

× Yes, I love to read books and blogs on the daily basis because it gives me a calm and mindful after a stressful day.

✓ Yes, I love to read books and blogs on a daily basis because they make me feel calm and mindful after a stressful day.

Errors: wrong article 'the daily basis' should be 'a daily basis' (Article errors - ID 22) and singular/plural/agreement: 'it gives me a calm and mindful' is ungrammatical. 'Books and blogs' is plural so use plural pronoun 'they' and a phrase 'make me feel calm and mindful'. Suggestion: use 'a daily basis' and match plural subject with plural pronoun and a natural verb phrase 'make me feel'. Grammar Problem Type IDs: 22, 27

× Whenever I have free time I spend on it.

✓ Whenever I have free time, I spend it reading.

Error: sentence lacks a proper verb-object structure (Sentence structure errors - ID 26) and awkward preposition 'on it'. Suggestion: use a clear direct object 'it' and specify activity 'reading' to complete the thought. Add a comma after the adverbial clause for clarity.

× It's totally depend upon situation.

✓ It totally depends on the situation.

Error: verb form incorrect for third person singular 'It' (Third person singular issue - ID 2) and wrong preposition 'depend upon' is acceptable but more natural 'depends on'; missing article 'the' before 'situation' (Article errors - ID 22). Suggestion: use 'depends on the situation'.

× When I want to read for academic point of view and preparing my exam, I prefer the read on the paper because it is best for memorize and on the other side if I want just collect information and some news.

✓ When I want to read from an academic point of view or to prepare for an exam, I prefer to read on paper because it is best for memorizing. On the other hand, if I just want to collect information or read some news, I prefer a screen.

Errors: missing articles and noun phrases ('academic point of view' needs 'an'), incorrect verb forms ('preparing my exam' should be 'to prepare for an exam'), incorrect use of 'the read' (extra article) and wrong preposition 'on the paper' -> 'on paper', 'best for memorize' needs gerund 'memorizing' (Verb + -ing form - ID 8), and awkward phrase 'on the other side' should be 'on the other hand' (Incorrect conjunction/use - ID 16). Suggestion: use 'read on paper', use gerund 'memorizing', and restructure second clause to 'prefer a screen'.

× When I am doing my academic work like preparing exam or taking any test, I read more carefully for memorize things and concentrate fully.

✓ When I am doing academic work like preparing for an exam or taking a test, I read more carefully to memorize things and concentrate fully.

Errors: missing article 'an' before 'exam' (Article errors - ID 22), phrase 'for memorize things' is incorrect; use infinitive 'to memorize' or gerund 'memorizing' (Verb + -ing issue - ID 8). Suggestion: use 'preparing for an exam' and 'to memorize things' for intent.

× So I don't want to miss important details.

✓ So I don't want to miss any important details.

Error: missing determiner 'any' with plural noun 'important details' (Incorrect use of quantifiers/articles - IDs 14 and 22). Suggestion: use 'any important details' to sound natural in negative contexts.

× But when I am just browsing or read casual news I just.

✓ But when I am just browsing or reading casual news, I don't read carefully.

Error: fragment 'I just.' lacks a main verb (Sentence without a verb - ID 23) and parallelism issue 'browsing or read' should be 'browsing or reading' (Verb in the present participle form - ID 10). Suggestion: complete the sentence by explaining behavior, e.g. 'I don't read carefully' or 'I just skim.' Add comma after subordinate clause.

× It's totally dependent on what I am reading.

✓ It totally depends on what I am reading.

Error: verb form 'dependent' used where 'depends' fits the question about preference; third person singular needed (Third person singular issue - ID 2). Suggestion: use 'depends' for natural spoken response.

× If it's uh important for academic point of view, I read it much detail because I don't want to miss any important information.

✓ If it is important from an academic point of view, I read it in much more detail because I don't want to miss any important information.

Errors: missing article 'an' before 'academic point of view' (Article errors - ID 22), awkward adverb phrase 'much detail' should be 'in much more detail' (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs - ID 13 and Incorrect adverb placement - ID 20). Suggestion: use 'important from an academic point of view' and 'read it in much more detail'.

× Or if I am just use Internet or social media browsing, so I prefer scanning.

✓ Or if I am just using the Internet or browsing social media, I prefer scanning.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'am just use' should be 'am just using' (Verb in the present participle form - ID 10), missing article 'the' before 'Internet' (Article errors - ID 22), awkward conjunction 'so' after conditional clause is unnecessary. Suggestion: 'if I am just using the Internet or browsing social media, I prefer scanning.'