Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your response more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix tense and article errors (e.g., "I picked reading as my hobby" → "I chose reading as a hobby").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. I chose reading as a hobby because I often visit the library to find historical books that expand my vocabulary and knowledge. Additionally, it helps me relax and reduce stress after a hectic day.

Sugerencia: Organize your answer: give a clear preference first, then two concise reasons linked logically. Correct grammar (use singular/plural properly) and avoid filler words and unfinished sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen. Paper is more comfortable for long sessions and does not strain my eyes, so I can read for pleasure at home without discomfort.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct topic sentence then two specific contrasts using linking words (because, while, whereas). Improve grammar and choice of words (e.g., "necessary" → "need to"); be specific about what makes historical texts demanding.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when I study history books because they contain many dates and complex events that require accuracy. In contrast, I can read fiction more casually because the language is simpler and the plot is easier to follow.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear statement of preference, then give precise reasons and an example. Remove repetition and complete the final sentence. Use linking words like "because" and "for example".

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand complex ideas. For example, if a textbook passage is unclear, I read it two or three times and take notes to make sure I grasp the concepts.

× Yes, I love reading because it I picked the reading as my hobby because I usually went to the library and reading some books that helps to enhance my vocabulary and knowledge about the history.

✓ Yes, I love reading. I picked reading as my hobby because I usually go to the library and read books that help enhance my vocabulary and my knowledge of history.

This sentence has multiple structure and tense problems (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). It mixes past and present tenses ('picked' vs 'usually went'), contains redundant words ('the reading'), and has incorrect verb forms ('reading some books that helps'). Suggestions: split into two sentences for clarity, use consistent present tense for habitual actions ('usually go', 'read'), use base verb after modal/auxiliary ('help' not 'helps'), and use correct noun phrasing ('knowledge of history').

× Moreover, I liked it because it's a relaxing activity that helped me to overcome my stress level in this hectic schedule.

✓ Moreover, I like it because it's a relaxing activity that helps me overcome stress in this hectic schedule.

This mixes past and present tenses (Grammar Problem Type ID 6). The speaker should use present tense to express a general preference ('like') and habitual effect ('helps me overcome'). Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use natural collocations ('overcome stress').

× Well, in my perspective, I give more preference to the pages because it's more comfortable for me to read as anytime uh, I read a lot of books in my home it's a relaxing activity but as compared to the screen and screen it give a bad impact on eyes.

✓ Well, from my perspective, I prefer paper pages because they are more comfortable for me to read at home; reading is a relaxing activity, and compared to screens, pages do not strain the eyes.

This contains article and noun phrasing errors (Grammar Problem Type ID 22) and other issues. 'In my perspective' should be 'from my perspective'; 'give a bad impact on eyes' is unnatural—use 'strain the eyes'; plural agreement 'screen and screen' is wrong. Suggestions: use 'prefer' instead of 'give more preference', use plural agreement and natural collocations ('strain the eyes').

× So I avoid it because whenever I.

✓ So I avoid screens because they strain my eyes.

This is an incomplete sentence (Grammar Problem Type ID 26 / 23). 'Whenever I.' is a fragment. Suggestion: complete the thought with a clear clause explaining why screens are avoided and maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Well, it's very interesting question whenever I pick book about the history, so I necessary to read it properly because of the dates and proper circumstances.

✓ Well, it's a very interesting question. Whenever I pick up a book about history, I need to read it carefully because of the dates and specific circumstances.

Problems include missing articles and incorrect verb forms (Grammar Problem Type ID 6 and 22). Use 'pick up a book' and 'need to read' for necessity rather than 'so I necessary to read'. Also use 'specific circumstances' or 'context' instead of 'proper circumstances'. Suggestions: add articles, use correct verbs, and choose natural nouns.

× It's very confused and complex conception there.

✓ The concepts there are confusing and complex.

Adjective/adverb misuse (Grammar Problem Type ID 13). 'It's very confused' incorrectly uses passive/adjective; 'conception' is unnatural. Suggestion: use 'the concepts are confusing' and place adjectives before nouns or use appropriate complements.

× But whenever I read storybooks it's quite easy to read and easy language and vocabulary.

✓ But whenever I read storybooks, they are quite easy to read and use simple language and vocabulary.

Tense and pronoun reference issues (Grammar Problem Type ID 6). 'It's' should refer properly to 'storybooks' (plural), so use 'they are'; clarify that storybooks use simple language. Suggestion: ensure subject-pronoun agreement and clearer phrasing.

× Well, I love to reading books deeply because I want to understand the concept properly and clearly.

✓ Well, I love to read books in depth because I want to understand the concepts properly and clearly.

Incorrect verb+ing after 'love to' (Grammar Problem Type ID 8). After 'love to' use the base form 'read', not 'reading'. Also 'deeply' can be better expressed as 'in depth', and 'concept' should be plural 'concepts' when general. Suggestion: use correct verb forms and natural adverbial phrases.

× Whenever I feel I'm not understanding the concepts so I deeply read it one or two times.

✓ Whenever I feel I'm not understanding the concepts, I read them carefully one or two times.

Tense and sentence structure issues (Grammar Problem Type ID 6 and 26). 'Feel I'm not understanding' is wordy but acceptable; 'so I deeply read it' is awkward — use 'I read them carefully'. Ensure plural agreement ('concepts' -> 'them'). Suggestion: reorder to subject-verb-object and use adverb placement correctly.

× So I think reading books deeply is more beneficial for the.

✓ So I think reading books deeply is more beneficial for learning and understanding the material.

This sentence is incomplete and unclear (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). 'For the.' is a fragment. Suggestion: complete the sentence with the intended object (e.g., 'learning' or 'understanding the material').