Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like reading, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid filler words (umm, actually) and repetitions. Focus on natural phrasing and correct collocations (e.g., “I’m not a big reader” rather than “not that famous of reading”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading, but I wouldn’t call myself an avid reader. For example, I usually read short stories or articles that interest me, such as travel writing or technology news, rather than long novels.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear preference first, then give two specific reasons using linking words (because, so, however). Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., “I prefer paper” not “I fever”). Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid hesitations.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because my eyesight makes screens uncomfortable for long periods. Also, paper helps me concentrate better, whereas screens can be blurry or distracting. However, I sometimes read PDFs on my tablet when I need convenience.

Sugerencia: Give a concise topic sentence answering the question, then add specific examples and a contrast using linking words (for example, but, however). Fix grammar and clarity (e.g., “if the book is important or for work” and “usually I read carefully to understand key points”).

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when the material is important, for example when it’s for my job or for studying. In contrast, I skim emails or news when I just need the main idea and don’t have time. Overall, I try to focus more on texts that affect my work or exams.

Sugerencia: Use correct terms (skimming/scanning vs detailed reading) and state your preference clearly. Offer reasons and a brief example with linking words (because, when). Avoid repetition and hesitations, and keep sentences grammatically correct.

Ejemplo: It depends, but I usually prefer detailed reading because I like to understand things step by step. I only scan or skim articles when I’m short on time, for example to find a specific fact or to decide if the article is worth reading fully.

× Umm actually it depends in which story or what what I will read.

✓ Umm actually it depends on which story or what I will read.

The error is the incorrect preposition 'in' and redundancy 'what what'. Replace 'in' with 'on' for 'depends on' and remove duplicate 'what'. Use 'depends on which story or what I will read' for correct structure.

× But I like reading but not that much.

✓ But I like reading, but not that much.

This sentence needs a comma for clarity between clauses. Grammatically it's fine otherwise; adding the comma improves readability and separates the contrasting ideas.

× I'm not that famous of reading.

✓ I'm not very fond of reading.

The phrase 'famous of reading' is incorrect collocation. Use 'fond of' to express liking. 'Not very fond of reading' correctly conveys limited interest.

× Actually, I fever to read on the paper because I cannot see that well.

✓ Actually, I prefer to read on paper because I cannot see that well.

'Fever' is a wrong word; the correct verb is 'prefer'. Also use 'on paper' rather than 'on the paper' when speaking generally.

× Also, uh, sometimes the screen maybe it's not showing very clear.

✓ Also, sometimes the screen may not show things very clearly.

'Maybe it's not showing very clear' mixes modal and progressive forms incorrectly and uses 'clear' (adjective) instead of the adverb 'clearly'. Use 'may not show things very clearly' for correct modal usage and adverb form.

× So I prefer umm, PDF sometime, but the most time, uh, by reading on paper.

✓ So I prefer PDFs sometimes, but most of the time I read on paper.

Use plural 'PDFs' for general preference and 'sometimes' adverb form. 'Most of the time' is the correct phrase. 'By reading on paper' is awkward; use 'I read on paper' to state habit.

× Umm, when I'm starting reading, if the the book that I'm reading is very important or it is for my job or my work.

✓ Umm, when I start reading, if the book I am reading is very important or if it is for my job.

Use simple present 'I start' for habitual action. Remove duplicate 'the'. 'If the book I am reading' is more concise than 'the book that I'm reading'. 'For my job' is sufficient; 'job or my work' is redundant.

× So at this moment I need to read it very carefully.

✓ So at that point I need to read it very carefully.

'At this moment' can be used, but 'at that point' better matches the conditional reference to when starting to read; either is acceptable. This correction preserves present-tense necessity.

× And actually it's an all whatever I'm gonna read, I must read carefully to understand what is the common.

✓ And actually, whatever I am going to read, I must read carefully to understand the main points.

The original has incorrect phrase 'it's an all whatever' and informal 'gonna'. Rephrase to 'whatever I am going to read'. 'Understand what is the common' is unclear; 'understand the main points' is a clear, grammatically correct expression.

× Actually depends on what I am reading.

✓ Actually, it depends on what I am reading.

The sentence lacks the subject 'it'. Adding 'it' completes the clause: 'it depends on what I am reading.'

× But the most time I like to umm title reading because I like to know what is going on step by step.

✓ But most of the time I like to do skimming because I like to know what is going on step by step.

'The most time' should be 'most of the time'. 'Title reading' is not correct; likely 'skimming' or 'reading the title' was intended. 'Do skimming' or 'skim' expresses the action. Also 'to know what is going on step by step' is acceptable; 'what is going on' is fine.

× I don't like to scanning scanning.

✓ I don't like to scan.

Use the base verb 'scan' after 'like to' rather than the -ing form. Remove the repeated 'scanning'.

× I will do it if I don't have, uh, time.

✓ I will do it if I don't have time.

Remove unnecessary filler comma and filler 'uh'. The tense and conditional structure are correct: future conditional 'I will do it if I don't have time.'