Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Good content but improve accuracy, fluency and sentence variety. Make the opening direct, correct grammar (plural/singular, articles), avoid repetition and use linking phrase to expand. Limit to 2–4 sentences and add a specific example or type of book to be more concrete.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. It helps me learn about other cultures and broadens my horizons; for example, I recently read a Japanese novel that taught me about everyday life in Tokyo.

Sugerencia: Answer is clear but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Use concise structure: state preference, give 1–2 supporting reasons with correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid unnecessary clauses and correct past/present tense errors.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient. For instance, I can buy ebooks on my tablet and read them anytime, anywhere without carrying heavy books.

Sugerencia: Good distinction but improve grammar, word choice and clarity. Use proper nouns/articles, correct modal usage and give specific examples of instructions and a brief reason. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when I'm studying instructions, such as exam rules or safety guidelines, to avoid mistakes. However, I don't read novels as carefully because I read them mainly for enjoyment.

Sugerencia: Logical answer but grammar, vocabulary and coherence need work. Fix tense and article errors, avoid vague phrases, and finish the thought. Use linking word 'for example' or 'because' to explain reasons and provide one contrast (when you use detailed reading).

Ejemplo: It depends. For novels I usually skim because I read for pleasure and relaxation. However, I do detailed reading for academic texts or work documents when I need to understand complex information.

× Yes, I like reading because I think reading can help me to learn different culture and also broaden my horizon to different countries.

✓ Yes, I like reading because I think reading can help me learn about different cultures and also broaden my horizons to other countries.

Use of prepositions and nouns: 'help me to learn' is acceptable but 'help me learn' is more natural; 'different culture' should be plural 'different cultures' when generalizing; 'broaden my horizon' should be plural 'broaden my horizons'; 'to different countries' is better as 'to other countries' or 'about different countries'. Also remove unnecessary 'to' after 'help me' for natural English.

× I prefer to read on a screen because I think it is more convenient that I just bring a tablet or a Kindle that is an electronic device that I can bought different books online and also I can read anytime and anywhere.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because I think it is more convenient: I can just bring a tablet or a Kindle, which is an electronic device where I can buy different books online, and I can read anytime and anywhere.

Multiple issues corrected but per list primary is article/relative clause and verb form: 'a Kindle that is' changed to 'which is' for non-defining clause; 'bought' is wrong past form -> 'buy'; 'that I just bring' reordered to 'I can just bring'. Also use colon/comma to clarify. 'a Kindle' article is okay; main diagnosis: incorrect clause/relative pronoun and verb tense.

× When I am reading the instruction or the guideline of some test or some environment, I would read carefully to prevent the dangerous consequence and I would not read carefully when I just reading the novel.

✓ When I am reading the instructions or the guidelines for a test or in a new environment, I read carefully to prevent dangerous consequences, and I do not read carefully when I am just reading a novel.

Issues: 'instruction' and 'guideline' should be plural when general; 'of some test or some environment' changed to 'for a test or in a new environment' for natural preposition use; 'would read' implies conditional so use simple present 'read' for habitual actions; 'prevent the dangerous consequence' -> 'prevent dangerous consequences' (no article); 'when I just reading' missing auxiliary verb -> 'when I am just reading'. Main grammar types: present participle missing and article/plural fixes.

× It depends on the situation. When I am reading the novels I would only like scanning because I think it is just a hobbies and I would wanted to realise myself. I don't want to be really concentrated and.

✓ It depends on the situation. When I am reading novels I usually only skim because I think it is just a hobby and I want to relax. I don't want to concentrate too much.

Several tense and word choice issues: 'would only like scanning' is ungrammatical — use 'usually only skim' (present habitual). 'the novels' -> 'novels' (general). 'a hobbies' -> 'a hobby' (singular). 'would wanted to realise myself' is incorrect tense and phrasing -> 'I want to relax' or 'I want to unwind'. 'be really concentrated' -> 'concentrate' and add adverb placement 'too much'. Primary problem types: present tense misuse and incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs/quantifiers.