Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence answering directly, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., tense, articles) and avoid redundancy like repeating 'sometimes' and 'too'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. I often read newspapers to keep up with current events in Nepal, especially politics and sports. In addition, I occasionally read books for pleasure, for example history and contemporary fiction.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer and a concise, grammatically correct reason. Avoid filler sounds and repetition. Use one linking phrase to add a brief explanation or personal example.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and helps me concentrate. For instance, when I study I find I remember more if I read a printed article rather than on my phone.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clarify the distinction between situations requiring careful reading and those that do not. Use correct grammar (singular/plural, articles) and avoid contradictory phrases. Provide a short example to illustrate.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when the material is important or detailed, such as news articles about politics or academic texts. However, I skim casual messages or social media posts when I only want the main idea.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence and use correct grammar and linking words. Explain the conditions for scanning versus detailed reading with specific examples and avoid invented adverbs like 'detailedly'.

Ejemplo: It depends on the material. For short items like phone messages I usually scan for key information, but for daily news or sports reports I read in detail to understand the facts and context.

× As I like reading, sometimes I read newspapers because I love to see what happened in Nepal, politics, about geopolitics, about sports.

✓ As I like reading, sometimes I read newspapers because I love to see what has happened in Nepal, in politics, in geopolitics, and in sports.

The original uses past tense 'happened' but references ongoing or recent events; present perfect 'has happened' is appropriate. Also prepositions are inconsistent: use 'in' before areas (in politics, in geopolitics, in sports). Using parallel prepositions makes the sentence clearer.

× So I'm pretty much reading sometimes also books too.

✓ So I read quite a lot and sometimes also read books.

The original mixes continuous form and adverbs awkwardly. 'I'm pretty much reading' is unnatural; simple present 'I read' fits habitual action. 'Sometimes also books too' is redundant; use 'sometimes also read books' or 'sometimes read books'.

× Definitely I prefer to read on paper because in on a screen that need. Uh, uh. On paper, paper. Or not.

✓ Definitely I prefer to read on paper because reading on a screen is difficult for me.

The fragment 'in on a screen that need' is incorrect preposition use and grammar. Use 'on a screen' for screens, and rephrase to a complete clause: 'reading on a screen is difficult for me.' Remove filler words.

× Every time I read books, newspapers, I have to read carefully because I'm a specific persons who care about everything.

✓ Every time I read books or newspapers, I have to read carefully because I'm a specific person who cares about everything.

'Persons' should be singular 'person' to match 'I'm'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'who cares' not 'who care'. Use 'books or newspapers' with 'or' for clarity.

× So I read very carefully and every time when I read so it's not there is no time.

✓ So I read very carefully every time I read, and there is no time when I do not read carefully.

The original is ungrammatical and contains double negatives and redundant connectors ('so it's not there is no time'). Rephrase to a clear structure: state habit and negate appropriately: 'there is no time when I do not read carefully.'

× It depends what I'm reading.

✓ It depends on what I'm reading.

Missing preposition 'on' after 'depends'. The correct pattern is 'depend on something'.

× Uh, maybe my phone messages I only scanning scan, but when I read news about daily basis I read very detailedly and also about Sports News which have to read very detailed.

✓ Maybe for phone messages I only scan them, but when I read the daily news I read in detail, and I have to read sports news very carefully.

'I only scanning scan' is incorrect verb form; use base verb 'scan' with 'only' and object 'them'. 'About daily basis' is wrong preposition and noun form; use 'the daily news'. 'Detailedly' is not a common adverb; use 'in detail' or 'very carefully'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'which have to read' should be 'I have to read'.