Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は自然で明確ですが、少し冗長な部分と文法の小さな誤りがあります。5文以内にまとめつつ、トピック文の後に理由や頻度をつなげる接続表現を使うとさらに良くなります。例えば副詞（"usually" の位置）や接続詞（"and" よりも "also" や "because"）の使い方を工夫してください。また、"favorite song" は複数形にするか単数で明確にするなど語彙の正確さを意識しましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk regularly because there is a large park near my house. I usually go there in the morning and again at night, and I often listen to music while I walk to relax.

Sugerencia: 内容は伝わりますが、文法ミス（"prefer stay" → "prefer to stay"、"doing something makes me" → "doing things that made me"）や表現の不自然さがあります。過去の習慣を述べる際は過去形で一貫させ、理由や例を簡潔に列挙するために接続詞や分詞を適切に使ってください。また最後の文は現在の変化を対比して述べると効果的です。

Ejemplo: Not really. When I was a child, I preferred to stay at home and do relaxing activities like watching Netflix, playing the piano, or studying. Recently, however, I've started to enjoy walking more because it makes me feel healthier.

Sugerencia: 意図は明確ですが、文が長く冗長で繰り返しがあります（"because" の重複、時制不一致）。ポイントを一つずつ短い文で述べ、接続語（"because", "so", "for example"）を整理して使うと明瞭になります。語彙では "fresh air" と "mental health" を正確に使ってください。

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because they can get fresh air and exercise. Also, being outdoors helps reduce stress and improve mental health, which is why parks are popular for walks.

Sugerencia: 回答は個人的で具体的ですが、時制と語法の誤りがあります（"If I have a chance" → "If I had the chance"、"the YouTube" → "YouTube"、"will definitely makes" → "definitely makes"）。条件節の時制を合わせ、理由を簡潔に述べると自然になります。

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would love to take a long walk on the beach because the sound and view of the ocean always relax me. I often watch ocean videos on YouTube when I'm stressed, so being there would be calming.

Sugerencia: 答えは意味が通じますが、不自然な表現と文法ミスが多いです（"the place where I used to live in" → "the place where I used to live"、"give a flashback from them" は不自然）。過去の行動を述べる際は簡潔にし、感情を説明するときは正しい語句（"nostalgic" と "bring back memories"）を使ってください。

Ejemplo: I recently walked around the neighborhood where I used to live. It made me feel nostalgic and brought back a lot of memories from my childhood.

× There's a huge park nearby my house so I usually go there to walk in the morning and at night as well.

✓ There is a huge park near my house, so I usually go there to walk in the morning and at night as well.

'Nearby my house' is not the usual collocation; use 'near my house'. Also add a comma before 'so' for clarity. Ensure 'There is' is used correctly for singular noun.

× And I also like to listen to music so I listen to my favorite song while I'm walking.

✓ I also like to listen to music, so I listen to my favorite songs while I'm walking.

Use plural 'songs' to refer generally to favorite music; add a comma before 'so'. The original grammar is acceptable but 'favorite song' sounds specific; 'songs' is more natural.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. (Included for completeness.)

× No, I used to prefer stay at home when I was a child by doing something makes me feel relaxed and calm, such as watching some Netflix, playing the piano and studying sometimes.

✓ No, I used to prefer staying at home when I was a child, doing things that made me feel relaxed and calm, such as watching Netflix, playing the piano, and studying sometimes.

After 'prefer' use the -ing form ('prefer staying'). 'Doing something makes me feel' should be 'doing things that made me feel' to match past tense and plural 'things'. 'Netflix' does not need 'some'. Use commas to separate items in a list.

× But recently I've become too like walking, it's actually good for me.

✓ But recently I've come to like walking; it's actually good for me.

Use the phrase 'come to like' to express a new liking. 'Become too like' is incorrect. Replace comma splice with a semicolon or separate sentences.

× I guess the reason for this is because they were able to get a fresh air because they if they just stuck in the house, that's not really healthy and there will be a mental issue as well.

✓ I guess the reason is that they are able to get fresh air; if they just stay stuck in the house, that's not really healthy and there can be mental health problems as well.

Remove redundant 'for this' and use 'is that'. 'Get a fresh air' should be 'get fresh air' (no article). 'Were able' conflicts with general present idea; use present 'are able'. 'They if they just stuck' is ungrammatical; restructure: 'if they stay stuck'. 'There will be a mental issue' is awkward; use 'there can be mental health problems' to sound natural.

× So if they go out to walk in the park, it's really good for their health.

✓ So if they go out to walk in the park, it's really good for their health.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed.

× If I have a chance I would love to go to the beach because when I have stress or when I am feeling depressed for some reason I always watch the videos of the ocean on the YouTube.

✓ If I had the chance, I would love to go to the beach because when I am stressed or feeling depressed for some reason, I always watch videos of the ocean on YouTube.

Use the subjunctive/second conditional: 'If I had the chance' with 'would'. 'Have stress' is better as 'am stressed'. Remove 'the' before 'YouTube' and 'the videos' -> 'videos'. Add commas for clarity.

× So the ocean will definitely makes me feel relaxed.

✓ So the ocean will definitely make me feel relaxed.

After 'will' use the base form 'make', not 'makes'. This is a third person singular verb form error with future auxiliary.

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where did you go for a walk recently?

'Lately' is typically used with present perfect; with past simple use 'recently'. Change 'lately' to 'recently' to match 'did you go'.

× I went to the place where I used to live in.

✓ I went to the place where I used to live.

Avoid ending the clause with the preposition 'in' when 'where' already expresses location. 'Where I used to live' is sufficient and more natural.

× The place makes me feel kind of nostalgic and it's really nice to give a flashback from them.

✓ The place makes me feel kind of nostalgic, and it really brings back memories for me.

'Give a flashback from them' is unidiomatic and incorrect pronoun use. Use 'bring back memories' or 'give me flashbacks'. 'Them' is unclear; specify 'for me' or use active phrasing.