Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Говорите более связно и кратко: начните с прямого ответа, затем приведите 1–2 конкретные причины. Избегайте повторов и лишних слов (например, «just», «really» несколько раз). Постарайтесь построить ответ из 2–3 предложений и использовать связки (because, so, therefore).

Ejemplo: Not really. I study online every day, so I spend most of my time sitting and doing homework. Because of this busy schedule, I rarely have time for regular walks.

Sugerencia: Говорите в прошедшем времени последовательно, избегайте заиканий и повторов. Начинайте с темы (Yes, I did), затем приведите конкретные примеры (игры, катание на велосипеде) и используйте связку (for example, such as). Ограничьте ответ 2–3 предложениями.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. As a child I loved playing outside with my friends; for example, we often cycled and rode scooters around the neighborhood. Those activities kept us very active.

Sugerencia: Сформулируйте ответ грамотно: начните с общей причины, затем добавьте конкретные преимущества. Избегайте незавершённых фраз и повторов («so much, much more»). Используйте связки (because, therefore, which helps).

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because of the peaceful natural surroundings. The fresh air and greenery relax the mind and restore energy, so many prefer parks to busy streets.

Sugerencia: Избегайте повторений фразы «I would like» и говорите более конкретно. Начните с прямого ответа (I would like to walk in Switzerland), затем дайте 1–2 конкретные причины (mountains, scenery, fresh air). Закончите завершённым предложением.

Ejemplo: I would love to take a long walk in Switzerland. The mountainous landscapes and green valleys offer stunning views and fresh air, which would make the walk very relaxing.

Sugerencia: Дайте ясный и логичный рассказ в прошедшем времени: начните с «The last time I went for a walk…», затем укажите с кем и где, и опишите одно конкретное действие или впечатление. Избегайте противоречий (outside/inside).

Ejemplo: The last time I went for a walk was with my sister and her husband. We walked in the park near the Tashkent City Hotel and enjoyed a long stroll around the paths.

× I don't really walk a lot because I have lessons or online lessons every day.

✓ I don't really walk much because I have lessons or online lessons every day.

The phrase 'a lot' is acceptable but 'walk a lot' is less natural with 'don't really'. Use 'much' for negative sentences. Also 'lessons or online lessons' is redundant; keep as given to limit changes.

× That's why I have to just sit and do my home assignments.

✓ That's why I just have to sit and do my homework.

Word order 'have to just sit' is awkward; place 'just' before the main verb phrase: 'just have to'. 'Home assignments' is non-native; use 'homework'. Use: 'That's why I just have to sit and do my homework.'

× For this reason, I can't really have time for walking or just another activities.

✓ For this reason, I don't really have time for walking or other activities.

'Can't really have time' is awkward in meaning; use 'don't really have time'. 'Another activities' mixes singular 'another' with plural 'activities'; use 'other activities'. Suggestion: 'For this reason, I don't really have time for walking or other activities.'

× when I was a child, I love, I love it just, uh, working and how can I say, playing with my friends, we were doing a lot of things, stuffs like we played a lot of games called, for example, cycling and riding.

✓ When I was a child, I loved playing with my friends; we did a lot of things, for example cycling and riding bikes.

Mixing past and present tenses: 'was a child' requires past 'loved' not present 'love'. 'Working' is inappropriate; 'playing' is correct. 'Stuffs' is nonstandard; use 'things'. 'Played a lot of games called' is awkward; use 'for example cycling and riding bikes.' Suggestion: Keep verbs in past when referring to childhood.

× we were doing a lot of things, stuffs like we played a lot of games called, for example, cycling and riding.

✓ We did a lot of things, such as cycling and riding bikes.

Preposition/connector 'like' and phrase 'called' are unnecessary. Use 'such as' to introduce examples. Also 'cycling and riding' needs an object; 'riding bikes' clarifies meaning.

× From my perspective, why they love walking parks because if you walk in park, there will be peaceful nature and it gives you so much, much more energy than it was before.

✓ From my perspective, people like walking in parks because the peaceful nature there gives you much more energy than before.

Original has wrong word order and missing subjects. Remove redundant 'why' and correct 'walk in park' to 'walk in parks' with article or plural. 'It gives you so much, much more energy than it was before' is ungrammatical; use 'gives you much more energy than before.' Suggestion: Keep clear subject and concise comparative phrase.

× So I would rather walk in parks rather than.

✓ So I would rather walk in parks.

Sentence ends incomplete with 'rather than' needing comparison object. Remove trailing 'rather than' to complete thought. Ensure no dangling comparative.

× If I had a chance, I would like I would like to go to Switzerland.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to go to Switzerland.

Repetition 'I would like I would like' is an error; remove duplicate. 'A chance' is acceptable but 'the chance' is more natural here. Keep conditional structure consistent.

× And the reason is just there are a lot of St. mountains and always there are green and that's why I love this kind of nature and atmosphere is so good.

✓ The reason is that there are many mountains and everything is green, which is why I love that kind of nature and the atmosphere is so good.

'St. mountains' is unclear; likely 'mountains'. 'Always there are green' is incorrect; use 'everything is green' or 'it is always green'. Add 'that' or 'which' to connect clauses. Include definite article 'the atmosphere'.

× So I wanna like be.

✓ So I want to be there.

Colloquial 'wanna like be' is incomplete and informal. Use full form 'want to' and include location 'there' to complete the idea: 'So I want to be there.'

× The last time I had a walk with my sister, she was married with her husband and we planned to walk outside the park.

✓ The last time I went for a walk with my sister, she was with her husband and we planned to walk outside the park.

'Had a walk' is acceptable but 'went for a walk' is more natural. 'Was married with her husband' is incorrect; use 'was with her husband' to indicate he accompanied her. Keep past tense consistent.

× Inside the park, but outside the Tashkent City Hotel, we were walking a lot.

✓ We walked a lot inside the park near the Tashkent City Hotel.

Original mixes contrasting prepositions 'inside' and 'outside' confusingly. Use 'inside the park near the Tashkent City Hotel' to clarify location. Simplify verb to past 'walked'.