Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give 1–2 specific reasons using correct grammar and natural phrasing. Avoid repetition (e.g. 'home' and 'outside') and incorrect verb forms. Use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Not really. I rarely walk because my job keeps me busy and I prefer relaxing at home. For example, I usually spend evenings reading or watching TV instead of going for a walk.

Sugerencia: Use correct tense and verb forms, and make the response more natural. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and one brief detail. Use linking words like 'because' and correct gerund/infinitive forms.

Ejemplo: No, I didn't go for walks often as a child because my parents wanted me to focus on my studies. As a result, I spent most of my free time doing homework or attending extra lessons.

Sugerencia: Even if you don't share the opinion, give a possible reason. Start with a brief topic sentence offering a general reason, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid saying you don't understand; instead, speculate politely.

Ejemplo: Many people enjoy walking in parks because the environment is peaceful and green. For instance, parks offer fresh air and a chance to relax away from traffic, which helps people de-stress.

Sugerencia: Be decisive and coherent. Choose one scenario and explain it clearly. Use a conditional structure correctly and give a vivid, specific detail about the place. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the seaside because I find the sound of waves very calming. Walking by the shore would help me relax and clear my mind after a busy week.

Sugerencia: Answer clearly and use correct past tense. If you haven't walked recently, say so directly and give a brief reason or exception. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases like 'no memorialize'.

Ejemplo: I haven't gone for a walk in the past year because I've been very busy with work. The last time I walked was more than three years ago when I visited a nearby park with my family.

× No, working is not an activity that can attract me, so I always stay in the home and be lazy to go out of outside.

✓ No, working is not an activity that attracts me, so I usually stay at home and am too lazy to go outside.

Errors: incorrect use of 'can attract me' (awkward/modal unnecessary) and 'be lazy to go out of outside' (wrong verb form and preposition). Type 10 applies because 'be' needed correct present form 'am' (present participle/verb form issue) and verbs must agree with subject. Suggestions: use simple present 'attracts' for habitual fact, use 'stay at home' (preposition 'at'), use 'am too lazy to go outside' for natural expression.

× Actually not, because I have to focusing on study that my parents ordered me to do, so I have no time to go out.

✓ Actually not, because I had to focus on my studies as my parents ordered me to, so I had no time to go out.

Error: tense and verb form mismatch. The context asks about childhood (past), so use past tense 'had to' and past infinitive 'focus' not 'focusing'. Also 'study' should be plural 'studies' and relative clause reorder 'as my parents ordered me to'. Suggestion: match tense to context and use base verb after 'have to' in past ('had to focus').

× I don't understand, please don't ask me like this questions because I have no such feelings and it's hard for me to understand their mind.

✓ I don't understand; please don't ask me questions like this because I don't have such feelings and it's hard for me to understand their thoughts.

Errors: word order 'like this questions' should be 'questions like this' (word order issue tied to quantifier/determiner), 'have no such feelings' more natural 'don't have such feelings', 'their mind' should be plural 'their thoughts'. Suggestion: correct word order and use plural 'thoughts' for people's minds.

× First, if I have the chance to rest or something, I wouldn't choose to have a walk, but in another world, if I have to do something like work, I prefer to walk beside the sea.

✓ First, if I have the chance to rest, I wouldn't choose to take a walk; but in another situation, if I have to work, I would prefer to walk by the sea.

Errors: 'have a walk' -> 'take a walk', inconsistent conditional/modal forms: use 'would prefer' for hypothetical and 'wouldn't choose' consistent. 'In another world' is wrong idiom; use 'in another situation'. 'Beside the sea' better 'by the sea'. Suggestion: use correct collocations ('take a walk', 'prefer to'), and keep conditional forms consistent.

× Uh, maybe in the past one year I never go for a walk and uh, actually in the past three years I have no memorialize that I may have.

✓ Uh, maybe in the past year I didn't go for a walk, and actually in the past three years I don't have any memories of doing so.

Errors: tense and verb forms: 'never go' should be past 'didn't go' for a past period; 'have no memorialize that I may have' is incorrect word choice and form — use 'don't have any memories of doing so'. Suggestion: use correct past tense for actions in a past period and use 'memory/memories' noun form with 'of doing' to refer to past events.