Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I walk a lot.) then give one or two specific reasons or habits. Avoid repetition and grammar errors (e.g., "I stay working" is incorrect). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk every evening because it helps me stay healthy after a long day of work, and I often walk near my office to clear my mind before going home.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and a concise supporting detail with correct grammar. Mention a specific memory or frequency to make it more vivid. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect cause and effect.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went for walks as a child because my father had the habit of walking every evening. I used to accompany him after his work, and that routine stayed with me into adulthood.

Sugerencia: Be more structured: start with a topic sentence listing main reasons, then give one or two specific examples. Avoid repetition and correct weak phrasing ("So is very different from walking" is unclear). Use linking words such as "for example" or "also".

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks mainly because of the fresh air and pleasant scenery. For example, parks have lots of trees and benches where you can rest, so walking there feels relaxing compared with walking on busy streets.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, confident answer and avoid filler words. If you cannot remember the name, describe the place precisely and explain why you want to go there. Keep it to one topic sentence and one supporting detail using linking words like "because" or "so".

Ejemplo: I would like to take a long walk on the famous footbridge in Singapore because it offers great views from the top and is known for being a pleasant place to stroll and relax.

Sugerencia: Answer clearly with one concise topic sentence saying where you walked, then add specific details (what the place is like, when you go, who is there). Avoid unclear or incorrect words and remove hesitations. Use linking words like "every evening" or "because" to make it coherent.

Ejemplo: Recently I have been walking every evening in the park near my house. It has a wide open lawn and a big white gazebo, and I often see children playing and adults exercising there, which makes it feel lively and safe.

× I work a lot like almost every week, almost every evening.

✓ I work a lot, almost every week and almost every evening.

The original has awkward 'like' and punctuation; verb tense is present simple which is fine but sentence structure needs correction for fluency. Remove 'like' and join time expressions with 'and' to make the meaning clear.

× I walk because walking makes the body healthy.

✓ I walk because walking keeps the body healthy.

Present simple is correct, but collocation 'make the body healthy' is unnatural. Use 'keeps the body healthy' for natural present-tense description of habitual effects.

× I would say even though I have to walk in my workplace, I I stay working.

✓ I would say that even though I have to walk at my workplace, I keep working.

Errors: awkward phrase and repetition 'I I'. Use preposition 'at' for workplace, and use 'keep working' to show continuous habitual action. 'Would say that' introduces the clause.

× I am stay working outside of the work to make healthier my body.

✓ I work outside of my job to improve my health.

Original mixes 'am stay working' (incorrect verb form) and awkward word order 'make healthier my body'. Use simple present 'work' for habitual action and natural phrasing 'to improve my health.'

× Yes, my honestly my dad, my dad gave me that habit.

✓ Yes, honestly my dad gave me that habit.

Redundant 'my' and repetition 'my dad' disrupt fluency. Remove the extra possessive and one repetition to make the sentence grammatical and natural.

× My dad also a worker, he used to work almost every evening, so I accompany him.

✓ My dad was also a worker; he used to work almost every evening, so I accompanied him.

Mix of present and past. 'Used to' indicates past habitual action, so surrounding verbs should be past: change 'am' to 'was' (or 'was also a worker') and 'accompany' to past 'accompanied' to match tense.

× Since then I got that habit until now.

✓ Since then I have had that habit until now.

Use present perfect 'have had' to express an action that started in the past and continues to the present. 'Got' (simple past) is inconsistent with 'until now.'

× I think because of the fresh air and the view, because parks, in the parks we can get a lot of fresh air, then we can enjoy the view.

✓ I think it's because of the fresh air and the scenery; in parks we can get a lot of fresh air and enjoy the view.

Redundant phrasing and incorrect preposition use 'parks, in the parks'. Simplify to 'in parks'. Use 'scenery' rather than repeating 'view', and join clauses for clarity.

× Like a lot of green places are there and you you can sit on the benches when you are tired.

✓ There are many green areas where you can sit on benches when you are tired.

Original word order is incorrect ('Like a lot of green places are there') and has repetition 'you you'. Reorder to subject-verb-object form: 'There are many green areas where you can sit on benches...' for grammatical correctness.

× So is very different from walking.

✓ So it is very different from walking in the street.

Missing subject 'it' and unclear comparison. Add subject and clarify what 'it' refers to (walking in parks vs other walking), completing the sentence structure.

× If I have a chance, I would like to go to like a bridge in Singapore.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to go to a bridge in Singapore.

First conditional mixed forms: use 'If I had the chance' (unreal present) with 'would like'. Remove extra 'like' for clarity.

× I, I'm sorry, I don't remember the name, but is famous for walking.

✓ I'm sorry, I don't remember the name, but it is famous for walking.

Missing subject 'it' before 'is famous'. Keep one 'I' and join clauses properly for fluent speech.

× They said that we can like enjoy the sense of you, uh, after you, after you, after you reach on the top of it.

✓ They say you can enjoy the view after you reach the top of it.

Tense should be present 'They say' for general statements. Remove filler repetitions 'after you' and incorrect phrase 'sense of you'; use 'enjoy the view' and 'reach the top.' Also 'reach on the top' should be 'reach the top.' },{