Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and filler words (uh, um). Use correct phrases for travel (e.g. "on my own" or "by myself") and a clear reason phrase (e.g. "because it's convenient"). Keep to at most 4–5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I walk to university every day because I prefer not to use public transport, and the campus is within walking distance. I also enjoy walking because it helps me relax and stay fit.

Sugerencia: Provide a correct and fluent past habit statement and add one or two specific details. Fix incorrect word choices (e.g. 'used to go' not 'used to wear to go') and reduce hesitations. Use linking words like 'also' or 'because' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to go for walks to a park near our house. It had exercise equipment and many people went there to jog or walk, and I often went with my parents in the evenings because we enjoyed the fresh air.

Sugerencia: Give a clearer, well-structured answer with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words ('firstly', 'in addition', 'because') and avoid vague phrases like 'equipped to walk'. Instead say 'have walking paths, benches, and exercise equipment'. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because they offer wide, traffic-free paths and pleasant scenery. In addition, parks often have benches and exercise equipment, so people feel safer and more comfortable exercising there.

Sugerencia: Use a clear conditional phrase ('If I had the chance') and give specific descriptive details about the place and why you would go there. Avoid repetition and fillers. Mention concrete features (e.g. 'tall trees, trails, streams') and one reason (relaxation, nature).

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would walk in a large forest on the other side of town that many people recommend. It has tall trees, winding trails and a stream, so I would enjoy the peace and fresh air there.

Sugerencia: Use correct past tense ('I went') and give a complete, coherent answer. State the place, what you did there, and one specific detail. Avoid leaving sentences unfinished. Keep responses natural and under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Lately I went for a walk with a friend in the green space at Olympic City in Menza. Many people exercise there, and we walked along the main path while watching others play sports.

× Yes, I work a lot.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot.

The student answered about walking but said 'I work a lot,' which does not match the question 'Do you walk a lot?'. This is a content mismatch rather than a pure grammar error; however it also involves present tense usage. Use the simple present to describe habitual actions. Suggestion: answer with 'I walk a lot' or 'Yes, I usually walk a lot.'

× I need to work every day because I go to university on my, by my own.

✓ I need to go every day because I attend university on my own.

The phrase 'go to university on my, by my own' has incorrect preposition and reflexive phrasing. Use 'attend university' or 'go to university' and the correct idiom is 'on my own' (meaning alone). Remove 'by' and the extra comma. Suggestion: 'I go to university on my own' or 'I attend university by myself.'

× I don't use the transport, transport, uh, ways.

✓ I don't use public transport.

'The transport, transport ways' is ungrammatical. Use the noun phrase 'public transport' or 'public transportation' without 'the' in this general statement. Suggestion: 'I don't use public transport' or 'I don't use buses or trains.'

× And uh, I'm keen on walking because uh, it's, uh, it's uh, the easiest activity to keep.

✓ And I'm keen on walking because it's the easiest activity to maintain.

'To keep' is incorrect after 'activity' here; the correct choice is the verb 'maintain' or the gerund 'to keep fit' depending on intended meaning. Use 'maintain' or rephrase 'to keep fit.' Suggestion: '...the easiest activity to maintain' or '...the easiest way to keep fit.'

× Yes, I used to wear to go to a park near to our house.

✓ Yes, I used to go to a park near our house.

'Used to wear to go' is incorrect; likely 'used to go' is intended. Also 'near to our house' should be 'near our house.' Use simple past habitual 'used to go.' Suggestion: 'I used to go to a park near our house.'

× It's equipped and uh, most of people go there to, uh, practice some exercises and, uh, walking.

✓ It's equipped, and most people go there to exercise and walk.

'Most of people' is incorrect; use 'most people.' 'Practice some exercises' is awkward; use 'exercise.' Also 'walking' should be 'walk' to parallel 'exercise.' Suggestion: 'Most people go there to exercise and walk.'

× I used to go with my parents at night and it was really, uh, enjoyable.

✓ I used to go with my parents at night, and it was really enjoyable.

This sentence mainly needs punctuation; preposition 'at night' is acceptable. Remove filler ums and add a comma. Suggestion: 'I used to go with my parents at night, and it was really enjoyable.'

× I think that people like to walk in parks because, uh, it's a big space that can make them walk for a long time.

✓ I think people like walking in parks because they provide large spaces where people can walk for a long time.

Original is wordy and has awkward structure 'that can make them walk.' Use clearer relative clause and plural/plural agreement: 'parks...they provide large spaces where people can walk for a long time.' Suggestion: 'Parks provide large spaces where people can walk for a long time.'

× Also, parks are equipped to walk and practice some exercises so people are safe there, umm, rather than walking in, uh, places that are not, uh, equipped or established to.

✓ Also, parks are equipped for walking and exercise, so people are safer there than in places that are not equipped for these activities.

Use 'equipped for' not 'equipped to.' 'Practice some exercises' -> 'exercise.' 'Safer' is comparative and needs 'than.' 'Established to' is incorrect; use 'equipped for these activities.' Suggestion: 'Parks are equipped for walking and exercise, so people are safer there.'

× If I have a chance, I want to go to a big forest in, uh, in, uh, the other side of the town.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to go to a large forest on the other side of town.

Conditional mismatch: the hypothetical should use the second conditional 'If I had... I would...' Also use 'on the other side of town' and 'would like' is more polite than 'want.' Suggestion: 'If I had the chance, I would like to go to a large forest on the other side of town.'

× I know, uh, about, uh, one forest that, uh, is popular and uh, so many people talk about it.

✓ I know about a forest that is popular and that many people talk about.

Remove fillers and use 'a forest' (indefinite article). 'So many people' is fine but 'that many people talk about it' needs restructuring: avoid redundant 'it' after 'that.' Suggestion: 'I know a forest that is popular and that many people talk about.'

× It's really beautiful and there are plenty trees, uh, and the space is equipped also.

✓ It's really beautiful and there are plenty of trees, and the area is also well equipped.

'Plenty trees' requires 'of' -> 'plenty of trees.' 'Space' is better as 'area' in this context and 'equipped also' should be 'also well equipped.' Suggestion: 'There are plenty of trees and the area is well equipped.'

× Lately I go for work with my friend in the green space at the Olympic City in Menza.

✓ Lately I have been going for walks with my friend in the green space at Olympic City in Menza.

Tense choice: 'lately' with ongoing recent activity takes present perfect continuous 'have been going.' 'Go for work' is incorrect — likely 'go for walks.' Use plural 'walks' and 'with my friend.' Suggestion: 'Lately I have been going for walks with my friend...'

× It's a popular place, there are so many people that come and practice sports there.

✓ It's a popular place; many people come there to practice sports.

Comma splice: two independent clauses joined by a comma should be separated properly (semicolon or conjunction). 'So many people that come' is awkward; use 'many people come there to practice sports.' Suggestion: 'It's a popular place; many people come to practice sports.'

× Also it's mentioned as a place of.

✓ Also, it is mentioned as a good place for recreation.

The sentence is incomplete ('a place of' what?). Complete the thought: 'a place for recreation' or 'a popular place for exercise.' Suggestion: 'It is also regarded as a good place for recreation.'