Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, grammatically correct, and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + degree), use correct tense and pronouns, avoid invented names for services, and give one specific supporting detail. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Not really. I only walk short distances, mainly from my dorm to campus because it is nearby. For other errands I usually use ride‑hailing apps or public transport.

Sugerencia: Use correct past tense and clearer vocabulary. Begin with a direct answer, then give a specific example of who encouraged walking and when. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g., "wall cloth"). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My mother often took me for morning walks and short jogs in the neighborhood, so walking has been a habit for me since childhood.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and then add two specific reasons with linking words. Use correct adjectives and collocations (e.g., "calm atmosphere", "feel more refreshing"). Keep sentences natural and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because the atmosphere is calmer and less crowded. Also, the greenery and shade make walks more refreshing and relaxing.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then provide two concrete reasons. Use correct names and nouns, and avoid unclear words (e.g., "Fergie"). Mention specific features of the campus (paths, gardens) and linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I would like to take a long walk around my university campus because it has wide paths and open green spaces. Moreover, the shady trees and quiet environment make it pleasant for a long walk.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer about recent walking frequency, then give a specific recent example with clear time reference and correct verbs. Avoid vague phrasing and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I haven't had much time recently, but last week I went for a short walk near my dorm. I walked in the morning for about 20 minutes as part of my exercise routine.

× I usually only walk to the campus because it is near to my dorm where I currently live in.

✓ I usually only walk to the campus because it is near my dorm where I currently live.

The phrase 'near to' is incorrect here; 'near' does not need the preposition 'to' when followed by a noun. Also 'live in' at the end is redundant when you have 'my dorm' before it. Remove 'to' and the final 'in' to make the sentence natural and grammatically correct. Grammar problem type ID:2

× I could say that I were a little woke.

✓ I could say that I was a little awake.

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the past singular subject 'I' in a statement; use 'was'. Additionally, 'woke' is slang and inappropriate here; use 'awake' or 'tired'. The corrected sentence uses past tense 'was' which matches 'could say'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Other than that I never walk and I really rely on online transportation such as go check and go Kart.

✓ Other than that, I never walk and I really rely on online transportation services such as Gojek and Go-Kart.

Proper nouns and service names need correct capitalization and spacing. 'Gojek' is a single proper name; 'go Kart' is incorrect; if referring to a ride service, name it correctly. Also add a comma after the introductory clause. The pronoun use was acceptable, but the issue is proper noun and idiom usage which fits under pronoun/word choice here. Grammar problem type ID:12

× As I remember, yes, I used to have a wall cloth when I were a child because my parents, especially my mom, love to walk and jogging at the morning.

✓ As I remember, yes, I used to wear a walking cloak when I was a child because my parents, especially my mom, loved to walk and jog in the morning.

Use 'was' (singular past) instead of 'were' for 'I'. 'Have a wall cloth' is incorrect; likely meant 'wear a walking cloak' or similar. 'Love' should be past tense 'loved' to match 'used to' and 'was a child'. 'Jogging' should be the base form 'jog' after 'and'. Use 'in the morning' instead of 'at the morning'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× So until now, I'm an adult, I also like to walk.

✓ So even now that I'm an adult, I still like to walk.

Tense and temporal expression need smoothing: 'until now' with 'I'm an adult' is awkward; 'even now that I'm an adult' fits better. Use 'still' instead of 'also' for continuity. This corrects present tense usage and improves naturalness. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Honestly I think it's because the ambience in parks is different.

✓ Honestly, I think it's because the ambience of parks is different.

Use the preposition 'of' to indicate belonging or characteristic ('ambience of parks') rather than 'in' which suggests location. Also add a comma after 'Honestly' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:11

× It has their own calmness, mindful and sometimes it's feel colder to walk in parks.

✓ They have their own calmness and a mindful atmosphere, and sometimes it feels cooler to walk in parks.

Subject-verb agreement: use 'They have' to refer to parks. 'Mindful' is an adjective but needs a noun like 'atmosphere'. 'It's feel' is incorrect; use 'it feels'. Use 'cooler' rather than 'colder' depending on intended comparison; 'cooler' is more natural here. This fixes adjective/adverb and verb form errors. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Definitely in my campus, which is universities Indonesia, because on my campus there are many roads, an open space that we can walk or running or jogging there.

✓ Definitely on my campus, which is Universitas Indonesia, because there are many paths and open spaces where we can walk, run, or jog.

Preposition for campus is 'on' not 'in' in this context. Use the correct name 'Universitas Indonesia'. 'Roads' is better as 'paths' for walking; 'an open space that we can walk or running or jogging there' is ungrammatical—use 'open spaces where we can walk, run, or jog'. Remove redundant 'there'. This addresses pronoun and word choice problems. Grammar problem type ID:12

× And I choose there because it's Fergie has good ambiance, like it's very cold.

✓ And I choose it because it has a good ambiance; for example, it's often quite cool.

'Choose there' is wrong — choose 'it' (the campus). 'It's Fergie' is meaningless; likely a mishearing. 'Has good ambiance' is acceptable but smoother as 'has a good ambiance'. Use 'cool' not 'cold' to describe pleasant temperature. This corrects adjective/adverb misuse and unclear reference. Grammar problem type ID:13

× To be honest, lately I don't really have time to walk, but last time at the last week I woke near my dorm so it's just around my dorm.

✓ To be honest, lately I haven't really had time to walk, but last week I walked near my dorm, so it was just around my dorm.

Use present perfect 'haven't had' for recent indefinite past continuing to present ('lately'). 'Last time at the last week' is redundant; use 'last week'. 'I woke near my dorm' is incorrect—use 'I walked'. Match past tense consistently: 'it was just around my dorm'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I walk at the morning to do some exercise and then I go back to my dorm again.

✓ I walk in the morning to get some exercise and then I go back to my dorm.

Use 'in the morning' not 'at the morning'. 'To do some exercise' is acceptable but 'to get some exercise' is more natural. Remove redundant 'again' since 'go back' already implies returning. Grammar problem type ID:11