Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct, correct basic grammar, avoid redundancy and stay within 3–4 sentences. Begin with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then briefly give one reason and a concise time reference. Use correct verb forms and vocabulary (walk vs. work; recently).

Ejemplo: No, I don't walk much recently because I have been very busy preparing for the IELTS exam. I usually study for several hours a day, so I only manage short walks on the weekend to relax.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) then give specific supporting details. Avoid filler words and repetition. Use correct expressions (rural area, not enough what? — clarify). Provide one or two coherent reasons using linking words like because or so.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often walked outside as a child because I lived in a rural area with plenty of fields and paths. There was little traffic, so walking was safe and part of our daily routine.

Sugerencia: Give a concise topic sentence and then list two clear, specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, such as). Remove hesitations and use accurate collocations (breathe fresh air, hear birdsong, enjoy nature).

Ejemplo: People walk in parks mainly to relax and unwind because parks offer fresh air and pleasant scenery. For example, they can breathe fresh air, hear birdsong, and enjoy being surrounded by greenery, which reduces stress.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear conditional sentence and give specific locations and reasons. Use correct nouns (forest, park) and avoid vague endings. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like because or and.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in a forest because I enjoy the quiet and the fresh air. I would also consider a large park with lakes and wide paths since those places are peaceful and scenic.

Sugerencia: Respond with a clear past-tense sentence naming the place and give one specific detail about when or why. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use correct grammar (near the forest region; my family often goes there for recreation).

Ejemplo: Recently, I went for a walk in the forest area just outside my city. My family often visits that area for recreation, so we went there last weekend to enjoy the trees and fresh air.

× No, I don't work a lot because latest days I'm so busy I prepare my IELTS exam that's why I don't have any time to walk.

✓ No, I don't walk a lot because these days I'm so busy preparing for my IELTS exam, so I don't have any time to walk.

Errors: incorrect verb choice 'work' instead of 'walk' (context), tense and form 'latest days' -> 'these days', sequence 'I prepare my IELTS exam' should be 'preparing for my IELTS exam', and run-on sentence needs conjunction. Suggestion: use 'these days' for current time, use gerund after 'busy' ('busy preparing'), use 'for' with 'prepare' when referring to an exam, and join clauses with 'so' or separate into two sentences. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I used to go outside to have a walk when I was a child because I lived in rural area.

✓ I used to go outside for walks when I was a child because I lived in a rural area.

Errors: 'to have a walk' is awkward; use 'for walks' or 'for a walk'. Missing article 'a' before 'rural area'. Suggestion: use 'used to' + base verb for habitual past and include articles where needed. Grammar problem type ID:5

× That time, our hometown, uh, wasn't enough. Any traffic congest, uh, traffic, transportation, transport.

✓ At that time, our hometown didn't have enough transportation, and there was frequent traffic congestion.

Errors: 'wasn't enough' lacks a clear subject and object; 'Any traffic congest' is ungrammatical. Use 'didn't have enough transportation' and 'traffic congestion' as a noun phrase. Include conjunctions to connect ideas. Suggestion: specify what was insufficient and use correct noun forms. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I think uh, people like to walk in parks, uh, to relieve their stress, such as umm B breathing fresh air, listening, chirping the birds, which means uh, feeling more wild nature.

✓ I think people like to walk in parks to relieve their stress, such as by breathing fresh air, listening to birds chirping, and feeling closer to nature.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'such as umm B' and incorrect verb forms: use 'by' + gerund ('breathing'), 'listening to' with gerund phrase, and 'birds chirping' as reduced clause. 'Feeling more wild nature' is unnatural; use 'feeling closer to nature'. Suggestion: use 'by' to introduce actions and correct gerund forms. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Uh, I tend to take a long walk if I had a chance. I prefer to walk a forest area and also parking area with uh, which uh are more?

✓ I would like to take a long walk if I had the chance. I prefer walking in a forested area or in a park, whichever is quieter.

Errors: mixed conditional and tense: 'I tend to take a long walk if I had a chance' should use conditional 'would' with past-subjunctive 'had'. 'Walk a forest area' lacks preposition and 'parking area' should be 'park'. The phrase 'which are more?' is unclear; replace with a clear preference. Suggestion: use 'would like' for hypothetical desires, 'walking in' for locations, and choose clear comparative phrase. Grammar problem type ID:7

× I did go for a walk to forest area umm in my city near from the forest region UH.

✓ I went for a walk in a forest area near my city recently.

Errors: unnecessary auxiliary 'did' in affirmative simple past, missing article 'a' before 'forest area', incorrect preposition 'near from' should be 'near' or 'not far from', and awkward word order. Suggestion: use simple past 'I went', include articles, and use correct prepositions. Grammar problem type ID:5

× For that reason my family umm always go to the UH for forestation.

✓ For that reason, my family always goes there for afforestation.

Errors: subject-verb agreement: 'family' as a collective noun takes singular verb 'goes' in this context. 'the UH' is unclear; use 'there' or the place name. 'Forestation' is better expressed as 'afforestation' or 'tree planting'. Suggestion: choose correct verb form for collective nouns and precise vocabulary. Grammar problem type ID:27