Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Clarify and correct sentence structure, use topic sentence, avoid repetition, and include linking words. Be specific about frequency and purpose. Keep within 3–4 sentences and use correct verbs and prepositions.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk quite regularly. I walk at least 15 minutes each way when I go to work, and sometimes I park farther from my building to get extra walking time. This helps me save time and stay active.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and avoid filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples and link them. Mention age ranges and activities with correct vocabulary (hiked, walked, long distances).

Ejemplo: Yes, I often walked outside as a child. For example, my parents and I used to go hiking on weekends, which meant walking several miles, and as a teenager I usually walked to school instead of taking a bus.

Sugerencia: Use natural adjectives and correct collocations (luxurious is odd—use pleasant/peaceful). Begin with a general reason, then add specific effects and personal experience with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'give me motivation and feel.'

Ejemplo: People enjoy walking in parks because the atmosphere is peaceful and relaxing. For instance, watching children play and seeing greenery can improve your mood. Personally, I find it motivating and refreshing to take regular walks there.

Sugerencia: Use conditional form correctly and be specific about one preferred place. Structure answer: condition, preferred place, reasons, and an alternative. Avoid repeating and unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would go hiking in the nearby hills because I enjoy longer trails and nature views. If I only had a short amount of time, I would choose the local park since it is familiar and convenient.

Sugerencia: Answer directly naming the place and use past tense for recent activity. Provide specifics about when and what you did. Avoid vague or incorrect geographic statements.

Ejemplo: Recently I went for a walk in a park about 30 minutes from my home. I went there last weekend and saw many people jogging, cycling, and exercising, which made it feel lively and safe for walking.

× Actually, yes, I really love work a lot.

✓ Actually, yes, I really love walking a lot.

The verb 'work' is incorrect in this context; the student means the activity of walking. Use the gerund 'walking' after 'love' to indicate a general preference. Also 'a lot' is fine for emphasis. Grammar problem type IDs: 6 (Present tense issue) and 8 (Verb + -ing form).

× When going to my work every day I work at least 15 minutes from my home going to my work or sometimes if I am in a hurry I just park my car on far away from the entrance of our building.

✓ When I go to work every day, it takes me at least 15 minutes to get there from my home, or sometimes if I am in a hurry I just park my car a bit farther from the entrance of our building.

Multiple errors: 'When going to my work' should be 'When I go to work' (subject needed). 'I work at least 15 minutes' is incorrect — use 'it takes me at least 15 minutes' or 'it is at least a 15-minute walk'. 'on far away' is wrong preposition and word form; use 'a bit farther' or 'farther away'. Also add commas for clarity. Grammar problem type IDs: 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions).

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside for a walk when you were a child?

Question form 'Did you often go...' is correct but 'to have a walk' is unnatural; use 'for a walk'. No tense change needed. This corrects verb phrase choice and collocation. Grammar problem type ID: 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions).

× Yes, I really love to walk when I was a child, uh, with my parents, uh, we do also hiking so that we could work a longer miles.

✓ Yes, I really loved to walk when I was a child with my parents. We also did hiking so that we could walk longer distances.

The time frame is past ('when I was a child'), so 'love' should be past 'loved'. 'We do also hiking' should be past simple 'We also did hiking' or 'We also went hiking'. 'work a longer miles' is incorrect verb and number; use 'walk longer distances'. Grammar problem type IDs: 5 (Past tense issue), 8 (Verb + -ing form), and 1 (Singular and plural issue).

× And when I reach teenager, I also do a lot of walking going to my school. I didn't ride a lot of.

✓ And when I reached my teenage years, I also did a lot of walking to go to school. I didn't ride very often.

Past context requires 'reached' not 'reach'. 'Teenager' should be 'teenage years' or 'when I was a teenager'. 'do a lot of walking going to my school' is awkward; use 'did a lot of walking to get to school'. 'I didn't ride a lot of' is incomplete; specify 'very often' or 'bicycles very often'. Grammar problem type IDs: 5 (Past tense issue) and 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× It is because it's very lux, relaxing and calming when walking to the park.

✓ It is because it's very lush, relaxing, and calming to walk in the park.

'lux' is not correct; perhaps 'luxurious' or 'lush' fits better—'lush' describes parks. For walking, use the infinitive or 'to walk in the park' rather than 'when walking to the park' (which implies going toward it). Add commas in a list. Article use 'the park' is fine if referring generally to parks: 'in the park' or 'in parks'. Grammar problem type IDs: 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs) and 17 (Incorrect use of the definite article).

× Seeing those children are running around will boost the mood of the person.

✓ Seeing those children running around boosts a person's mood.

Use a gerund clause 'Seeing those children running around' followed by present simple 'boosts' to express a general truth. 'Will boost' is future and unnecessary; 'the person' is awkward—use 'a person's mood'. Grammar problem type IDs: 6 (Present tense issue) and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs).

× For me personally, I love walking to the park and seeing those children enjoying playing with their parents and friends.

✓ For me personally, I love walking to the park and seeing children enjoy playing with their parents and friends.

'Seeing those children enjoying playing' is redundant; use 'seeing children enjoy playing' or 'seeing children playing'. Keep verb forms parallel: 'love walking... and seeing...'. Grammar problem type IDs: 8 (Verb + -ing form) and 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× It gives me motivation and feel.

✓ It gives me motivation and makes me feel happy/encouraged.

'Feel' needs an object or complement; 'gives me motivation and feel' is ungrammatical. Use 'makes me feel' plus adjective, e.g., 'happy' or 'encouraged'. Grammar problem type IDs: 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs).

× If I will have a chance, I would like to have a walk at the parking near our place or do hiking first.

✓ If I had a chance, I would like to take a walk in the park near our place or go hiking first.

In conditional sentences about hypothetical situations, use past tense in the if-clause: 'If I had a chance'. 'Have a walk at the parking' is wrong; use 'take a walk in the park'. 'Do hiking' should be 'go hiking'. Grammar problem type IDs: 7 (Future tense issue) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions).

× I want to go to the park near a place because it's familiar for me and if I don't have a lot of time do the hiking I just go to the park and if will give me a chance for a long weekend I would like to try.

✓ I want to go to the nearby park because it's familiar to me, and if I don't have time to go hiking I will just go to the park. If I have a chance for a long weekend, I would like to try hiking.

Numerous issues: 'the park near a place' unclear—use 'the nearby park'. 'Familiar for me' should be 'familiar to me'. Use 'time to go hiking'. 'If will give me a chance' is incorrect; reorder and use proper conditional forms. Split into clearer sentences. Grammar problem type IDs: 17 (Incorrect use of the definite article), 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), and 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where have you gone for a walk lately?

The adverb 'lately' pairs with the present perfect to ask about recent experiences: 'Have you gone' rather than simple past 'Did you go'. Grammar problem type ID: 6 (Present tense issue).

× Australia is just a couple away from our home.

✓ Australia is just a couple of hours away from our home.

'A couple away' is incomplete; include the unit 'of hours' or 'of kilometers' as appropriate. Also consider whether 'Australia' is meant or a local area — if meant, the distance should be specified. This fixes missing noun after 'couple'. Grammar problem type ID: 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× I could find a park nearby.

✓ I can find a park nearby.

If speaking about a recurring or present ability, use present 'can' rather than past 'could'. If describing a past event, keep past but clarify context. Choose tense to match question about 'lately'. Grammar problem type ID: 6 (Present tense issue).

× It's just 30 minutes away from us and it's a good place to walk around.

✓ It's just 30 minutes away from us, and it's a good place to walk around.

Mainly punctuation: add a comma for clarity. Tense and article are acceptable. No major grammar change needed. Grammar problem type ID: 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× You will see a lot of people do their exercise, do jogging, running, biking and a lot of outdoor activities.

✓ You will see a lot of people exercising, jogging, running, biking, and doing many outdoor activities.

Use gerunds to list activities: 'exercising, jogging, running, biking'. 'Do their exercise' is unnatural; use 'exercise' or 'exercising'. 'A lot of outdoor activities' -> 'many outdoor activities'. Grammar problem type IDs: 8 (Verb + -ing form) and 14 (Incorrect use of quantifiers).