Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your response direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence saying whether you walk a lot, then give 1–2 specific reasons or details using linking words. Reduce repetition and keep to 2–3 sentences. Focus on correct verb forms and natural phrasing.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk quite a lot. I usually go to the nearby park after work because walking helps me clear my mind and relax, and I often take my child with me so we can spend time together.

Sugerencia: Answer directly using past tense and give one or two clear specific activities or memories. Use linking words like 'because' or 'and' to connect ideas. Avoid filler words and unfinished sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to walk outside almost every day when I was a child. I would go to the nearby park or ride my bicycle around the neighborhood because I loved playing outdoors and exploring with friends.

Sugerencia: Give a clear general reason and support it with specific benefits. Use linking phrases such as 'for example' or 'because' and avoid repetition. Keep sentences complete and grammatically correct.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because it is relaxing and good for their health. For example, being in green space reduces stress and walking regularly helps people stay fit and active.

Sugerencia: State your preferred place clearly and give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Use correct vocabulary for nature (e.g. 'wildlife' or 'plants') and avoid repeating phrases. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk in a forest or a national park. Being surrounded by nature is very relaxing and I would enjoy spotting wildlife and different plants while getting good exercise.

Sugerencia: Answer with a clear time phrase and correct past tense, then give one specific detail about the walk. Use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to connect ideas, and finish the sentence completely.

Ejemplo: Last weekend I went to the nearby park and walked for about 15 minutes with my family. I felt relaxed and enjoyed watching other families and children playing together.

× Guess I walk that I can a lot that I go to the park for walking in order to rest after a long day.

✓ I guess I walk a lot; I go to the park to walk and rest after a long day.

The original sentence has fragmented clauses and incorrect word order. Combine ideas clearly: 'I guess I walk a lot' is a complete clause. Use 'go to the park to walk and rest' to express purpose. Remove extra filler words like 'that' and 'for walking.' Use punctuation (semicolon) to separate related clauses. ID:26

× This is it's a vital way to clear my mind and relax me.

✓ It is a vital way to clear my mind and relax me.

The phrase 'This is it's' duplicates subjects and contains a contraction misuse. Replace with a single pronoun 'It is' or 'This is' and keep the structure 'clear my mind and relax me.' Avoid combining 'this' and 'it's.' ID:12

× So I go with my child every day.

✓ So I go with my child every day.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable. No change needed other than confirming pronoun 'my' correctly indicates possession. It fits the context and requires no correction. ID:12

× I used to go for a walk every day that I when I was a child that I remember I go to the nearby park in or maybe around or maybe sport or maybe riding with my bicycle around with my neighborhood.

✓ I used to go for a walk every day when I was a child. I remember riding my bicycle or walking around the nearby park and neighborhood.

Original mixes tenses and has redundant fillers ('that I', 'or maybe'). Use past tense consistently for past habits: 'I used to' and 'I remember' are correct. Simplify list of activities: 'riding my bicycle or walking around the nearby park and neighborhood.' Remove unnecessary words. ID:5

× This is a great way to.

✓ This is a great way to relax and have fun.

The sentence is incomplete; 'to' requires a following verb. Complete the idea with appropriate verbs such as 'relax' and 'have fun' to convey meaning. ID:26

× Of course, because that it is the the the people think this great way to join them as well as to become unwind and become fit and healthy.

✓ Of course, people think it is a great way to relax, socialize, and stay fit and healthy.

Original has redundant words ('the the the') and awkward pronoun placement. Use 'people think it is' rather than 'that it is the the the people think.' Use verbs 'relax, socialize, and stay fit and healthy' for clarity. 'Become unwind' is incorrect; use 'relax.' ID:12

× This is the way the working help them to stay fit, so they prefer to go to the.

✓ Walking helps them stay fit, so they prefer to go to parks.

Original contains unclear phrasing 'the way the working' and an unfinished clause ending with 'to the.' Use active subject 'Walking' and verb 'helps' to express cause. Complete the sentence with 'parks' to specify destination. ID:26

× If I could, if I could choice and then anywhere I would like to do take a walk in the international park or maybe forests.

✓ If I could choose anywhere, I would like to take a walk in an international park or maybe a forest.

'Choice' is a noun; use the verb 'choose.' Remove duplicate 'if I could.' Use infinitive 'to take a walk' or simply 'take a walk.' Use articles correctly: 'an international park' and 'a forest.' Ensure conditional structure is clear. ID:26

× Being surrounded by nature, it's great way to get healthy and relax and well as it's it's fantastic way to spotting enamel or maybe a plant.

✓ Being surrounded by nature is a great way to get healthy and relax, and it's also a fantastic way to spot animals or plants.

Original misuses 'it's' and misses articles ('a great way') and has incorrect gerund 'spotting enamel' (likely 'animals'). Use 'spot animals or plants.' Combine clauses smoothly and remove duplicate 'it's.' ID:12

× In the weekend last last weekend I go to the nearby park, I get for a walk about for about 15 minutes with my family.

✓ Last weekend I went to the nearby park; I went for a walk of about 15 minutes with my family.

Use past tense 'went' for a completed action. Remove repeated 'last' and rephrase 'went for a walk of about 15 minutes.' Use proper punctuation to separate clauses. ID:5

× I get relaxed and I enjoy really enjoy when watching the families with their children playing as well as.

✓ I felt relaxed and really enjoyed watching families with their children playing.

Match past tense with previous sentence: use 'felt' and 'enjoyed.' Remove duplicate 'I enjoy really enjoy' and incomplete ending 'as well as.' Keep object 'watching families with their children playing.' ID:12