Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition, filler words (uh, umm), and unclear phrases like “work” when you mean “walk.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk quite a lot. I usually go for walks in the evenings, especially in summer, because the air is fresher and it helps me relax after work.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear past-tense statement and give one or two specific memories. Use linking words (for example, then, because) and avoid repetition and filler sounds. Correct verb forms (I often went) and clear nouns (park, neighborhood) improve accuracy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went outside as a child. For example, there was a park in my neighborhood where I visited with my grandmother and played with neighbors’ children, which I remember vividly and enjoyed a lot.

Sugerencia: Organize your answer: state the reasons clearly, use linking words (firstly, secondly) and give a brief specific example for each reason. Avoid vague endings and small errors (meet, neighborhood, surroundings).

Ejemplo: I think there are two main reasons. Firstly, parks are social places where people meet friends and chat about daily life. Secondly, parks offer fresh air and a peaceful environment, which helps people relax and exercise.

Sugerencia: Answer the hypothetical question directly (name a place), then explain why with one or two specific reasons. Avoid confusing words like “work” when you mean “walk,” and remove fillers. Use conditional phrasing clearly (If I had the chance...).

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the seaside, because the sound of the waves helps me think clearly and the sea breeze makes me feel peaceful.

Sugerencia: Answer in the past tense for ‘lately’ and be specific about location and one reason. Keep sentences short and logical, avoid repeating phrases, and correct grammar (it gives me a sense of security).

Ejemplo: Lately I have been walking in my neighborhood because it feels safe and convenient. However, if I had time I would like to walk by the seaside to enjoy the view and fresh air.

× Yes, I work on the daily basis.

✓ Yes, I walk on a daily basis.

The student used 'work' incorrectly; the question asks about walking. The phrase 'on the daily basis' is ungrammatical; correct idiom is 'on a daily basis'. Use present simple 'walk' to match habitual action: 'I walk on a daily basis.'

× Usually I prefer to work in the evening, uh, during summer time that give me a opportunity to uh, feel umm, environment and feel fresh air.

✓ Usually I prefer to walk in the evening during the summer because it gives me an opportunity to enjoy the environment and get fresh air.

Multiple issues: 'work' should be 'walk' to match context; 'during summer time' is better as 'during the summer'; 'that give me' has subject-verb disagreement and needs 'it gives me' (third person singular); 'a opportunity' should be 'an opportunity'; 'feel environment' is incorrect collocation — use 'enjoy the environment' or 'experience the surroundings'; 'feel fresh air' -> 'get fresh air'. Also reorder phrases to improve natural English.

× Yes, I often to go outside for work when I was, I was child, umm, we had uh, a park in our society.

✓ Yes, I often went outside to play when I was a child. We had a park in our neighborhood.

Incorrect verb form: 'often to go' should be past tense 'often went' for habitual past action. 'When I was, I was child' is ungrammatical; correct 'when I was a child'. 'For work' is wrong contextually—likely 'to play' or 'to walk'. 'Society' is an incorrect word choice here; use 'neighborhood'.

× I remember, I vividly remember I went over there with my grandmother and I played with my neighbors, uh, kids.

✓ I vividly remember going there with my grandmother and playing with the neighboring children.

Repetition 'I remember, I vividly remember' is redundant; better to say 'I vividly remember'. Use gerunds 'going' and 'playing' to describe remembered events. 'Neighbors, uh, kids' should be 'neighboring children' or 'my neighbors' children' for clarity.

× So that was awesome time.

✓ So that was an awesome time.

Missing article: 'awesome time' referring to a single occasion needs the indefinite article 'an'. Without it the noun phrase is incomplete.

× I believe there are two main reasons people like to walk in park in.

✓ I believe there are two main reasons people like to walk in parks.

Word order and preposition misuse: 'walk in park in' is wrong. Use plural 'parks' or 'the park' depending on meaning. 'Walk in parks' is natural for general statement.

× Firstly, they met with their neighborhood F friends and they can talk and they can discuss their daily happenings.

✓ Firstly, they meet with their neighborhood friends and can talk and discuss their daily happenings.

Tense inconsistency: use present simple 'meet' for habitual action. 'Neighborhood F friends' has stray 'F' and redundant pronouns; remove extra 'they' before 'can' and keep parallel structure 'can talk and discuss'.

× So umm another reason is they get a chance to feel cool air and uh peaceful surrounding so they can feel their.

✓ Another reason is that they get a chance to feel cool air and enjoy a peaceful surrounding.

'feel cool air' is acceptable but 'peaceful surrounding' needs article 'a' or plural 'surroundings'. The ending 'so they can feel their' is incomplete — likely intended 'so they can feel relaxed' or 'so they can feel refreshed'. Use 'that' to introduce the clause: 'Another reason is that...'.

× I personally believe work is a better way to keep alive and kicking and, uh, it also, uh, give me a chance to think about my daily life and, uh, it's helped me to feel peace and fresh air.

✓ I personally believe walking is a better way to stay alive and kicking, and it also gives me a chance to think about my daily life; it helps me feel calm and get fresh air.

'work' should be 'walking' to match topic. 'Keep alive and kicking' should be 'stay alive and kicking' or better 'stay active'. 'give me' must be 'gives me' (subject-verb agreement). 'it's helped me' mixes tenses; use present simple 'it helps me' for habitual effect. 'feel peace' is unnatural; use 'feel calm' or 'feel peaceful'.

× That's why I like to go, I like.

✓ That's why I like to go for walks.

Sentence fragment and repetition: 'I like to go, I like' is incomplete. Clarify: 'I like to go for walks' or 'That's why I like walking.'

× I usually do work near my neighborhood near my neighborhood as it's give me a sense of security as well as in the modern era there is lots of crime so I prefer to do walking near to do my neighborhood but if I get a chance I want to go near to the seaside so I can enjoy.

✓ I usually walk near my neighborhood because it gives me a sense of security. Nowadays there is a lot of crime, so I prefer walking close to home, but if I get a chance I would like to walk by the seaside to enjoy it.

Many issues: 'do work' should be 'walk'; repeated 'near my neighborhood' is redundant; 'it's give' should be 'it gives' (subject-verb agreement); 'in the modern era there is lots of crime' -> 'nowadays there is a lot of crime' (uncountable 'crime' with 'a lot of'); 'prefer to do walking near to do my neighborhood' is ungrammatical—use 'prefer walking close to home'; 'if I get a chance I want to go near to the seaside' is better as 'I would like to walk by the seaside' (conditional/intent).