Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and relevant: answer the question about walking (not "working"). Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and simpler vocabulary to avoid errors. Link ideas with a brief connector if needed.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I try to walk at least 10,000 steps a day because walking helps my fitness and clears my mind, so I often choose walking over short bus trips.

Sugerencia: Answer directly about childhood habits using past tense. Give a specific example or reason and avoid contradictory statements. Keep it concise (1–3 sentences) and clear.

Ejemplo: Not really. As a child I preferred indoor activities like reading and playing video games, so I didn't go for walks often. Now I regret that and try to walk more for my health.

Sugerencia: Good idea about safety. Make the answer more natural by starting with a topic sentence and adding one or two specific benefits using linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'also'). Use the correct word (path/park) instead of 'Pike'.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because they are safer and quieter than roads. For example, there is less traffic and more greenery, which makes walking more relaxing and pleasant.

Sugerencia: Be specific about the location and use clear reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and incorrect word choices. Give a concise topic sentence and one supporting detail explaining why you chose that place.

Ejemplo: I would like to take a long walk along the seaside promenade because I enjoy the fresh air and the sea views, which are relaxing and inspiring.

Sugerencia: Use correct past tense and be concise. Answer where you walked recently with a clear reason. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'working alongside the railroads' — say 'walked along the railway' if accurate. Keep it to 1–2 sentences.

Ejemplo: Recently I went for a walk along the railway path near my home to wake up my mind before an exam. The walk helped me feel more alert and less anxious.

× I like to work alone because working is a benefit for our health.

✓ I like to walk alone because walking is beneficial for our health.

The student used 'work' and 'working' incorrectly; the context is walking. 'Benefit' as a noun is acceptable but 'beneficial' (adjective) fits after 'is' to describe walking. Change 'work' to 'walk' to match meaning and use 'beneficial' for correct adjective form. Suggestion: Use the correct lexical item (walk) and an adjective (beneficial) after 'is' to describe an activity.

× I always try to work more than 10,000 steps so this is also a excitement to walking a lot.

✓ I always try to walk more than 10,000 steps, so this is also an excitement for walking a lot.

'More than 10,000 steps' is fine, but 'work' is wrong lexically; use 'walk'. 'a excitement' is ungrammatical because 'excitement' is an uncountable noun here and requires 'an' if treated as countable, or better 'a source of excitement' or 'exciting'. Also preposition should be 'for' not 'to'. Suggestion: say 'this is also exciting' or 'this is also a source of excitement for walking.'

× When I was a child, I always have a enjoyment inside, so I really go outside and work too much now.

✓ When I was a child, I always enjoyed staying indoors, so I really go outside and walk a lot now.

The main clause refers to the past ('When I was a child') so the verb should be past tense: 'have' -> 'enjoyed'. 'enjoyment inside' is awkward; 'staying indoors' is natural. 'work too much now' mixes meanings; context about walking so 'walk a lot now' fits. Suggestion: maintain past tense in the subordinate clause and use appropriate verbs for actions (enjoyed, staying, walk).

× I regretted to work more in my childhood.

✓ I regret not walking more in my childhood.

'Regretted to work' is incorrect verb pattern. 'Regret' + gerund or 'regret not' + gerund is common. Also 'work' is wrong meaning; use 'walk'. Use present tense 'regret' to express a present feeling about past action. Suggestion: use 'regret not walking more' to express current regret about past behavior.

× I think just because the Pike is safer than roads, there are no traffic jams or sudden accidents in the park.

✓ I think it's simply because the park is safer than the roads: there are no traffic jams or sudden accidents in the park.

'Pike' is likely a wrong word; 'park' fits the context. 'Just because' is acceptable but 'it's simply because' is smoother. Use article 'the roads' and colon or comma to connect clauses. Suggestion: use the correct noun 'park' and clear connectors.

× I would like to take a long walk along the huge St. as I can enjoy the com conversion of the site so we can enjoy working more.

✓ I would like to take a long walk along the huge street because I can enjoy the scenic views of the area, and we can enjoy walking more.

'St.' is abbreviation but unclear; expand to 'street' and 'huge' plus 'street' is okay. 'com conversion' is unintelligible; likely intended 'scenic' or 'comfortable' 'environment' or 'conversion' is wrong. 'working' should be 'walking'. Use 'because' for reason and coordinate with 'and'. Suggestion: use clear vocabulary ('scenic views', 'area') and correct verb 'walking.'

× I'd go working alongside the railroads to reach here because I would like to make my brain awake before the examination so The Walking has the power to.

✓ I walked alongside the railroads to get here because I wanted to wake my brain up before the examination; walking has that power.

Tense and modal misuse: question asked 'Where did you go for a walk lately?' so past tense is needed: 'I'd go' is incorrect—use 'I walked'. 'go working' is wrong; use 'walked'. 'make my brain awake' is ungrammatical; use 'wake my brain up' or 'wake myself up'. 'The Walking has the power to' is incomplete; rephrase 'walking has that power.' Suggestion: match past tense, use correct verb patterns (wake up), and finish the clause clearly.