Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and relevant to the question. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you walk a lot. Keep to 2–3 sentences, avoid unrelated details about working unless linked to walking as stress relief. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles, and verb forms) and natural phrasing.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk quite often, mainly as a way to relieve stress after work. For example, I usually take a 30-minute walk in the evening to relax and clear my mind after a busy day.

Sugerencia: Answer in the past tense and be concise. Begin with a clear past-tense statement about frequency, then give one specific supporting detail or memory. Use correct past forms and clearer nouns (e.g., family outings, family gatherings).

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went for walks as a child because I was very energetic. My parents and I frequently went to the local park for family outings and picnics on weekends.

Sugerencia: Give a clear main reason and support it with specific details, using natural expressions. Avoid awkward phrases like “avoid themselves” and choose idiomatic alternatives (e.g., escape daily life, recharge their batteries). Use linking words (for example, because, furthermore) to structure your answer.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because it allows them to escape daily stress and recharge their energy. For example, the fresh air and green scenery help visitors relax, and many enjoy watching birds or exercising along park paths.

Sugerencia: Be specific and correct in vocabulary and grammar. Start with a direct answer naming the place, then explain why with 1–2 clear reasons using correct collocations (e.g., escape the hustle and bustle, forget daily pressures). Avoid spelling/capitalization mistakes.

Ejemplo: I would like to take a long walk in the park near Canberra Centre because it offers a peaceful escape from the city's hustle and bustle. The quiet paths and trees would help me forget daily pressures and relax.

Sugerencia: Use past tense and clearly name the place you visited. Avoid unclear phrases like “I recite A Different Neck.” State one or two specific details about the location and your experience. Keep sentences concise and natural.

Ejemplo: I went for a walk recently at a park near Canberra called Ainslie Gardens. It’s an ideal place for walking because it has well-kept paths, family gardens, and often hosts social events like BBQs and small parties.

× I would say is I love working so much I will spend most of time on working because it's the sort of stress outlet for me.

✓ I would say I love working so much that I spend most of my time working because it's a way to relieve stress for me.

Original has extra 'is', incorrect phrase 'most of time', and awkward 'sort of stress outlet'. Use 'that' to connect clauses, 'most of my time' for correct article and possessive, and 'a way to relieve stress' or 'stress-reliever' is natural. Use present simple 'spend' to match habitual meaning rather than 'will spend'.

× It can bring me more relaxed sessions after the busy work.

✓ It helps me feel more relaxed after busy work.

Use a verb that collocates with feelings: 'helps me feel' rather than 'bring me more relaxed sessions'. 'After busy work' is more natural than 'after the busy work'. Present simple 'helps' matches habitual statement.

× Yes I am. I believe I was energetic when I was a child so I will work with my parents if we got a free time and it is a good time for family born and reunion.

✓ Yes, I was. I believe I was energetic when I was a child, so I would play with my parents when we had free time; it was a good time for family bonding and reunions.

The reply 'Yes I am' is inconsistent with past context; use 'Yes, I was.' 'Will' is incorrect for past habitual actions; use 'would' or 'used to' and past tense 'had' not 'got'. 'Family born and reunion' is wrong collocation; use 'family bonding and reunions'.

× So I think that it is a way for they can avoid themselves.

✓ So I think that it is a way for them to get away from things for a while.

Incorrect pronoun 'they' after 'for'; use object pronoun 'them' and an infinitive structure 'for them to'. 'Avoid themselves' is unnatural; use 'get away from things' or 'escape' instead.

× It is a way for them to recharge in their batteries.

✓ It is a way for them to recharge their batteries.

Remove unnecessary preposition 'in'. The correct idiom is 'recharge their batteries'.

× So you can definitely enjoy the sightseeing around the parks.

✓ You can definitely enjoy the sights around the parks.

'Enjoy the sightseeing' is awkward; use 'enjoy the sights' or 'enjoy sightseeing'. 'Around the parks' is acceptable but 'in the parks' or 'around the park' may be more natural.

× I would say the park near the Canberra center.

✓ I would say the park near Canberra Centre.

Capitalize proper noun 'Canberra Centre' and drop the article 'the' before a named place when referring generally. 'Centre' is the common spelling in Australia.

× It is a good place for me to escape bustles and hustles in the city.

✓ It is a good place for me to escape the bustle and hustle of the city.

Use uncountable nouns 'bustle' and 'hustle' rather than plural 'bustles and hustles'. Include definite article 'the' and use 'of the city' for natural phrasing.

× I can temporarily forgot The Walking pressures.

✓ I can temporarily forget the pressures of commuting/walking in the city.

Use base form 'forget' after 'can' (modal + base verb). Capitalization is wrong for 'The Walking'; clarify intended meaning — likely 'the walking pressures' or 'commuting pressures'; provide clearer noun phrase 'pressures of commuting/walking'.

× I recite A Different Neck in Canberra.

✓ I recently visited a different park in Canberra.

'Recite' is incorrect word; likely meant 'recently'. 'A Different Neck' appears to be a misheard name; interpret as 'a different park' or 'a nearby park'. Use past tense 'visited' for recent action. If a specific place name is intended, use the correct name and capitalization.

× This is the ideal place for me to go walking and it is a nice place for family gardens and holding some social events like party or BBQ events.

✓ It is an ideal place for me to go walking, and it is a nice place for family gatherings and for holding social events like parties or BBQs.

'Family gardens' is incorrect; use 'family gatherings'. Use plural 'parties' and 'BBQs'. Add 'for' before 'holding' to make the infinitive phrase parallel. Use articles 'an ideal place'.