Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Focus on clear, grammatical sentences and avoid repetition. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Use correct verb forms and articles. For example, say why you enjoy walking (what landscapes, how it makes you feel) and mention the health benefit briefly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I enjoy walking because it lets me see attractive landscapes, such as parks and riversides, and it helps me relax. In addition, walking is good for my health because it improves my fitness and mood.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly; avoid confusing sentence fragments. Use past tense correctly and give one or two specific indoor activities as examples. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain your reason.

Ejemplo: No, I didn't often walk outside as a child. I preferred indoor activities because my family encouraged reading and board games, so I spent most afternoons reading books or playing games with my siblings.

Sugerencia: Provide more specific, natural reasons and avoid unclear phrases. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and give concrete examples of park attractions and health benefits. Correct the phrase about infection to a clearer idea if intended.

Ejemplo: I think people walk in parks to improve their health and relax. For example, many walk to lose weight, reduce stress, or enjoy fresh air and green surroundings, which can boost their mood and wellbeing.

Sugerencia: Be precise with place names and use complete sentences. Describe specific features you want to see and why they appeal to you. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct noun/adjective forms (e.g., 'beautiful scenery', 'fashionable people').

Ejemplo: I would like to take a long walk along the shoreline in Kanagawa, Japan, especially in Shonan, because the coastline has beautiful blue ocean views and lively beach towns. Also, I enjoy watching the fashionable street styles in that area.

Sugerencia: Answer the past question directly with a clear past-tense sentence, then add specific details about where and why. Remove redundant words and correct grammar (e.g., 'I needed a break'). Mention frequency or what you notice on walks.

Ejemplo: Recently I went for a walk near my house around Myanmar House. After studying or reading, I often need a short break, so I walk around the neighborhood to clear my mind and stretch my legs.

× Yes I do because I like which landscapes by walking through or it also for my health.

✓ Yes, I do because I like walking through landscapes, and it is also good for my health.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and relative structures ('which landscapes') and has unclear subjects ('it also for my health'). Replace 'which landscapes by walking through' with the gerund phrase 'walking through landscapes' and add 'it is' to form a complete clause. Also add commas for clarity.

× If you walk a lot you can better you can healthier you become.

✓ If you walk a lot, you can become healthier.

The original repeats fragments and uses adjective/adverb forms incorrectly ('you can better you can healthier you become'). Use the verb 'become' with the adjective 'healthier' and remove the redundant parts. Add a comma after the conditional clause.

× No, I didn't. When I was a child, I liked to. Do you activities which you can do in your house, for example reading a book, playing a games or a conversation.

✓ No, I didn't. When I was a child, I liked to do activities that I could do in my house, for example reading a book, playing games, or having conversations.

Problems: sentence fragments ('I liked to.') and incorrect relative structure ('Do you activities which') and article use ('a games', 'a conversation'). Use past tense consistently ('liked to do'), replace 'which' with 'that' for defining relative clauses, use plural 'games' without 'a', and use 'having conversations' for natural phrasing.

× I think they want to be healthier. They work in order to lose their weight or protect them from being infected by.

✓ I think they want to be healthier. They walk in order to lose weight or to protect themselves from getting infected.

The original uses incorrect verb ('work' instead of 'walk') and awkward pronoun/object forms ('protect them from being infected by'). Use 'walk' to match context, remove the unnecessary definite article in 'lose weight', and use the reflexive pronoun 'themselves' and the gerund 'getting infected' for natural English.

× I want to take a long walk at. Showdown in Kanagawa, Japan because there are beautiful scenery with blue ocean and they are fashionable people.

✓ I want to take a long walk at Shonan in Kanagawa, Japan because there is beautiful scenery with a blue ocean and fashionable people.

Problems: fragment 'take a long walk at.' and incorrect place name 'Showdown' likely 'Shonan'. Use singular 'there is' with uncountable 'scenery' and include article 'a' before 'blue ocean'. Remove 'they are' and use 'fashionable people' as a descriptive noun phrase.

× I like to go for a walk. At Myanmar House, when I study or when I read the book, I sometimes I need to list and I go out from the my house and take a walk around my house.

✓ I like to go for a walk at my house in Myanmar. When I study or read a book, I sometimes need to relax, so I go out of my house and walk around the neighborhood.

Errors include article misuse ('the my house'), awkward phrasing ('I sometimes I need to list'), and tense/word choice issues. Use 'my house' and 'go out of my house', replace 'list' with the intended verb 'relax', and natural phrasing 'walk around the neighborhood'. Maintain present simple tense for habitual actions.