Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be careful with grammar (use 'walk' not 'work'), keep sentences concise, and add a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, 'because' or 'so').

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk regularly. For example, I go for a 30-minute walk after dinner with my parents and brothers because it helps me stay fit and unwind after a busy day.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently for past events and correct word choice ('went' instead of 'go', 'walked' instead of 'worked'). Remove repetition and give one clear specific memory with a linking phrase.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often walked outside with my grandpa when I was a child. For example, we walked the dog together in the neighborhood every evening, and I still cherish those happy memories.

Sugerencia: Avoid awkward phrasing and redundancy (e.g., 'because that parks'). Start with a clear topic sentence and give two concise reasons with linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Choose more natural verbs ('reduce stress' instead of 'relieve their stress' is okay but fine).

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because parks offer a pleasant, green environment that helps reduce stress. Also, families often go together, so it becomes a social activity where people can relax and enjoy nature.

Sugerencia: Use conditional tense correctly ('If I had the chance'), avoid repetition ('I want I think'), and limit to up to five sentences. Provide one or two clear reasons using linking words like 'because' and 'also'.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the beach because I enjoy the scenic coastline and the sound of the waves. Also, the fresh sea air would help me relax and clear my mind.

Sugerencia: Keep past-tense consistency and avoid vague or odd descriptions ('circular trees' is unclear). Give one clear description and link to a future plan using 'so' or 'therefore'.

Ejemplo: Last weekend I walked with my parents in the city garden. The flowers were colorful and smelled lovely, so we enjoyed a peaceful stroll; I plan to go again next weekend.

× Yes, I often go for a walk after dinner with my parents and brothers every day and I think it has been a habit for us.

✓ Yes, I often go for a walk after dinner with my parents and brothers every day, and I think it has become a habit for us.

The phrase 'has been a habit' is awkward; 'has become a habit' correctly describes a repeated past action that led to a present state. Use present simple 'go' for habitual actions and 'has become' (present perfect) to indicate a change into a habit.

× Yes, when I was little I usually go for a walk with my grandpa and I think it it was very interesting and we often worked with our dogs and I still cherish the memory now.

✓ Yes, when I was little I usually went for a walk with my grandpa, and I think it was very interesting; we often walked with our dogs, and I still cherish the memory.

When referring to habitual actions in the past, use past simple (went, walked) instead of present simple (go, work). Also remove the repeated 'it it' and use punctuation to separate clauses. 'Worked with our dogs' is incorrect when meaning 'walked with our dogs.'

× Well, I think it's mainly because that parks can provide a pleasant environment to relax and unwind.

✓ Well, I think it's mainly because parks can provide a pleasant environment to relax and unwind.

The phrase 'because that' is ungrammatical in this context. Use 'because' alone or restructure the sentence ('the reason is that parks...'). Here 'because parks...' is correct.

× People often walk in a park with their families and parents to relieve their stress and unleash their emotions in their free time.

✓ People often walk in a park with their families to relieve stress and unwind in their free time.

'Families and parents' is redundant; 'families' already includes parents. 'Unleash their emotions' is unnatural here—'unwind' or 'relieve stress' is more appropriate. Also avoid redundant possessive 'their stress' when generalizing; 'relieve stress' is concise.

× If I have the chance to take a long walk, I definitely choose a beach because I like walking along the coastline and enjoy the scenic view of the sea and moreover, I want I think the sound of the waves and the fresh air can relax me.

✓ If I had the chance to take a long walk, I would definitely choose a beach because I like walking along the coastline and enjoying the scenic view of the sea; moreover, I think the sound of the waves and the fresh air can relax me.

This is a hypothetical conditional, so use the second conditional (If I had ... I would choose). Also maintain parallel forms ('walking' -> 'enjoying'). Remove extra 'I want' and correct clause order for clarity.

× Last weekend I went for a walk with my parents in the city garden. We walked among the circular trees and that was so beautiful with its colors and the fragrance.

✓ Last weekend I went for a walk with my parents in the city garden. We walked among the circular trees, and it was so beautiful with their colors and fragrance.

Main verbs are fine (past simple). Improve pronoun reference: use 'it' or 'it was' and 'their colors' to refer to the trees. 'That was so beautiful with its colors' is awkward; 'it was so beautiful with their colors' or 'the trees were so beautiful with their colors and fragrance' is clearer.

× And I want to go for a walk next weekend.

✓ I want to go for a walk next weekend.

'And' at the start is informal and unnecessary in this short answer. The sentence is otherwise correct: 'want' + future time expression 'next weekend' is acceptable for planned intention. For more natural speech, 'I want to go for a walk next weekend' or 'I plan to go for a walk next weekend.'