Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct verb forms and articles, and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add a brief specific detail about when or how long you walk.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk regularly on weekdays. I usually walk to my lessons, which takes about 15 minutes each way, and I also go for a short walk in the evening to relax. At weekends I often take a longer stroll in a nearby park with a close friend because walking helps me unwind.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and fix word order and tense. Start with a clear statement about frequency, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Use correct past tense and avoid awkward phrases like 'pretend preferred'.

Ejemplo: Not really — when I was a child I preferred indoor activities. I loved reading comic books and watching cartoons, and I often played make-believe games with close friends at home because it felt safe and cozy.

Sugerencia: Give a smooth, connected answer: use a clear topic sentence and linking words to list reasons. Correct word choice ('walk' not 'work') and avoid short fragments. Provide one specific example of park features.

Ejemplo: People enjoy walking in parks because it is inexpensive and a peaceful way to exercise. In addition, parks offer pleasant scenery and benches where friends can chat, and many have ponds or gardens that make the walk more refreshing.

Sugerencia: Be concise and avoid hesitation and repetition. Give specific reasons and one concrete image or example to make the answer vivid. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I would like to take a long walk in the parks around Beijing with my friends because they are large and full of greenery. Many parks host cultural festivals and outdoor performances, which would make a long walk both relaxing and entertaining.

Sugerencia: Correct small vocabulary and phrasing errors, and be specific about details. Use past simple consistently and avoid unclear phrases like 'noodle wrapped from a small talk.' Mention the food name or how it tasted to make the story vivid.

Ejemplo: I went for a walk along the local High Street last evening. There were many food stalls, so I tried some spicy noodles from a small stall — they smelled amazing and tasted very flavorful.

× Maybe at the weekends I enjoy taking a stroll on a park with my friend, my close friend, because working helps me unwind when I was when I'm under pressure.

✓ Maybe at the weekends I enjoy taking a stroll in a park with my close friend, because walking helps me unwind when I'm under pressure.

Problems: incorrect preposition 'on a park' should be 'in a park' (preposition error, ID 11) and 'working' is wrong contextually and may be a typo for 'walking' (word choice/adjective/adverb issue, but correctable as verb form). Also the clause 'when I was when I'm under pressure' mixes past and present and is redundant. Correct form keeps present 'when I'm under pressure'. Suggestion: use 'in a park', replace 'working' with 'walking' and use consistent tense 'when I'm under pressure'.

× When I was a child, I usually pretend preferred indoor activities.

✓ When I was a child, I usually preferred indoor activities.

The sentence contains an extra verb 'pretend' that doesn't fit; 'preferred' is the correct past tense to match 'When I was a child'. Keep past tense consistently. Suggestion: remove the extraneous 'pretend' and use 'preferred'.

× Walk in parks.

✓ People walk in parks.

This fragment lacks a subject and is a sentence without a verb in context (fragment). It should be a full sentence with a subject: 'People walk in parks.' This fixes sentence structure error (ID 26) and provides grammatical completeness.

× People like working in parks because it's inexpensive and doesn't require spending money.

✓ People like walking in parks because it's inexpensive and doesn't require spending money.

'Working' is incorrect here; context refers to walking in parks. This is a word choice error; replace with 'walking'. Also 'it's' refers to the activity which is fine. Suggestion: ensure the gerund matches the intended activity.

× I would like to take a long walk in the parks around around Beijing with my friends because they are very large and full of greenery.

✓ I would like to take a long walk in the parks around Beijing with my friends because they are very large and full of greenery.

The sentence has a duplicated word 'around around' — a typo. Remove the duplicate. Preposition 'around Beijing' is correct. Ensure proofreading to remove repetition.

× I went for a walk along local High Street last evening.

✓ I went for a walk along the local High Street last evening.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'local High Street' (article error, ID 22/17). Use 'the local High Street' or simply 'High Street'. Suggestion: include appropriate article with specific place names when required.

× There were many small food stalls and I was hungry so I stopped to try some street food.

✓ There were many small food stalls, and I was hungry, so I stopped to try some street food.

Run-on sentence lacking commas to join independent clauses. Insert commas before conjunctions 'and' and 'so' for clarity. This fixes sentence structure (ID 26) and improves readability.

× I enjoyed the spicy noodle wrapped from a small talk.

✓ I enjoyed the spicy noodles wrapped in a small stall.

Multiple errors: 'noodle' should be plural 'noodles' (singular/plural ID 1), 'wrapped from a small talk' is incorrect — likely 'wrapped in a small stall' (preposition and noun errors). Correct to 'noodles wrapped in a small stall'. Suggestion: choose correct preposition 'in' for being inside a stall and use plural for countable food items.