Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words for clarity. Include a specific detail (where you walk, for how long) and limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk for about 30 minutes every evening with my family, which helps keep us fit and lets us enjoy the trees and sunset in our neighborhood park.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details. Use clearer linking words and avoid vague phrases like "beautiful attraction". Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often walked in the evenings as a child because my family took walks together. We would stroll along the riverbank for about 30 minutes, and I enjoyed watching birds and nearby gardens while getting some exercise.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use simpler, natural phrasing. Provide two clear reasons with linking words (for example, "because" and "also"). Be specific about benefits (fresh air, exercise, safe paths).

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because the paths are safe and well maintained, which makes walking comfortable. Also, parks offer fresh air and scenery, and seeing children play creates a pleasant, relaxing atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Be concise and use correct article and tense. Start with a clear statement of the chosen place, then give specific reasons (size, features) and conditions (time of day). Avoid awkward phrases like "haven't covered this park".

Ejemplo: I'd like to take a long walk in Jolly Park, which is near my home. It's a large park with lakes and wooded paths, and I would go there in the early evening when it's light to explore the trails and relax.

Sugerencia: The question asks about a recent walk; answer should say a recent place or explain you haven't gone recently. Use past tense correctly and be specific about when and why. Avoid long negative constructions and repetition.

Ejemplo: I haven't gone for a late walk recently; I prefer walking in the early evening because at night there are many insects and it can feel less safe due to fewer people around.

× Yes I do, walking makes us healthier as I do walking everyday in the evening with my family and we can explore the beauty of the nature.

✓ Yes, I do. Walking makes us healthier; I walk every day in the evening with my family, and we can explore the beauty of nature.

Errors: incorrect continuous phrase 'I do walking' and wrong adverb 'everyday' used as adjective. Use simple present 'I walk' for habitual action. Add commas and semicolon to separate clauses. 'the nature' is unnecessary; use 'nature'.

× During my childhood, I used to walk in the evening time only because my family always went there.

✓ During my childhood, I used to walk in the evenings only because my family always went there.

Use plural 'evenings' for repeated occasions. 'Evening time' is awkward; 'in the evenings' is natural for habitual past actions with 'used to'.

× So I accompany them and join to see the beautiful attraction alongside.

✓ So I accompanied them and joined them to see the nearby attractions.

Tense mismatch: past habit -> past forms 'accompanied' and 'joined'. 'Join to see' is incorrect; use 'joined them to see'. 'Attraction alongside' is unnatural; 'nearby attractions' is clearer.

× It makes my body healthier, so we all used to go together.

✓ It made my body healthier, so we all used to go together.

Sentence mixes present 'makes' with past habitual 'used to'. Change 'makes' to past 'made' to match 'used to'.

× People love to walk in the park because the parks are engaged in so proper manner that they have a proper footpath along which they can see the greenery outside their area and the kids are playing, which makes them happy.

✓ People love to walk in parks because the parks are maintained in a proper manner and have footpaths where they can see the greenery and children playing, which makes them happy.

Article use: 'the park' vs 'parks' consistency. 'Engaged in so proper manner' is incorrect; use 'maintained in a proper manner'. 'Footpath along which' is wordy; 'footpaths where' is natural. 'Kids' -> 'children' for formality.

× So I think people usually prefer to go to the park.

✓ So I think people usually prefer to go to parks.

Sentence is grammatical but better to match general statement by using plural 'parks' rather than 'the park' for general preferences.

× I would love to go a park which is near to my home named as Jolly Park.

✓ I would love to go to a park near my home called Jolly Park.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'go'. 'Near to my home' -> 'near my home'. 'Named as' -> 'called' is correct idiomatic usage.

× This park is very big and I haven't covered this park till now if I got a free time in the evening especially when there is not so much dark.

✓ This park is very big and I haven't visited it yet; if I get free time in the evening when it is not too dark, I will go.

'Covered' is wrong verb for visiting a park; use 'visited'. 'Till now' -> 'yet' with present perfect. Conditional tense: 'if I got' should be 'if I get' for real future condition, and 'there is not so much dark' -> 'it is not too dark'.

× So I will definitely prefer to go to that park and see all the beauty and attraction nearby to that.

✓ So I will definitely go to that park and see all the beauty and nearby attractions.

'Prefer to go' is redundant with 'will'; use 'will go'. 'Attraction nearby to that' is ungrammatical; use 'nearby attractions'.

× I did not prefer to go to the late walk as in the in night time there are lots of insects and when we were walking on the street there can be a lot of strangers.

✓ I prefer not to go for late walks because at night there are lots of insects and when we walk on the street there can be many strangers.

Original mixes tenses and unnatural phrasing. Change to present habitual 'I prefer not to go' to express general preference. 'Late walk' -> 'late walks'. 'in the in night time' -> 'at night'. 'there can be a lot of strangers' -> 'there can be many strangers'. Maintain consistent present tense.

× So from the beginning of my life I didn't prefer to go late night.

✓ So since I was young, I have not preferred going out late at night.

'From the beginning of my life' is awkward; 'since I was young' is natural. Use present perfect 'have not preferred' to indicate a preference continuing to present. 'go late night' -> 'going out late at night'.