Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be careful with vocabulary (use 'walk' not 'work') and answer directly with a clear topic sentence. Keep it concise (max 3–4 sentences), avoid repetition and filler words, and provide one specific reason with a linking word. Also correct grammar: use 'places' and present simple consistently.

Ejemplo: No, I don't walk much. Because most destinations in my area are 20–30 kilometres apart, we usually travel by car or motorcycle. Therefore I rarely walk for daily travel.

Sugerencia: Good direct answer and reason. Improve grammar (use past tense consistently and correct noun forms), reduce redundancy, and tighten sentences. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' correctly, and provide one specific example.

Ejemplo: No, I didn't often go for walks as a child because my parents thought it was too dangerous for a two- or three-year-old to play near the roadside. As a result, I usually stayed at home or played in the yard.

Sugerencia: Answer is relevant but has vocabulary errors ('walk' not 'work') and awkward phrasing. Use a clear topic sentence followed by two concise reasons linked with 'and' or 'because'. Give specific examples (e.g. jogging, walking dogs) and correct verb forms.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because they can get exercise and enjoy fresh air and pleasant scenery. For example, some people go jogging or walk their dogs, which is good for both fitness and relaxation.

Sugerencia: Good idea but make the response clearer and grammatically correct. Start with a direct topic sentence, give a specific route and reason, and avoid vagueness and fillers. Use one linking phrase like 'because' to explain why it would be interesting.

Ejemplo: I would like to walk from my hometown to the city where I live now, a distance of about 180 kilometres, because it would be a unique challenge and allow me to see rural scenery and meet people along the way.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and use past tense correctly ('I went'). Avoid repetition and fillers, and finish the thought with a clear reason. Provide one specific detail about what you do while walking to make it more vivid.

Ejemplo: Lately I went for a walk at the shopping mall. I often walk there because it is convenient, sheltered from the weather, and helps me relax while window-shopping and exploring different stores.

× No, I don't work a lot in my daily life because the distance between place by place is too far, like 20 to 30 kilometres and above.

✓ No, I don't walk a lot in my daily life because the distance from place to place is too far, like 20 to 30 kilometres or more.

The student used 'work' instead of 'walk' and incorrect prepositions 'between place by place'. Use 'from place to place' to indicate movement between locations. Also use 'or more' instead of 'and above' for natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:11

× So we often use umm cars or motorcycles to travel from place to place.

✓ So we often use cars or motorcycles to travel from place to place.

Remove filler 'umm' and keep the verb 'use' which correctly agrees with subject 'we'. This is primarily a disfluency issue but keep sentence concise. No tense change is needed. Grammar problem type ID:27

× So I don't work.

✓ So I don't walk.

The student again used 'work' instead of 'walk', which changes meaning. Use the verb 'walk' to answer the question about walking. This fixes sentence-level meaning and structure. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Umm no, I didn't often go outside to have a walk when I was a child because my parents think that's too dangerous for a 2-3 years old children to go out and play beside the play by the the roadside.

✓ No, I didn't often go outside to have a walk when I was a child because my parents thought it was too dangerous for a 2- or 3-year-old child to go out and play by the roadside.

When talking about childhood, past tense 'thought' and 'was' are required. Use singular 'child' with 'a 2- or 3-year-old' and correct preposition 'by the roadside'. Remove duplicate 'the'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× So I didn't often go outside.

✓ So I didn't often go outside.

This sentence is correct but repetitive; keep as is. No grammatical change needed. (Included for completeness.) Grammar problem type ID:12

× I think people like to work in parks because they get to exercise their body, swinging their their elbows or joints, and they also get to breathe the fresh air and enjoying the beautiful scenery in the parks.

✓ I think people like to walk in parks because they get to exercise their bodies, swing their elbows and joints, and they also get to breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scenery.

Use 'walk' instead of 'work'. Match plural 'bodies' with 'people'. Use parallel verbs: 'swing' and 'enjoy' instead of 'swinging' and 'enjoying' to maintain parallel structure. Remove duplicate 'their' and 'the' before 'fresh air'. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Uh, for those pet lovers, they also can work their.

✓ For pet lovers, they can also walk with their pets there.

Replace 'work their' with 'walk with their pets there' to make meaning clear. Place 'also' in a natural position. Ensure complete object 'their pets'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Umm, I would like to take a long walk from my hometown to my the place I live here it's about 180 kilometres, but I think it will be very interesting if I get to walk that much distance so.

✓ I would like to take a long walk from my hometown to the place where I live; it's about 180 kilometres, and I think it would be very interesting to walk that distance.

Remove filler 'umm'. Use 'the place where I live' or 'my current home' instead of 'my the place I live here'. Use conditional 'would be' for hypothetical and 'to walk that distance' for natural phrasing. Fix punctuation and remove trailing 'so'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Umm, I did go to a walk lately to the shopping mall because that's the only place I will I will walk in my daily life.

✓ I went for a walk recently to the shopping mall because that's the only place I walk in my daily life.

Use simple past 'I went' or present perfect 'I have gone' for recent past; here 'recently' pairs with 'went'. Use 'go for a walk' not 'go to a walk'. Remove duplicated 'I will'. Use present simple 'walk' for habitual action. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I like walking in the shopping mall because I get to uh, relax my mind while watching those goods and also.

✓ I like walking in the shopping mall because I can relax my mind while looking at the shops and displays.

Remove filler 'uh' and avoid sentence ending with 'and also' which creates a fragment. Use 'relax my mind while looking at the shops and displays' for clarity and completeness. Grammar problem type ID:26