Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần tự nhiên và chính xác hơn; tránh nhầm lẫn giữa 'work' và 'walk', rút ngắn và rõ ràng tối đa (không quá 5 câu). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và dùng liên từ phù hợp (ví dụ: 'because', 'so').

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk quite often. I usually take a 30-minute walk in the park after work because the sunshine helps me relax and clear my mind, and it also helps me stay healthy and reduce stress.

Sugerencia: Cần sử dụng thì quá khứ phù hợp và sửa lỗi từ vựng ('working' → 'walking', 'other' → 'others'). Tránh câu ngắt quãng, nói trôi chảy hơn và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về tần suất hoặc địa điểm.

Ejemplo: Yes, I went outside to walk a lot when I was a child. I often walked with my friends along the riverbank, and we would chat and play games together.

Sugerencia: Cần dùng ngôn ngữ tự nhiên và ngữ pháp đúng: sửa 'work' → 'walk', số nhiều/động từ chia đúng (seem → seem(s), have → has). Trình bày rõ lí do cụ thể, nêu ví dụ về tiện ích trong công viên như lối đi, ghế, sân tập thể dục.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because there are many facilities for exercise, such as walking paths, benches and outdoor gyms, and parks offer a pleasant, open space to relax.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời mơ hồ và mắc lỗi từ vựng ('work' → 'walk') và cấu trúc. Trả lời nên rõ ràng: nêu địa điểm cụ thể, lý do và cảm xúc, sử dụng liên từ để nối ý và dùng câu đầy đủ (không bắt đầu câu phụ bằng 'Because' một mình).

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along a coastal trail because the sea views would calm my mind and help me disconnect from daily stress.

Sugerencia: Cần dùng thì quá khứ đơn (went) và sửa lỗi từ vựng/ngữ pháp ('work' → 'walk', 'golf'?? likely 'golf course', 'scenic scene' awkward). Trình bày một câu hoàn chỉnh với mô tả cụ thể và lý do vì sao thích nơi đó.

Ejemplo: Recently I went for a walk across a golf course because it has beautiful scenery and breathtaking views, which made the walk very relaxing.

× Yes, I often work a lot because working in the sunshine helps me relax and clear my mind. For example, I often take a 30 minute walk in the park after work to stay healthy and reduce stress.

✓ Yes, I often walk a lot because walking in the sunshine helps me relax and clear my mind. For example, I often take a 30-minute walk in the park after work to stay healthy and reduce stress.

The student used 'work' where 'walk' or 'walking' was intended; this is a verb choice error and present tense activity should use simple present 'walk' or gerund 'walking'. Also '30 minute' needs a hyphen when used as a compound adjective before a noun: '30-minute'. Suggestion: use correct verb 'walk/walking' and hyphenate compound time expressions.

× Well, when I was younger, I'm very keen on working with my friends. We. Often walk through, walk across the river and chat with other.

✓ Well, when I was younger, I was very keen on walking with my friends. We often walked across the river and chatted with others.

Mixing tenses: 'when I was younger' requires past tense 'was' not 'I'm'. Also 'keen on' should be followed by a gerund 'walking'. Actions in that period need past simple 'walked' and 'chatted'. 'across the river' is correct; 'other' should be plural 'others'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent and use gerunds after 'keen on'.

× It is good questions. People seems to like to work in parks because it have many infrastructure for people to do exercise and have a space to work.

✓ That is a good question. People seem to like walking in parks because they have much infrastructure for exercise and space to relax.

Several issues: 'It is good questions' is incorrect number and structure — use 'That is a good question' or 'Those are good questions'. 'People seems' should be 'People seem' (subject-verb agreement). 'like to work in parks' likely meant 'like walking in parks' or 'like to go to parks'. 'it have many infrastructure' has wrong subject and verb; use plural subject 'they have' or 'parks have' and 'infrastructure' is uncountable so use 'much infrastructure' or 'many facilities'. 'to do exercise and have a space to work' is awkward; use 'for exercise and space to relax'. Suggestion: correct subject-verb agreement, choose appropriate nouns (infrastructure vs facilities), and use consistent phrasing.

× Sometimes if I have a chance, I work a very long distance. Because it's really my mind and.

✓ Sometimes, if I have the chance, I walk a very long distance because it clears my mind.

Tense and verb choice: 'work a very long distance' is incorrect—should be 'walk a very long distance'. Use 'if I have the chance' (present condition for habitual/future) and main clause simple present or will: 'I walk' or 'I will walk'. Fragment 'Because it's really my mind and.' is incomplete; correct to 'because it clears my mind'. Suggestion: use correct verb 'walk' and complete the causal clause.

× Recently I work across the. Golf because it have a scenic scene and. Have a breathtaking.

✓ Recently I walked across the golf course because it had a scenic view and was breathtaking.

Tense inconsistency: 'Recently' with past action should use past simple 'walked'. 'across the. Golf' is fragmentary; use 'golf course'. 'it have' should be 'it had' or 'it has' depending on time — use past 'had' to match 'walked'. 'scenic scene' is redundant; use 'scenic view'. 'Have a breathtaking' is incomplete; use 'was breathtaking'. Suggestion: use complete noun phrases ('golf course', 'scenic view') and match tense across the sentence.