Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar for tense and articles, and give a realistic duration. Avoid unclear phrases like “few fields 10/1 hour.”

Ejemplo: I don't walk a lot during weekdays because I usually commute by scooter for work. However, I try to go for a walk on weekends for about 30 to 60 minutes to get some exercise and fresh air.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence answering yes/no, then give specific examples with correct grammar and linking words. Use past tense consistently and avoid fragmented phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often played outdoors as a child. For example, my friends and I would usually walk to the nearby mountainside or open fields to play games and explore nature.

Sugerencia: Start directly with a reason, then support it with clear, specific points. Keep sentences concise and use linking words like 'because' or 'because of' to connect ideas. Avoid contradictory or confusing statements about countryside vs city.

Ejemplo: People like to walk in parks because parks are peaceful and close to nature. Also, in crowded cities parks provide a pleasant space for exercise and relaxation away from traffic and noise.

Sugerencia: Answer clearly with a specific location and then explain why, using linking words. Avoid unrelated or incorrect phrases (e.g. 'Standard malware') and repetitive words. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I'd like to take a long walk along a coastal path. Walking by the sea would help me relax, reduce stress and be good exercise for my legs.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer in past tense and include specific details: where, when, and what you did or liked about it. Avoid unclear fragments like 'It is a IS.'

Ejemplo: Lately I went for a walk on a short mountain trail near my house last weekend. The trail has nice views and fresh air, and I enjoy the peaceful atmosphere while walking there.

× Because I'm pretty busy at work for transported myself with scooter, I only walk on the weekend, maybe few fields 10/1 hour.

✓ Because I'm pretty busy at work and I travel by scooter, I only walk on the weekend, maybe for 10–15 minutes to an hour.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'transported myself' (should use present simple 'travel' or 'go by') and awkward time expression. Use 'travel by scooter' or 'go by scooter' for habitual present. Add conjunction 'and' to join clauses. Use clear time phrasing 'for 10–15 minutes to an hour' or 'for about 10 minutes to an hour'.

× When I was a child I played so much in the outdoor.

✓ When I was a child, I played outdoors a lot.

Error: incorrect use of 'in the outdoor' — should be the adverb 'outdoors'. 'So much' is grammatically acceptable but 'a lot' is more natural. Keep past simple 'played' to match 'When I was a child'.

× Me and my neighbors kids we were usually went to the mountainside and to the field have so much.

✓ My neighbors' kids and I usually went to the mountainside and to the fields a lot.

Errors: subject pronoun order and form — use 'My neighbors' kids and I' not 'Me and my neighbors kids'. Remove redundant subject 'we'. Verb form 'were usually went' is wrong; use simple past 'usually went'. 'Field have so much' is ungrammatical; use 'fields a lot' or 'a lot' to indicate frequency.

× Honestly, I guess nowadays so many people, they now live in the countryside and if in the city you can only walk in the park is closed close with nature and.

✓ Honestly, I think many people nowadays live in the countryside, and in the city you can only walk in parks, which are close to nature.

Errors: awkward word order and extra words. Remove redundant 'they now' and restructure sentence. Use 'think' rather than 'guess' for clarity. 'Walk in the park is closed close with nature' is ungrammatical; use 'parks, which are close to nature'.

× Standard malware, most of time taking a walk it can refresh my mind to release my stress stress in a day and also highly chance to exercise my muscle.

✓ Usually, taking a walk refreshes my mind, relieves my stress, and is a good chance to exercise my muscles.

Errors: 'Standard malware' is nonsense — replace with 'Usually' or 'Generally'. Verb phrase 'most of time taking a walk it can refresh' should be 'taking a walk refreshes'. Use 'relieves my stress' rather than 'release my stress'. Use plural 'muscles'. Keep present simple to express habitual action.

× There is a short mountain trail nearby my house we like to go visit in on the weekend. It is a IS.

✓ There is a short mountain trail near my house that we like to visit on the weekend.

Errors: punctuation and clause connection — need a relative pronoun 'that' to connect clauses. Use 'near my house' rather than 'nearby my house'. Remove 'go visit in' and 'It is a IS' which is incoherent. Keep present simple 'we like to visit' for habitual action.