Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler sounds and keep answers within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I don't walk much because I usually travel by vehicle. However, I try to walk occasionally since it boosts energy and helps maintain good health, especially when I need short exercise during the day.

Sugerencia: Use correct past tense and organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence about the past, then one specific example with a linking word. Reduce repetition and correct verb forms.

Ejemplo: Yes, when I was a child I walked quite often. For example, we usually walked to school and to local shops because our family did not own a vehicle at that time, so walking was our main way of getting around.

Sugerencia: Be concise and use linking words to structure reasons. Give specific benefits (safety, scenery, social interaction) and avoid repeating the same point.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because they feel safer and enjoy pleasant scenery. In addition, parks offer a calm environment for conversations and exercise, which makes walks more relaxing than walking on busy streets.

Sugerencia: Give a single clear location and two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid general statements and correct awkward phrases like “walk along through the street.”

Ejemplo: I would like to take a long walk along the main city avenue because I could admire the architecture and stop at street vendors for local food. Also, walking there in the morning would be pleasant and good for light exercise or jogging.

Sugerencia: Use past tense and make the sequence clear: state what you did, why, and the result. Reduce repetition of 'recently' and avoid unnatural contractions like "we've very tired."

Ejemplo: Recently I went for a short morning walk with my wife because we had been feeling tired. The walk helped us feel more energetic and improved our mood for the rest of the day.

× I usually prefer go by vehicle but I say walking is good for your day-to-day life so it will keep you energetic and healthy.

✓ I usually prefer going by vehicle, but I think walking is good for your day-to-day life, so it keeps you energetic and healthy.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by a gerund (verb + -ing) when stating a general preference (prefer going). 'I say' is unnatural here; use 'I think'. Also, 'so it will keep you' changes future reference unnaturally; use present 'keeps' for general truth. Grammar problem type ID:8

× When I was a child, I often go to school and go to shop with my parents.

✓ When I was a child, I often went to school and went to the shop with my parents.

The time reference 'When I was a child' requires past tense verbs. Use 'went' (past) not 'go'. Also include the definite article 'the' before 'shop' for a specific place. Grammar problem type ID:5

× But for example, someday my mom asked me to go to shop so I go buy food.

✓ For example, one day my mom asked me to go to the shop, so I went to buy food.

Mixed tenses: 'asked' is past, so following actions should be past ('went'). 'Someday' is incorrect for past reference; use 'one day'. 'Go buy' is informal and tense-inconsistent; use 'went to buy'. Include 'the' before 'shop'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× That time we didn't have any vehicle so we prefer mostly.

✓ At that time we didn't have a vehicle, so we usually walked or mostly used other means of transport.

Sentence is unclear and mixes present tense 'prefer' with past context. 'Any vehicle' is awkward; use 'a vehicle'. Provide a clear past activity: 'usually walked' or 'used other means'. This fixes tense and clarity. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Well, walking in a park is quite safer and you can see a lot of people around and you can have a good conversation with them and it is safer when compared to walking through streets you don't have to worry about anyway and we'll get into an accident, so it's always best.

✓ Well, walking in a park is much safer; you can see many people around and have good conversations, and it is safer compared to walking through streets where you might worry about accidents, so it's usually better.

Use 'much safer' not 'quite safer' (comparative needs modifier), 'a lot of' -> 'many' for countable 'people'. Sentence run-on: break into clearer clauses. 'You don't have to worry about anyway and we'll get into an accident' is incorrect; rephrase to 'where you might worry about accidents'. Use 'usually better' for general advice. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Sometimes I prefer to walk along through the street so that you can see a lot of buildings, shops and you can have some food from the street vendors.

✓ Sometimes I prefer walking along the street so that I can see many buildings and shops, and I can buy food from street vendors.

After 'prefer' use gerund 'walking' (or 'prefer to walk' but be consistent). Use first person 'I' instead of 'you' for personal preference. 'A lot of' -> 'many' for countable nouns. 'Have some food from' -> 'buy food from' is more natural. Grammar problem type ID:8

× And in morning it's very good to walk straight through the road or you can jog.

✓ And in the morning it's very good to walk along the road or to jog.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'morning'. Use 'walk along the road' not 'straight through the road'. Parallel structure: 'to walk... or to jog' or 'walk... or jog'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Recently I go for a short walk in the morning with my wife, so we feel like we've very tired recently.

✓ Recently I went for a short walk in the morning with my wife, so we felt very tired recently.

'Recently' refers to past event; use past tense 'went' and 'felt'. 'We feel like we've very tired' is ungrammatical: 'we felt very tired' expresses the intended meaning. Avoid repeating 'recently' twice; keep one instance. Grammar problem type ID:5

× So we thought of having a walk so that we'll get more energetic, have a good positive mood throughout the day.

✓ So we thought of taking a walk so that we would get more energetic and have a better mood throughout the day.

Sequence of tenses: reporting past thought 'we thought' requires 'we would get' not 'we'll get'. 'Have a good positive mood' is redundant; 'have a better mood' or 'feel more positive' is clearer. 'Having a walk' -> 'taking a walk' is more natural. Grammar problem type ID:4