Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more direct and concise in your topic sentence, correct grammar, and give one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid repeating verbs (take).

Ejemplo: Not really. I rarely walk because my city has excellent public transport, so I usually travel by bus or train to get around quickly.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and choose accurate verbs. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details with a linking word (for example/and).

Ejemplo: Yes, I often walked alone along the road near my house when I was a child. I enjoyed looking at the scenery and wildlife, such as birds and flowers, because it relaxed me and made my walks more interesting.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and use correct collocations (walk in a park, clear your mind). Provide one or two specific reasons with linking words and avoid mixing 'work' and 'walk'.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because it helps clear their minds and reduce stress. For example, the fresh air and greenery make it easier to relax and think clearly.

Sugerencia: Correct the sentence structure and be concise: begin with a clear place and then give two specific reasons using linking words (because, so).

Ejemplo: I would love to take a long walk in a quiet forest because I enjoy seeing wildlife like deer and listening to birdsong and the rustle of leaves, which helps me relax and forget city noise.

Sugerencia: Use correct past tense and avoid repetition ('refresh' and 'refreshed'). Start with a clear past tense topic sentence, then add specific details with linking words (so, and).

Ejemplo: Recently I walked to school because the weather was nice and I wanted some fresh air. It only took about 20 minutes, and I enjoyed listening to music on my headphones the whole way.

× 'No, I don't because in my country they have a good transport to take and I usually take a bus or take a train to go anywhere.'

✓ 'No, I don't because in my country they have good public transport and I usually take a bus or a train to go anywhere.'

'transport' is a countable/uncountable collocation issue and 'public transport' is the correct phrase. Use articles: 'a bus' and 'a train' are correct. Replace 'a good transport to take' with 'good public transport' for natural English.' Suggestion: say 'good public transport' and use 'a bus' or 'a train' when referring to one vehicle.'

× 'Yes, when I was a child I often work alone along the road near my house.'

✓ 'Yes, when I was a child I often worked alone along the road near my house.'

'often' with 'when I was a child' refers to past habitual action, so the past tense 'worked' is required rather than present 'work'. Suggestion: use past simple for repeated past actions: 'I often worked'.'{

× 'I used to enjoy looking at the scenery and wildlife like the birds or flowers because it relaxed me and made my works interesting.'

✓ 'I used to enjoy looking at the scenery and wildlife such as birds and flowers because it relaxed me and made my walks interesting.'

'wildlife' is usually followed by 'such as' not 'like' in this context; 'the birds or flowers' is awkward—'birds and flowers' is natural. 'works' is incorrect word choice; context requires 'walks'. Suggestion: use 'such as' for examples and choose the correct noun ('walks') to match meaning.'

× 'I think work in the park can make your mind to refresh and be clear there, so I like to work in park too.'

✓ 'I think working in the park can clear your mind and help you feel refreshed, so I like to work in the park too.'

'work' should be the -ing form 'working' after 'think'. 'make your mind to refresh' is ungrammatical; use 'clear your mind' or 'help you feel refreshed'. Add articles: 'in the park'. Suggestion: use gerund after 'think' and natural collocations: 'clear your mind' and include 'the'.'{

× 'I would like to take a long walk in for it because I enjoy seeing wildlife such as deer and birds and listening to the bird song and the rustle of leaves.'

✓ 'I would like to take a long walk there because I enjoy seeing wildlife such as deer and birds and listening to birdsong and the rustle of leaves.'

'in for it' is incorrect and unclear; use 'there' to refer to the suggested location. 'the bird song' should be 'birdsong' (or 'the birdsong') and 'birdsong' is more natural as a compound. Remove unnecessary article before 'birdsong'. Suggestion: use clear demonstrative 'there' and natural noun forms like 'birdsong'.'{

× 'Recently I walk to school because the weather was nice and I want some fresh air to feel refreshed.'

✓ 'Recently I walked to school because the weather was nice and I wanted some fresh air to feel refreshed.'

'Recently' with past context requires past simple 'walked' not present 'walk'. Also maintain past tense 'wanted' to match 'was nice'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent in past narratives.'

× 'It only took about 20 minutes and I enjoyed listening to music on my headphones the whole way.'

✓ 'It only took about 20 minutes and I enjoyed listening to music on my headphones the whole way.'

'This sentence is correct. The past tense 'took' and 'enjoyed' correctly describe a completed recent action.'