Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và ngắn gọn; sửa ngữ pháp và thứ tự từ; tránh lặp từ. Dùng 2–3 câu tối đa: khẳng định rồi thêm lý do cụ thể (thể chất/ tinh thần) và tần suất.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk and jog regularly. I usually jog three times a week because it helps my physical fitness and reduces stress, improving my overall wellbeing.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng, tránh tiếng ngập ngừng và câu không hợp lý. Nên nêu tần suất, hoạt động cụ thể và lý do (chơi, giúp gia đình), tối đa 2–3 câu.

Ejemplo: Yes, I went outside a lot as a child. I often played with friends in the neighborhood and sometimes helped my family with small jobs, so I spent many afternoons outdoors.

Sugerencia: Cần diễn đạt mạch lạc, dùng liên từ để liệt kê lý do và cụ thể hóa lợi ích (không khí, yên tĩnh, an toàn). Tránh từ không đúng/khó hiểu. Giữ 2–3 câu rõ ràng.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because the open space and fresh air feel relaxing. Also, parks offer a peaceful environment and safe paths, making them ideal for exercise and socializing.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, tránh nói phủ định dài dòng. Nêu địa điểm rõ ràng và giải thích cụ thể vì sao (cảnh đẹp, thiên nhiên, yên tĩnh). Giữ tối đa 2–3 câu, sửa ngữ pháp và loại bỏ tiếng ngập ngừng.

Ejemplo: I would like to take a long walk in a national park. The natural scenery and quiet trails would be refreshing and give me a chance to disconnect from city life.

Sugerencia: Cần dùng thì quá khứ cho câu hỏi 'lately', trả lời rõ địa điểm và tần suất, mô tả cụ thể hơn về không khí. Tránh lỗi từ và tiếng ngập ngừng; 2–3 câu là đủ.

Ejemplo: Lately I walked on a riverside path near my hometown. Many local people jog and enjoy the lively morning atmosphere, which makes the route pleasant and friendly.

× Going jogging is one of my big passion which I consider in close mental health values enhancing my health as well my well-being as well.

✓ Going jogging is one of my big passions, which I consider closely related to mental health, enhancing my health and my well-being.

Error: incorrect use of -ing form and noun number and sentence structure. 'Going jogging' is fine as a gerund phrase but 'one of my big passion' should be 'one of my big passions' (plural). 'which I consider in close mental health values' is ungrammatical; use 'closely related to mental health' to express the intended relationship. Also 'enhancing my health as well my well-being as well' repeats 'as well' and needs parallel structure: 'enhancing my health and my well-being'. Suggestion: check noun agreement after 'one of', avoid redundant phrases, and use clear relative clauses.

× Absolutely, hanging outside when I was a kid was one of my popular activity 'cause I had to make ends meet by umm, engaging some part time jobs.

✓ Absolutely, hanging outside when I was a kid was one of my popular activities because I had to make ends meet by engaging in some part-time jobs.

Errors: noun number and verb/preposition usage. 'one of my popular activity' should be 'one of my popular activities' (singular/plural agreement). 'cause' should be 'because' in formal correction. 'engaging some part time jobs' requires the preposition 'in' and hyphenation 'part-time'. Suggestion: ensure correct plurality after 'one of', include necessary prepositions with 'engaging', and use standard spelling.

× Walking in parks brings a sense of comfort to every person because, uh, they enclose large spaces, cringes variant atmosphere with variety of people enjoying, umm, the morning or.

✓ Walking in parks brings a sense of comfort to many people because they include large open spaces and a varied atmosphere with a variety of people enjoying the morning.

Errors: incorrect preposition and verb choice. 'they enclose large spaces' is odd—use 'include' or 'have' and 'open spaces'. 'cringes variant atmosphere' is meaningless; use 'a varied atmosphere'. 'every person' is too absolute; 'many people' is more natural. Also remove trailing 'or'. Suggestion: choose appropriate verbs for physical features ('include', 'have'), use 'varied' for adjective, and avoid vague or incorrect words.

× Take it a long walk is not my cup of tea uh, but if I had the the chance, I would like to, uh, take a long walk in the park National Park 'cause it Rea.

✓ Taking a long walk is not my cup of tea, but if I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk in a national park because it is relaxing.

Errors: gerund phrase and sentence order. 'Take it a long walk' is ungrammatical; use 'Taking a long walk'. Remove duplicate 'the the'. 'park National Park' is word order error—use 'a national park' or 'the national park'. 'Rea' is incomplete; likely 'relaxing'. Suggestion: use gerund for activities as subjects, fix article and word order, and complete adjectives.

× Recently I enjoy working on the path umm nearby my hometown is the long way for every residence. Local people enjoying the vibrant atmosphere of the morning.

✓ Recently I have enjoyed walking on the path near my hometown; it is a long route for local residents. Local people enjoy the vibrant morning atmosphere.

Errors: tense and sentence fragments. 'Recently I enjoy' should use present perfect 'I have enjoyed' to indicate a recent experience. 'working on the path' is wrong verb—use 'walking'. 'nearby my hometown' needs 'near my hometown'. 'is the long way for every residence' is ungrammatical; use 'it is a long route for local residents'. Second sentence is a fragment: 'Local people enjoying' should be 'Local people enjoy'. Suggestion: choose correct tense for recent experiences, use appropriate verbs, correct prepositional phrases, and ensure each sentence has a finite verb.