Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời rõ ý nhưng có nhiều tiếng lấp (um, uh, like), lỗi ngữ pháp (work → walk), và lặp từ, câu quá dài. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sửa lỗi động từ, giảm tiếng ngắt quãng và chia thành 2 câu tối đa. Dùng từ nối hợp lý (because, so) và từ vựng chính xác (commute, walk, bus stop).

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk quite a lot. I usually walk from my house to the bus stop because it is a bit far, so I end up walking a long way every day.

Sugerencia: Nhiều lỗi về thì (go → went), lặp từ, và câu thiếu rõ ràng, từ vựng bị dùng sai (take a flower). Tránh lặp “when I was a child”. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ở quá khứ, dùng thêm chi tiết cụ thể và liên kết (for example, and).

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went for walks when I was a child. For example, my grandmother would wake me up early and we would walk together in the neighborhood, picking flowers and looking at birds.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời thiếu chính xác và có lỗi từ vựng/ngữ pháp (working in past → walking in parks, relax their mind → relax). Có tiếng ngắt quãng. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, nêu 2 lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ (because, and) và từ vựng phù hợp (relax, fresh air, exercise, scenery).

Ejemplo: I think people enjoy walking in parks because it helps them relax and reduce stress, and they can enjoy fresh air and pleasant scenery while getting light exercise.

Sugerencia: Ý tưởng rõ nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp (want → would like, don't have → doesn't have, pit peaceful → be peaceful, sceneries → scenery). Cần cấu trúc điều kiện chính xác (If I had the chance, I would...). Dùng mô tả cụ thể, tránh lặp, tối đa 2-3 câu.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk in a quiet countryside area that isn't crowded and is peaceful. I would enjoy walking among trees and flowers and admiring the natural scenery.

Sugerencia: Có sự lẫn lộn thì và tên không cần thiết (Lilly). Sử dụng thì quá khứ cho hành động đã xảy ra (went/ have gone) và giải thích rõ lý do. Giảm tiếng ngắt quãng, dùng từ chính xác (stress, relax).

Ejemplo: Lately I have been walking in the park near my house because I have been feeling stressed about this test. Walking there helps me relax and clear my mind.

× Yes, I work a lot every day because like, umm, I go to school by bus, but uh, the bus stop is a little bit far from my house so I often like walk for a long time from my house to my to the bus stop and then go to school.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot every day because I go to school by bus, but the bus stop is a little far from my house, so I often walk a long way from my house to the bus stop and then go to school.

The speaker mixes verbs and uses 'work' instead of 'walk' and redundant fillers. Use simple present for habitual actions: 'I walk', 'I go', 'I often walk'. Remove filler words and repeated phrases for clarity. Use 'a little far' or 'a little bit far' can be simplified to 'a little far' or better 'a bit far'.

× Yes, I often go outside to have a walk when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I often went outside to have a walk when I was a child.

The time frame 'when I was a child' refers to the past, so the verb should be in past tense 'went' rather than present 'go'. Maintain past tense consistency for past habits.

× When I was a child, uh, my grandma often woke wake me up early in the morning and like go for a walk with me in one walk.

✓ When I was a child, my grandma often woke me up early in the morning and took me for a walk.

Use past tense verbs consistently: 'woke' is correct but 'wake' is wrong. Also use a suitable verb for accompanying someone: 'took me for a walk' rather than 'go for a walk with me in one walk'. Remove filler 'uh, like' for clarity.

× While walking we often take a flower or see some.

✓ While walking we often picked flowers or saw some.

The sentence refers to past habitual actions, so verbs should be past: 'picked' and 'saw'. Also use plural 'flowers' and clarify object: 'saw some' should be 'saw some flowers'.

× I think because, uh, working in past help people to relax their mind and they can breathe fresh air so they like to walk in.

✓ I think that walking in parks helps people relax their minds and breathe fresh air, so they like to walk there.

Use 'walking in parks' (noun phrase) and third person singular 'helps'. 'Relax their mind' is better as 'relax their minds'. Use 'there' to complete 'walk in' and maintain subject-verb agreement.

× If I had a chance, I want to take a walk in somewhere that don't have too much people and pit peaceful and also I want to see the sceneries around that place.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to take a walk somewhere that doesn't have too many people and is peaceful, and I would like to see the scenery around that place.

In conditional type 2, use 'If I had..., I would...'. Use 'doesn't have' for singular 'somewhere' and 'too many people' (plural). 'Pit peaceful' seems to be 'be peaceful' so use 'is peaceful'. 'Scenery' is an uncountable noun not 'sceneries'.

× So I wish that place have a lot of flowers and trees.

✓ So I wish that place had a lot of flowers and trees.

After 'I wish' to express a hypothetical contrary-to-fact present, use past tense 'had'. Alternatively 'I hope that place has' uses present. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'place had'.

× Lilly, I often go for a walk in the park near my house because these days I feel a little stressed because of this IO test.

✓ Lately, I often go for a walk in the park near my house because these days I feel a little stressed because of this IO test.

Use 'Lately' rather than 'Lilly' (likely misheard name). 'I often go' is acceptable with 'these days' (present habit) but 'lately' fits better. Keep present simple for current habitual action: 'I often go' and 'I feel' are correct together.

× So umm, I think walking made me feel relaxed.

✓ So, umm, I think walking makes me feel relaxed.

The speaker refers to a general present effect of walking, so use present simple 'makes' not past 'made'. Maintain tense consistency with 'I think' (present).