Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Give a direct, concise answer first (Yes/No), then briefly explain one clear reason. Avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences. Keep to 2–3 sentences, use correct verbs and phrases (e.g. "work outside" → "work outdoors" or "walk"), and finish your thought.

Ejemplo: No, I don't walk much. I work in an office all day, so I usually commute by bus and prefer to rest after work instead of walking.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I did), then provide 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words (e.g. "because", "for example"). Avoid vague phrases and incomplete endings. Use past tense consistently and precise vocabulary (e.g. "spent many great times" → "had many great times").

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went outside as a child because my friends and I loved playing in the park. For example, we would climb trees, play tag, and have picnics nearly every weekend.

Sugerencia: Answer directly (People like walking in parks because...). Use clear reasons with linking words (e.g. "Firstly", "Secondly", "because") and avoid redundant phrasing. Use natural collocations ("relax after a long day", "stay fit"), and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because it helps them relax after a long day at work and reduces stress. Also, parks provide fresh air and space for gentle exercise, which helps people stay fit.

Sugerencia: Give one clear location and briefly explain why with specific details. Avoid mixing different places (Dalian vs Shanghai) and unnecessary words like "once". Keep it within 2–3 sentences and use natural phrases ("sea promenade", "scenic views").

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I'd take a long walk along the seaside promenade in Dalian because the fresh sea breeze and scenic views are very relaxing. I would spend an afternoon there enjoying the water and watching boats pass by.

Sugerencia: Answer briefly and clearly (e.g. "I walked on campus"). Provide one specific detail about the experience and use correct collocations ("on campus", "welcomed by students" or "surrounded by lively students"). Avoid awkward phrasing like "overwhelmed by the hospitality and the use of the university students" and incorrect tense or articles.

Ejemplo: Recently I walked alone on my university campus. I felt surrounded by lively students and their friendliness made me feel young again.

× To be honest, I seldom work outside and because of the too much walking burdens, uh, for example in the daytime I have to finish the jobs in my office and after it I will go to my.

✓ To be honest, I seldom work outside because of the excessive burden of walking; for example, during the daytime I have to finish my work in the office and after that I will go home.

Errors: misuse of articles ('the too much walking burdens' is ungrammatical), incorrect noun forms ('jobs' -> 'work'), wrong phrase 'after it' -> 'after that', sentence fragment 'go to my' -> 'go home'. Suggestion: use 'the' only with specific nouns, replace 'too much' + plural with 'excessive burden' or 'too much walking' (uncountable), use 'work' for general tasks, and use 'after that' for sequence; complete the phrase 'go home'. Keep verb tenses present simple for habits.

× I still remember I like to play outside a lot when I was very young and my friend and I spent a very many great times together in the parks or the gardens because outside we could do a lot of.

✓ I still remember that I liked to play outside a lot when I was very young, and my friend and I spent many great times together in the parks or gardens because outside we could do a lot.

Errors: tense inconsistency ('I like' should be past 'I liked' to match 'when I was very young'); 'a very many great times' is incorrect quantifier order—use 'many great times'; 'the parks or the gardens' – definite article unnecessary when speaking generally; sentence ends incomplete 'do a lot of' – add 'of things' or leave as 'do a lot'. Suggestion: maintain past tense for past memories, use correct quantifiers and complete noun phrases.

× For this question, different people will have different various answers.

✓ For this question, different people will have various answers.

Error: redundant modifiers 'different various'—both mean similar things; choose one. Suggestion: use a single adjective before the noun, e.g., 'different answers' or 'various answers'.

× Some of them maybe think it's a very good way to relax after the tired and long day in the office and some of them may think it's a very good way to keep fit cause walking outside can keep our figure.

✓ Some of them may think it's a very good way to relax after a long, tiring day in the office, and others may think it's a very good way to keep fit because walking outside can help maintain our figure.

Errors: word order and adjective choice 'the tired and long day' -> 'a long, tiring day'; modal 'maybe' placement and duplication 'some of them maybe' should be 'may'; conjunction punctuation; 'cause' informal; 'keep our figure' -> 'help maintain our figure'. Suggestion: use 'may' for possibility, proper adjective order, and 'because' for formal explanation.

× Once, if I had the chance, I'd like to take a long walk along the sea in Dalian, especially a very famous Shanghai park.

✓ If I had the chance, I'd like to take a long walk along the sea in Dalian, or visit a famous park in Shanghai.

Errors: mixed locations (Dalian and Shanghai) and awkward 'once' and 'especially a very famous Shanghai park' which conflicts with 'along the sea in Dalian'. Suggestion: clarify the intended place; remove 'once' (unnecessary) and keep conditional structure 'If I had the chance'. Ensure consistency of location.

× Many local people like walking on the scenic promenade because of the refreshing sea breeze and the lovely views, and I think it's very good to spend an afternoon.

✓ Many local people like walking along the scenic promenade because of the refreshing sea breeze and the lovely views, and I think it's a very nice way to spend an afternoon.

Error: preposition 'on' is less appropriate than 'along' for a promenade; 'very good to spend an afternoon' is awkward—use 'a very nice way to spend an afternoon'. Suggestion: choose 'along' for linear places and a natural expression for enjoyment.

× Recently I walked alone in my university's campus.

✓ Recently I walked alone on my university campus.

Errors: 'walked' with 'recently' is acceptable (past simple), but preposition 'in' vs 'on'—use 'on campus' or 'around campus'; 'university's campus' is awkward—'my university campus' is natural. Suggestion: use 'on my university campus' or 'around campus' for idiomatic expression.

× During the way, I was overwhelmed by the hospitality and the use of the university students.

✓ Along the way, I was overwhelmed by the hospitality and friendliness of the university students.

Errors: 'During the way' incorrect prepositional phrase—use 'along the way' or 'on the way'; 'the use of the university students' is incorrect—intended 'friendliness' or 'warmth'. Suggestion: choose correct nouns to express qualities (hospitality, friendliness) and correct prepositional phrase.

× It seemed likes I was as young as them.

✓ It seemed like I was as young as they were.

Errors: 'seemed likes' incorrect form—use 'seemed like' or 'it seemed that'; 'as young as them' should be 'as young as they were' for proper subject pronoun and verb or 'as young as them' is colloquial but less formal. Suggestion: use 'seemed like' and correct comparative clause subject and verb for formal speech.