Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitation ('uh', 'umm'), correct grammar (use 'swells' not 'gets swelled'), and give one brief reason. Use a linking word if adding extra detail.

Ejemplo: Not really. I prefer resting because my feet tend to swell after a lot of activity, so I avoid long walks. However, I try to do short walks occasionally for my health.

Sugerencia: Improve tense consistency and grammar. Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence, reduce repetition, and give a specific reason with linking words. Use correct plural/singular forms.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often walked outside as a child because we didn't have a car at home and public transport was rare, so walking was the main way to get around.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and refine vocabulary. Start with a general statement, use linking words to add reasons, and correct word choice ('parks are designed for exercise'). Provide one specific example.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because parks are designed for recreation, and they offer safe paths and fresh air. For example, many families enjoy a morning walk while children play nearby.

Sugerencia: Be more precise and fluent. Use correct forms and avoid hesitation. State the place clearly, give a reason, and link ideas coherently. Correct phrases like 'greenery areas' to 'green areas' and name places clearly.

Ejemplo: I'd like to take a long walk in a green valley with my husband because he enjoys walking; for instance, we would love to visit Kaghan Valley to enjoy the scenery and take a long stroll together.

Sugerencia: Use past tense for 'lately' and correct location phrasing ('on the roof' or 'on the rooftop'). Reduce hesitations and avoid vague statements; give a concise description and one specific detail about your activity. Avoid saying 'gossips' as it sounds informal—use 'chat' or 'talk'.

Ejemplo: Recently we walked on the rooftop of our building. My husband usually walks for about half an hour and we chat about our day and current events while we walk.

× No, I don't like walking, I just, uh, like to take rest and umm, when I do much work my foot gets swelled.

✓ No, I don't like walking; I just like to rest, and when I do a lot of work my foot swells.

The phrase 'take rest' is not idiomatic in English; use 'rest'. 'Do much work' should be 'do a lot of work'. 'Gets swelled' is incorrect: 'swell' is an intransitive verb meaning 'to become larger', so use the simple present 'swells' for habitual actions. This corrects verb form and usage. Grammar problem type ID:9

× Yes, I often go outside to walk when I was child because in my childhood there are there are no car in my home or public transport is very rare so I use walk.

✓ Yes, I often went outside to walk when I was a child because there were no cars at my home and public transport was very rare, so I used to walk.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses. For past habits use past simple 'went' and 'used to walk'. 'When I was child' needs an article: 'a child'. 'There are there are no car' should be past plural agreement: 'there were no cars'. Also use 'at my home' or 'in my hometown'. This fixes tense, plurality, and articles. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Because Parker is made for exercise, people often do exercise like running in parks, so they like to walk in parks.

✓ Because parks are designed for exercise, people often do activities like running there, so they like to walk in parks.

'Parker' is incorrect; use 'parks'. 'Is made for exercise' is awkward; 'are designed for exercise' is more natural. 'Do exercise like running' should be 'do activities like running' or 'exercise, such as running'. Also maintain plural agreement 'parks are'. This corrects word choice and agreement. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I would go in a greenery areas with my husband because my husband loves walk so I would go for an orang Kagan Valley for umm A brief walk.

✓ I would go to a green area with my husband because he loves walking, so I would go to the beautiful Kaghan Valley for a brief walk.

Use 'go to' not 'go in' for destinations. 'Greenery areas' should be 'green area' (adjective before noun). 'Loves walk' requires the gerund: 'loves walking'. 'Go for an orang' unclear; likely 'beautiful Kaghan Valley'. Also use article 'a brief walk'. This fixes prepositions, adjective order, and gerund use. Grammar problem type ID:11

× We often go on roof for walking with my husband he because he loves walking. He lo he walks about half an hour and we do lots of talks about people and gossips.

✓ We often go onto the roof to walk together because my husband loves walking. He walks for about half an hour, and we have many conversations about people and gossip.

'Go on roof for walking' should be 'go onto the roof to walk'; use infinitive 'to walk' for purpose. Remove redundant words and correct pronoun placement: 'with my husband' becomes 'together' or 'with my husband'. 'He lo he walks' is fragmented; use 'He walks for about half an hour'. 'Do lots of talks' is unnatural; use 'have many conversations' or 'talk a lot'. 'Gossips' should be 'gossip' (uncountable). This addresses tense, prepositions, and word choice. Grammar problem type ID:6