Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Clarify and correct vocabulary and grammar, keep answer natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., ‘Yes, I walk a lot’), then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear words like ‘Lord’ if you meant ‘around’ or ‘outdoors’.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I don’t own a car or bicycle, so walking is my main way to get around, and it keeps me healthy. Also, I enjoy noticing interesting sights and small details on my routes.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and form complete sentences. Begin with a clear topic sentence about childhood habit, then give two specific supporting details with linking words (e.g., ‘because’, ‘for example’). Avoid fragments and filler words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often walked outdoors as a child. My home was surrounded by natural scenery, so I frequently hiked in nearby mountains and explored the forest, which helped me develop a love for observing plants and animals.

Sugerencia: Give a concise topic sentence and then two clear, connected reasons with examples. Use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., ‘birds’, ‘wildlife’) and avoid repetition and unfinished endings. Use linking words such as ‘because’ and ‘for example’.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because it reduces stress and allows them to connect with nature. For example, they can watch birds and small animals among the plants, and the peaceful environment helps clear the mind.

Sugerencia: Answer directly using a conditional sentence and correct verb forms. Provide one specific reason and perhaps a brief detail about what you would do there. Keep it to two or three sentences and avoid hesitation words.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would go hiking in the Blue Mountains. I’d like to explore the trails and enjoy the rich natural scenery, especially the views from the peaks.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and be specific about activities. Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then add one or two concrete details about what you did and how you felt. Avoid hesitations and informal fillers.

Ejemplo: Yesterday I went to Biggie Park, a large green space near my home. I walked around the paths and used the outdoor exercise equipment to do pull-ups, which was really enjoyable.

× I don't have cars and bicycles.

✓ I don't have a car or a bicycle.

Use singular nouns after 'have' when referring to not owning a single example of each item; use 'or' to list alternatives. Plural 'cars and bicycles' implies multiple of each, which is unlikely here. Suggestion: decide singular or plural based on meaning (e.g., 'cars and bicycles' if you mean many).

× I prefer walking because it's healthy and I can notice a lot of interesting things in the Lord.

✓ I prefer walking because it's healthy and I can notice a lot of interesting things around me.

'In the Lord' is an incorrect prepositional phrase here and changes meaning; likely intended 'around' or 'around me'. Use preposition 'around' to indicate the surrounding environment. Ensure the prepositional phrase matches intended meaning.

× Yes, I enjoy walking outside.

✓ Yes, I enjoyed walking outside when I was a child.

The examiner asked about past habits ('when you were a child'), so the response should use past tense. 'Enjoy' is present; change to 'enjoyed' to match the past timeframe. Ensure tense matches the time reference in the question.

× When I was a child my house is surrounded by the rich nature environment.

✓ When I was a child, my house was surrounded by rich natural scenery.

Mixes past reference with present tense 'is'. Also 'rich nature environment' is awkward. Use past tense 'was' and a natural noun phrase such as 'rich natural scenery' or 'a rich natural environment'. Add a comma after the subordinate clause for clarity.

× A lot of walking in the mountain and the forest.

✓ I used to walk a lot in the mountains and the forest.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb. Add subject 'I' and past-tense verb phrase 'used to walk' to express habitual past action. Use plural 'mountains' for general area and include conjunction 'and' correctly.

× Umm, I really love the observing nature things.

✓ Umm, I really love observing nature.

'The observing nature things' is ungrammatical: 'observing' should directly take the object 'nature' and 'things' is unnecessary. Drop 'the' and 'things' and use 'observing nature' or 'observing natural things' if specific items are meant.

× Walking in the parks makes you relaxed and you can enjoy watching a lot of things like Bard small animals in the plants and additionally our walking in the park makes you clear your mind.

✓ Walking in parks makes you relaxed and allows you to enjoy watching many small birds and animals in the plants; additionally, walking in the park clears your mind.

Several issues: 'the parks' is unnecessary when speaking generally—use 'parks'. 'Bard' is likely 'bird' and word order 'small birds' is correct. 'A lot of things' is vague—'many' fits better. 'Our walking' is awkward; use gerund phrase 'walking' or 'walking in the park clears your mind.' Use 'clears' for present-tense general truth. Also add punctuation to avoid run-on sentence.

× Ah yes, if I had the chance I want to go hiking in the Blue Mountain.

✓ Ah yes, if I had the chance I would like to go hiking in the Blue Mountains.

In a hypothetical conditional ('if I had the chance'), use conditional form 'would like' not present 'want'. Also 'Blue Mountain' likely refers to a range—use 'Blue Mountains' and 'go hiking' is fine. This matches the unreal present conditional structure.

× Uh, I think it's a good opportunity to enjoy a rich natural environment.

✓ Uh, I think it would be a good opportunity to enjoy a rich natural environment.

Because this follows the conditional 'if I had the chance,' maintain conditional mood: 'it would be' rather than simple present 'it is'. The article 'a' is acceptable before 'rich natural environment'.

× Yes, I enjoy walking around the park and I did exercise using the device in the park.

✓ Yes, I enjoyed walking around the park and I exercised using the equipment in the park.

The question asked about a specific past occasion ('Where did you go for a walk lately?'). Use past tense 'enjoyed' and 'exercised'. Also 'device' is odd for park equipment—'equipment' is more natural. Avoid mixing past simple with auxiliary 'did' unnecessarily; use simple past.

× Yeah, I did pull up.

✓ Yeah, I did some pull-ups.

Use plural noun 'pull-ups' to refer to the exercise. 'Did pull up' is awkward; 'did some pull-ups' or 'did pull-ups' is natural in past context. Keep past tense auxiliary 'did' or use 'I did some pull-ups' to state the action.