Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and relevant: state whether you walk a lot, give a brief reason, and avoid unrelated words. Use correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g. 'work' is incorrect here). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot because I don't own a car, so I usually travel on foot to nearby places. Walking is convenient and also helps me stay active.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly: say yes or no, then give a specific supporting detail or example. Avoid fillers like 'uh' and vague words like 'maybe.' Use past tense consistently.

Ejemplo: No, I didn't walk alone much as a child. I usually went out with my parents or siblings to play in the neighbourhood park on weekends.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence, then 1–2 specific supporting reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (plural/singular, articles) and finish thoughts. Keep it concise and natural.

Ejemplo: People enjoy walking in parks because they offer a peaceful environment where you can relax and breathe fresh air. Moreover, parks provide space to talk with friends or exercise, which improves both mood and health.

Sugerencia: Address the hypothetical question directly: name a specific place and explain why, using conditional language correctly. Avoid asking the examiner questions in response.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the seaside promenade because I enjoy the sea breeze and the open views, which help me relax and think clearly.

Sugerencia: Give a clear past-tense answer with specific details and correct word choices (e.g. 'sky' not 'skins'), and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep it concise.

Ejemplo: Last weekend I went for a walk in the evening along the river. The sky was beautiful and the sunset was stunning, which made me feel calm and refreshed.

× People like to walk in parks because I think parks is a place where we relax and feel calm as well.

✓ People like to walk in parks because I think parks are places where we relax and feel calm as well.

The noun 'parks' is plural, so it must agree with a plural verb and plural noun phrase. Using 'is a place' after 'parks' creates a mismatch. Change to 'parks are places' to match plurality. Suggestion: make subjects and verbs/noun complements agree in number.

× In parks, the person can talk with each other freely and make a.

✓ In parks, people can talk with each other freely and have conversations.

The phrase 'the person' is singular while 'each other' requires plural; this is a pronoun/reference mismatch. Also the verb phrase 'make a' is incomplete. Replace 'the person' with 'people' and complete the idea to 'have conversations' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I don't have any personal vehicles so I work a lot when I go outside.

✓ I don't have any personal vehicles so I walk a lot when I go outside.

The student used 'work a lot' which is likely incorrect choice of verb given context; presuming intended meaning 'walk a lot'. If 'work' were intended, it would be fine but context of walking question implies wrong verb. This is a lexical issue rather than third-person inflection; however if treating as third person singular, there is no agreement error here. Suggestion: use the correct verb 'walk' to match the question context.

× No, I think, uh, generally I go with my family when I go outside. Uh, maybe.

✓ No, I think generally I go out with my family when I go outside.

The original is awkward with repeated 'go' and filler words. Use 'go out with my family' to express habitual present action. Present tense 'go' is acceptable; remove redundant words for clarity. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary fillers and repetition.

× So I would like to take a long walk if I had the chance. Is the place nearby my house?

✓ I would like to take a long walk if I had the chance. Is the place near my house?

The first sentence mixes conditional correctly (would + past), but beginning with 'So' is unnecessary. In the question, 'nearby' is an adverb; when asking about location relative to 'my house' use 'near my house' (adjective/prepositional). Suggestion: use 'near my house' for correct prepositional use.

× Just last weekend's I went for a walk lately in night the the skins were so beautiful and the sunset was so stunning at night which makes my body feel calm and mind refreshed.

✓ Just last weekend I went for a walk at night; the skies were so beautiful and the sunset was so stunning that it made my body feel calm and my mind refreshed.

Multiple tense and word choice errors: remove incorrect possessive 'weekend's' and redundant 'lately'. Use 'at night' for time of day. 'Skins' is a wrong word; correct is 'skies'. 'Which makes' should match past: use 'that it made' to keep past tense consistent. Also add 'my' before 'mind' and use parallel structure 'made my body feel calm and my mind feel refreshed' (or 'made my body feel calm and my mind refreshed'). Suggestion: keep tense consistent, correct vocabulary, and fix possessive/temporal expressions.