Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly ungrammatical. Start with a concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific details with linking words. Correct small errors (e.g. “in my goals” → “as a goal” or “my goal is to”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot as part of my daily routine. In fact, my goal is to take about 10,000 steps each day, which helps me stay fit and energetic.

Sugerencia: The idea is understandable but grammar and coherence need work. Use past tense consistently, give a clear topic sentence, and add one concise reason using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “doesn't have habits or about exercise.”

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t walk regularly as a child. Because my mother wasn’t active and we didn’t have an exercise routine at home, I rarely went out for walks.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but contains many mistakes and unclear words. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons linked with connectors. Use correct vocabulary (e.g. “walk” not “work”, “fresh air”, “relaxing environment”).

Ejemplo: People like to walk in parks because the environment is peaceful and the air is fresh. Also, parks offer a chance to meet others and enjoy nature, which makes walking more pleasant.

Sugerencia: The response lacks clarity and contains unfinished phrases. Give a direct answer naming a place, then add a clear reason with linking words. Avoid repetition (“long, long”) and remove unclear fragments like “Research my.”

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the large city park nearby. I enjoy walking there every day because the trails are peaceful and help me clear my mind.

Sugerencia: This answer is relevant and specific but needs better grammar and a clearer structure. Start with a direct topic sentence in past tense, then add a specific detail and result using linking words like “so” or “and”. Replace “aim” with “goal” and use proper word order.

Ejemplo: I walked in the park near my home yesterday. I followed my exercise routine and managed to reach almost 12,000 steps, which made me feel very satisfied.

× Yes I do and walking is part of my daily routine and inside my goal I have to walk almost 10,000 steps every day.

✓ Yes, I do. Walking is part of my daily routine, and as part of my goal I aim to walk almost 10,000 steps every day.

The original sentence has tense and phrasing issues: 'inside my goal' is incorrect and 'have to walk' is awkward with 'goal'. Use present simple for habits ('I do', 'Walking is part of my routine'), and 'aim to' expresses a goal. Add punctuation and conjunctions for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:6

× No, when I was a child, I don't have a routine.

✓ No. When I was a child, I didn't have a routine.

The time adverbial 'when I was a child' sets the context in the past, so the verb must be in the past tense ('didn't have') rather than present ('don't have'). Grammar problem type ID:5

× My mom, she's a quiet person and she doesn't have habits or about exercise.

✓ My mom is a quiet person and she didn't have habits related to exercise.

The original mixes present and past and uses awkward structure 'doesn't have habits or about exercise.' Use one clear clause: 'My mom is a quiet person' (present general trait) and 'she didn't have habits related to exercise' (past behavior). Adjust tense for consistency with context about childhood. Grammar problem type ID:12

× That's why I didn't do that.

✓ That's why I didn't do that.

This sentence is correct in tense and meaning when referring to past habit; no change needed. Note: kept for completeness because it relates to past context. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I consider people like to work in parks because they are they it is. Fresh area that allow you breathe fresh air and connect with other people that are doing the same.

✓ I think people like to walk in parks because they are fresh areas that allow you to breathe fresh air and to connect with other people who are doing the same.

The original has many sentence structure problems: 'I consider' is unnatural here; use 'I think'. 'work' should be 'walk'. Fragments 'they are they it is' are nonsensical. Use plural agreement 'areas' and add infinitives 'to breathe' and 'to connect'. Use 'who' for people, and 'allow you to breathe' for correct verb patterns. Grammar problem type ID:26

× There is a park nearby and I like to go.

✓ There is a park nearby that I like to go to.

The phrase 'I like to go' needs an object or a preposition to indicate destination: 'go to' the park. Combining the clauses with 'that' clarifies which park is meant. Grammar problem type ID:3

× I like going everyday to there to have a long, long walk that allows me to. Research my.

✓ I like going there every day to have a long walk that allows me to relax and reflect.

Problems: 'everyday' should be 'every day' (adverb vs adjective), word order 'going everyday to there' is incorrect — 'going there every day'. The fragment 'that allows me to. Research my.' is unclear; likely intended 'allows me to relax and reflect' or 'gives me time to think.' Replace with a clear verb phrase. Also remove redundant 'long, long'. Grammar problem type ID:20

× Talking about the park, nearby home and yesterday I was there doing my exercise routine and I could get my aim and I did almost 12,000 steps.

✓ Speaking about the nearby park, yesterday I was there doing my exercise routine and I reached my goal; I did almost 12,000 steps.

Use 'Speaking about' or 'Talking about' with proper word order. 'Nearby home' is incorrect; use 'nearby park' or 'the park near my home'. 'Could get my aim' is awkward — use 'reached my goal'. Keep past tense consistent for past events. Use semicolon or conjunction to connect clauses. Grammar problem type ID:6}]} PMID:6