Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 문장 구조와 동사 시제가 잘못 사용되었고, 질문에 직접적으로 답하지 않습니다. 불필요한 반복과 모호한 표현(„work/working/drive/low energy“)이 있어 의도가 분명하지 않습니다. 간단한 주제문으로 바로 답하고 1–2개의 구체적 이유나 빈도 표현을 연결사로 덧붙이세요. 예: I don’t walk much because I usually drive. 또한 어휘 선택(‘work’ 대신 ‘walk’)과 시제(현재습관은 현재형) 를 정확히 사용하세요.

Ejemplo: I don’t walk a lot because I usually drive my car to get around. However, I try to walk for about 20 minutes a few times a week for exercise, especially on weekends.

Sugerencia: 시제 혼동(현재/과거)과 불완전한 문장이 문제입니다. 질문은 과거習慣을 묻고 있으므로 단문으로 명확히 답한 뒤 연결어로 구체적 활동을 추가하세요. 장소와 빈도(예: often, usually)를 넣어 더 구체적으로 만드세요. 불필요한 중복을 피하고 문장을 끝까지 완성하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went outside to walk when I was a child. My family and I usually visited playgrounds or kids’ cafés on weekends, so I got plenty of outdoor time.

Sugerencia: 답변이 미완성이고 근거가 부족합니다. 이유를 하나 제시한 뒤 그 이유를 뒷받침하는 구체적 설명을 연결사로 제공하세요. 예: fresh air, relaxation, safety, scenery 등을 언급하세요. 말 더듬는 표현(umm)과 불필요한 서두(‘to be honest’)는 줄이세요.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because they offer fresh air and peaceful surroundings. For instance, parks often have trees and paths that help visitors relax and escape city noise.

Sugerencia: 질문은 가정적 상황을 묻고 있는데, 답변에 질문 오해(‘working’ 사용)와 문장 단절이 있습니다. 가정법 표현을 정확히 사용하고 장소를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 또한 이유를 하나 덧붙여서 응답을 길게 하되 2–3문장으로 제한하세요.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in Hyde Park in London. I’ve heard it’s very spacious and has beautiful lakes, so it would be a relaxing place to stroll.

Sugerencia: 문장이 매우 혼란스럽고 의미 전달이 불분명합니다(‘able to reverse’, ‘strip pictures’ 등 오용 어휘). 최근에 간 장소를 직접적으로 말하고, 이유(예: 사진 촬영)와 구체적 활동을 연결사로 덧붙이세요. 어휘를 정확히 사용하고 불필요한 반복/음성적 충어(uh, hmm) 를 줄이세요.

Ejemplo: Recently I went for a walk in the nearby park and along the main street. I went there to take candid photos of people and street scenes, which helps me practice photography.

× Oh, I'd like working a lot because I have a car, so I usually drive my car and I don't work anymore because it's really hard and.

✓ Oh, I'd like to work a lot because I have a car, so I usually drive my car and I don't walk much anymore because it's really tiring.

The phrase 'I'd like' should be followed by the base form of the verb (infinitive without to) not the -ing form; use 'I'd like to work' not 'I'd like working'. Also 'work' seems contextually wrong when referring to walking; 'walk' fits the meaning. Use 'tiring' (adjective) instead of 'hard' for naturalness. Suggestion: after 'I'd like' use 'to' + verb, and choose verbs consistent with context. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Uh, yes, actually, when I was a kid, I work, I'm work, I worked a lot with my family and we can go to the kids cafe or playground and school.

✓ Uh, yes, actually, when I was a kid, I worked a lot with my family and we could go to kids' cafes, playgrounds, and school.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses. When referring to childhood you must use past tense consistently: 'worked' not 'work' or 'I'm work'. Also modal 'can' should be past 'could' to match. Plural nouns like 'kids' cafes' and 'playgrounds' are more natural. Suggestion: keep past tense verbs for past events and use plural nouns where appropriate. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× MMM to be honest the park is really clear and natural so people umm usually enjoy going to the park because.

✓ To be honest, parks are usually clean and natural, so people enjoy going to them.

The original ends with an incomplete conjunction 'because' and has awkward word choice 'clear' for 'clean'. Also singular 'the park' is okay but plural 'parks' generalizes the idea. The sentence should not end with 'because' without completing the clause. Suggestion: complete the thought and avoid trailing conjunctions; use 'clean' rather than 'clear' when describing parks. Grammar problem type ID: 16

× Hmm, I really don't like working but umm, if I have the chance I go to the park. Located in London.

✓ Hmm, I really don't like walking, but if I have the chance I would go to a park located in London.

'Working' is incorrect in context; 'walking' fits the topic. The conditional needs 'would' for unreal or hypothetical situations ('if I had the chance, I would go'). 'Located in London' is a fragment; it should be attached to the noun phrase 'a park located in London'. Suggestion: use correct verb for topic, use proper conditional form (if + past, would + base) or 'if I have the chance, I will', and avoid sentence fragments. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Hmm. I'm able to reverse, so I usually I'll go to the near park and go to the street, uh, because I'm a candid photographer, so I usually strip pictures and a lot of people, Yeah. So yeah.

✓ Hmm. I am able to travel around, so I usually go to the nearby park and walk the streets, because I'm a candid photographer, so I usually shoot pictures of a lot of people.

Many errors: 'I'm able to reverse' is unclear; likely intended 'travel around' or 'move around'. Combine contractions properly: 'I usually I'll' is wrong; use 'I usually go' or 'I'll usually go'. 'Near park' should be 'nearby park'. 'Go to the street' is unnatural for walking streets; use 'walk the streets'. 'Strip pictures' is incorrect; the verb for taking photos is 'shoot' or 'take' pictures. Also ensure verb tense consistency (present habitual). Suggestion: choose clear verbs that match intended meaning, use 'nearby' for proximity, and use 'shoot/take pictures' for photography.