Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, correct grammar (verb forms, articles), avoid redundancy, and use linking words to add a brief supporting detail. Keep to fewer than five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk to school, which takes about 30 minutes, and I find it relaxing and a good form of exercise.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, fix past-tense consistency and vocabulary (e.g. ‘work’ → ‘walk’ or ‘play’, ‘devices’), and include a specific memory or brief example to make the answer more vivid.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I often played and walked with my friends after school; for example, we used to ride bikes and play football in the park because there were fewer electronic devices then.

Sugerencia: Good main idea but correct word choice (‘working’ → ‘walking’) and tighten phrasing. Use a linking phrase to list benefits and give a concise reason or example to support your view.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because the environment is pleasant; moreover, the fresh air and greenery help them relax and escape city noise.

Sugerencia: Use correct conditional grammar ('If I had the chance') and simplify the explanation. Be specific about what you would do and why. Avoid awkward phrases like ‘play the water with my knees’ — choose clearer verbs.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I'd take a long walk along the seaside because I enjoy walking on the sand and wading in the shallow water to relax.

Sugerencia: Good response with details. Fix small grammar issues (e.g. 'neighbourhood', 'my nieces really like to play there'), and use a linking phrase to connect ideas. Be slightly more concise.

Ejemplo: Lately I've been walking around the neighborhood. There is a big playground nearby where my nieces like to play, so I often go there in the evening to stretch my legs and unwind.

× Yes, I do work quite a lot in my daily life because I usually work to my school.

✓ Yes, I do walk quite a lot in my daily life because I usually walk to my school.

The student used 'work' incorrectly where the meaning is 'walk'. Also 'work to my school' is incorrect; the verb should be 'walk' and the preposition 'to' is fine with 'walk to my school'. Ensure verb choice matches intended meaning and use base form after auxiliary 'do' for emphasis: 'do walk' or simply 'walk'.

× It will takes me 30 minutes for a while and I also think it's relaxed and exercise way for me.

✓ It takes me about 30 minutes, and I also think it's a relaxing way to exercise for me.

'Will takes' is wrong: 'will' plus base verb required, and here simple present 'takes' is appropriate for habitual actions. 'Relaxed' should be the adjective 'relaxing' to describe the activity, and 'exercise way' needs article and form: 'a relaxing way to exercise'. Use correct verb forms for habits and correct adjective forms.

× When I was a child I usually went outside and work or play with my friends, especially after school.

✓ When I was a child I usually went outside and worked or played with my friends, especially after school.

The sentence mixes past ('went') with base forms 'work' and 'play'. For past habitual actions, all verbs should be in past tense: 'worked' and 'played'. Maintain consistent past tense in the clause.

× It was a simple way to relax and there were not many electronic diverse back then.

✓ It was a simple way to relax and there were not many electronic devices back then.

'Electronic diverse' is a wrong word choice; the correct noun is 'electronic devices'. 'Many' is fine with plural 'devices'. Use the correct noun and plural form to match quantifier.

× I think people like working in parks because the environment is more pleasant, there's more fresh air and greenery, which helps people relax and escape from the noise of the city for a while.

✓ I think people like walking in parks because the environment is more pleasant; there's more fresh air and greenery, which helps people relax and escape from the noise of the city for a while.

'Working in parks' is unlikely here; context implies 'walking'. Use the correct verb 'walking'. The rest of the sentence is fine; also punctuation adjusted for clarity. Ensure verb choice matches intended activity.

× If I has a chance, I'd like to take a long walk along the seaside on the beach because so that I can play the water with my knees, which it will be very interesting.

✓ If I had a chance, I'd like to take a long walk along the seaside because I could play in the water with my knees, which would be very interesting.

'If I has' is incorrect; conditional requires 'had'. 'Along the seaside on the beach' is redundant; 'along the seaside' or 'on the beach' is sufficient. 'So that I can' conflicts with conditional mood; use 'I could'. 'Play the water' is wrong preposition: use 'play in the water'. Remove unnecessary 'it' after 'which' and change 'will' to 'would' to match the conditional.

× Lately I've been taking walks around the neighborhoods.

✓ Lately I've been taking walks around the neighborhood.

'Neighborhoods' may be plural but context suggests a single local area; either is acceptable. Preferred correction makes noun singular 'neighborhood' to match 'around the area nearby'. Also present perfect continuous 'I've been taking' is correct for recent habitual action; no tense change needed. This suggestion refines noun choice rather than fixing a grammatical error.

× There's a big playground nearby and my nieces are really like to play together at there, so I sometimes go there in the evening to stretch my legs and unwind after a busy day.

✓ There's a big playground nearby and my nieces really like to play there together, so I sometimes go in the evening to stretch my legs and unwind after a busy day.

'Are really like to play' is ungrammatical; correct pattern is 'really like to play' or 'like playing'. Remove 'are'. 'At there' is incorrect; 'there' is sufficient. Also 'go there in the evening' can drop the second 'there' for smoother phrasing. Use correct verb phrase and pronoun/adverb placement.