Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering directly, then give one specific supporting reason and a brief consequence. Avoid repetition ('work' used several times) and keep within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Not really. I lead a mostly sedentary life because my job requires long hours at a computer, so I rarely find time for walks except short breaks during the day.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and then add one specific memory with a linking phrase. Avoid uncertain phrases like 'as told by my mother' unless necessary; be concise and coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I was very active as a child, and my mother often took me to the nearby garden where I would run, climb, and play with friends.

Sugerencia: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence and two coherent reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., 'love' not 'loves') and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Be specific and relevant.

Ejemplo: People walk in parks for several reasons. Firstly, it's good exercise and helps burn calories; secondly, walking outdoors improves mood and reduces stress because of the fresh air and scenery.

Sugerencia: Provide a complete, polished answer: state the place, give two clear reasons with linking words, and finish the sentence. Avoid vague phrases like 'earth's rhythm' unless clarified.

Ejemplo: I would choose to walk along the beach because I enjoy walking barefoot on the sand, which feels relaxing, and the sea breeze helps me clear my mind and reduce stress.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a short topic sentence, then give a specific detail about frequency or routine. Correct the mistaken phrase 'go to work outside' to 'go out' and be concise.

Ejemplo: I haven't walked outdoors much recently. Instead, I usually walk on the treadmill at my gym a few times a week to keep active.

× Not really, I usually leave a sedentary lifestyle because of my work commitments.

✓ Not really, I usually lead a sedentary lifestyle because of my work commitments.

The verb 'leave' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'lead' when talking about having/maintaining a lifestyle. Use present simple 'lead' to match 'usually' for habitual action. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 6)

× I have to stay most of the time working on screens so I don't usually work much.

✓ I have to sit most of the time working at a screen, so I don't usually move much.

'Stay' is inappropriate for describing being seated; 'sit' is correct. 'Working on screens' should be 'working at a screen' (or 'on screens') and 'work much' conflicts with context; 'move much' or 'exercise much' fits the intended meaning. Present simple and word choice are adjusted for clarity and habitual action. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 6)

× When I was a child, I was hyperactive, as told by my mother because I barely remember.

✓ When I was a child, I was hyperactive, or so my mother told me, because I barely remember it.

The phrase 'as told by my mother' is awkward; use 'or so my mother told me.' Also add 'it' after 'remember' for completeness. Maintain past tense throughout the clause. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 5)

× My mother used to take me for walking to the nearby garden where I used to work and play.

✓ My mother used to take me for walks to the nearby garden where I used to run and play.

'Take me for walking' is incorrect; use 'take me for walks.' 'Work and play' doesn't suit a child's activities in a garden; 'run and play' is more natural. Maintain past habitual 'used to'. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 8)

× Some people like, uh, walking because they want to burn their calories, while some others just loves walking because it improves their mood, their bike, enhancing the physical activity.

✓ Some people like walking because they want to burn calories, while others just love walking because it improves their mood and increases physical activity.

Remove unnecessary 'their' before 'calories'; use plural agreement 'others... love' not 'loves.' 'Their bike' is nonsensical here; replace with 'and increases physical activity.' Correct subject-verb agreement and pronoun use. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 12)

× If I had a chance of taking a long walk, I would prefer walking near the beach because I love walking barefoot and feel the earth's rhythm and sand on my feet as well as it improves my.

✓ If I had the chance to take a long walk, I would prefer walking near the beach because I love walking barefoot and feeling the sand under my feet, and it also improves my mood.

Use 'the chance' or 'a chance to' not 'a chance of taking.' Match verb forms: 'feeling the sand' (parallel gerund). Sentence was incomplete 'improves my' — specify 'mood.' Adjust for natural phrasing. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 12)

× I rarely go to work outside, so I try to do some walking exercises on my treadmill at the gym.

✓ I rarely go to work outside, so I try to do some walking exercises on a treadmill at the gym.

Original is mostly correct; change 'my treadmill' to 'a treadmill' if referring to gym equipment rather than personal possession at the gym. Maintain present simple for habitual action. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 6)