Keys— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and clear: state a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct word choice and grammar (e.g. ‘my young son’s house’ or remove unclear phrase). Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

Ejemplo: Yes. I usually carry several keys because I have keys for my apartment, my parents’ house and my office. For example, last week I had seven keys on my ring, which feels heavy and makes me worry about losing them.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear past example. Fix grammar and vocabulary mistakes (e.g. ‘I often forget things, especially keys’). Use linking words to explain consequences or feelings concisely.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. I often forget things, especially keys. Once I left them on a bus and had to call a friend to let me into my flat, which was really stressful.

Sugerencia: Give a coherent short story: start with a topic sentence saying whether it happens often, then give one clear specific past example with correct tense and complete sentences. Use linking words (e.g. ‘once’, ‘because’) and finish the thought (why it was difficult).

Ejemplo: Not often, but it has happened. For example, once when I was a child I accidentally locked myself out while my mother was inside the house; I had to wait outside until she opened the door, which was embarrassing and uncomfortable.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion then support it with one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct word choices (neighbour, reliable) and complete sentences. Mention an alternative solution briefly.

Ejemplo: No, I don't think it's a good idea unless you really trust them, because a neighbour might misplace the keys or not be available when needed. Instead, I prefer using a smart lock or leaving a spare key with a close family member.

× Um, yes, because I have keys of my house, my friend's house and my Young's house and there are really a lot keys and this is very stressful for me because I don't wanna lose those key and this is very stressful.

✓ Um, yes, because I have keys to my house, my friend's house and my young relative's house, and there are really a lot of keys, and this is very stressful for me because I don't want to lose those keys and it is very stressful.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'keys of' should be 'keys to'; incorrect possessive 'my Young's house' unclear and capitalized incorrectly — use 'my young relative's house' or correct name; missing article 'a lot keys' should be 'a lot of keys'; informal contraction 'wanna' -> 'want to' and inconsistent singular/plural 'those key' -> 'those keys'; repetition 'this is very stressful' left once. Suggestion: use 'keys to' for access, ensure correct possessive form and capitalization, include 'of' after 'a lot', maintain plural agreement, and use standard vocabulary.

× Of course, I am person who is really complicated and always forgot things, especially kiss, and this is really stressful for me and there is a very big obligation to have a lot of kids.

✓ Of course, I am a person who is really forgetful and always forgets things, especially keys, and this is really stressful for me, and there is a big obligation to have a lot of keys.

Errors: missing article 'a person'; 'complicated' misuse — use 'forgetful'; tense/agreement 'always forgot' should be present 'always forgets' because of habitual action; 'kiss' is a typo for 'keys'; 'there is a very big obligation to have a lot of kids' is incorrect meaning and word choice — likely 'keys'. Suggestion: add articles, use correct adjective 'forgetful', use third-person singular agreement for 'person' + 'who', correct typos, and ensure intended meaning ('keys') is used.

× Once when I was a child, I lost my keys and it. Have been in house and I was outside and this is really hard to remember this time because my mother was very.

✓ Once when I was a child, I lost my keys. They had been in the house while I was outside, and it is really hard to forget that time because my mother was very upset.

Errors: sentence fragments and incorrect verb forms. 'and it. Have been in house' is a fragment; use past perfect 'had been' to show keys were in the house before I realized; missing article 'the house'; 'this is really hard to remember this time' unclear — likely 'it is really hard to forget that time'; incomplete 'my mother was very' needs completion ('upset' or another adjective). Suggestion: combine fragments into complete sentences, use past perfect for earlier actions, include articles, and finish adjective phrases.

× I don't think so, because for example, if this person is is not someone who you rely on, this is hard to. Leave your keys with a neighborhood.

✓ I don't think so, because, for example, if this person is not someone you can rely on, it is hard to leave your keys with a neighbour.

Errors: duplicated 'is is'; incorrect clause 'someone who you rely on' -> 'someone you can rely on' adds modal/ability; fragment 'this is hard to.' should be 'it is hard to'; 'leave your keys with a neighborhood' wrong noun — use 'neighbour' or 'neighboring household'. Suggestion: remove duplicate words, use modal 'can' to indicate ability/trust, avoid sentence fragments, and use the correct noun for a person who lives nearby. British spelling 'neighbour' or American 'neighbor' — keep consistent.